Shivika TS: In Your Arms | Chapter 3 (last) - pg 16

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: farinaks
Beautiful
..extravagant... Mind blowiing ..
Heart touching nd painful nd emotional in the beginning...chummeshwari..
But I'm goona miss this story

Thank you so much! Really appreciate that you read and comment on my stories every time🤗

Sorry, what is chummeshwari?🤔

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
oh god i love you i love your work and this last part is balm to my wounds in my personal life
loved it
please do write more
bye sumi

Aww you're such a darling! Comments like this only make me keep on writing. Definitely going to the 'fav comments' list 🤗Love back to you, Sumi!

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..
Amazing ending dear!!!
Totally loved it!!!
It was superb!!!
Each and everything in this was amazing!!!

Originally posted by: zyrah17
Awesome both parts
beautifully wrritern
i love it
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot lovelies! 😳

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black_hawk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

This is fantastic!! 😊

Are planning any epilogue??

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ChocoGal01

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Read all the parts in a go and wow what a story!

Shivaay trying to play pretend in order to watch over his wifey is so cute! Reminds me of Annika's cute waley Billuji

And Annika's breakdown in front of Shivaay 😔

But Shivaay being Shivaay has the cure to all of Annika's troubles aww 😳

I love how Shivaay realised the truth isn't as important as her. This gets me even more excited as we'll get to see it onscreen soon too asddjdkkf

All in all, this was truly amazing! 👏

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mon95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Omg this was sooo good👏 If they were ever to bring such a track into IB, then i think narbhi would absolutely slay! Well you killed it for sure. Keep writing :)

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: chek
THANK YOU!! OH MY GOD THAT WAS JUST MINDBLOWING!! The way you described everyone, everything, Shivaay, Anika, everything was JUST!!! I swear I would replace you in the IB's writer's position anyday!! Please continue to write like this and I JUST LOVED IT!!:33 thank you for putting in so much time and effort and good luck for the future:))

Aww you're so adorable! I'm flattered with your comment, my god☺️ Extremely happy I was able to provide something you loved.

And LMAOOO @"replace IB writers with you" 🤣 I'm dying! My condition is similar to Anika's in the last scene☺️😆

But nah, this is just an amateur attempt of a mare audience to pen down her imagination on Shivika. Nothing can be compared to GulNeet's talent. I personally feel they're doing an amazing job with IB :)

Thank you so much for appreciating my effort, your words really mean a LOT! ❤️

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: panjami
Wonderfull ts ...how much these two love each other... i expected ragini too feel the same way as vikram... ragini without teeth would have been a wonderfull sight. . Loved it dear...

@Red bold: 🤣 that's pretty violent of you..😆 Just kidding, I don't have the right to say that to you, after what I made Shivay do to Vikram 😳

Thank you so much for your kind words, really glad you liked it 😃

Edited by Mushfika - 8 years ago