Shivika TS: In Your Arms | Chapter 3 (last) - pg 16 | 08.21.2017 - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
Well girl, your hard work has really payed off.
Loved the ending.
You painted Shivaay's character perfectly.
Shivaay could not even think about someone coming near his Anika it's obvious that he will make the person who has made his Anika to go through all these suffering, both mental and physical, wish that he was never born in this world.
And the ending 👏

Waiting for other works.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ending
Vikram deserved Shivaays wrath completely...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Simply superb. Beautifully written. Although i like to see Pink's truth out but i like your way of ending the story ..Annika over anything :-))
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Oh dear. Mushfika this is so freaking good. So beautifully written. 👏 All the emotions portrayed so well. You did complete justice to their characters. 😃 And Vikram is such an a****le. 😡 Poor Anika. 🥺

This is one great story. Loved it Mushfika. ❤️ Looking forward to read more of your work. 😳


Aw, you made my day! So happy you liked this last bit...I was honestly contemplating whether to include such intense scenes (abusing part and washroom scene) but I ended up writing it anyway because otherwise the story wouldn't have been able to extract all the emotions from the characters, esp Shivay. And I'm so pleased to see people embracing this piece.

Thanks for always reading, liking and appreciating my work, Rhea!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya009

Beautifully written. The way you portrayed all the shades of Shivaay's character is just Awesome.

I really enjoyed the part when Vikram was beaten by Shivaay black and blue. Sadistic me 😆😉

keep up the good work 👏


The amount of effort I had to put in on this man's character drove me insane🤪Really happy to know I somewhat succeeded in making you like Shivay in this story😳

And LOL, I myself enjoyed writing Shivay beating that jerk black and blue as well😆 Sadistic us😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing Update!
The emotions were so Beautifully Written❤️
Poor Anika but Shivaay did take revenge on her behalf, such an adorable husband he is!!!
The way Shivaay consoled Anika 😳
Keep Writing 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

i am loving this...
I really wanted shivaay to trust Annika like this


Thank you so much darling! So pleased to know I could pull off the ending the way you wanted it to be😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's awesome
Beautiful update
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Shivay ne Vikram ki tai tai piss kar diya
After all he hurtled Anika so aggressively
Finally they are going to get married again
Mind blowing story

Thank you so much! 😳

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