Shivika TS: In Your Arms | Chapter 3 (last) - pg 16

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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Beautiful
..extravagant... Mind blowiing ..
Heart touching nd painful nd emotional in the beginning...chummeshwari..
But I'm goona miss this story

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

oh god i love you i love your work and this last part is balm to my wounds in my personal life

loved it

please do write more

bye sumi

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1070625

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Amazing ending dear!!!

Totally loved it!!!

It was superb!!!

Each and everything in this was amazing!!!

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MafiaQueen17

@MafiaQueen17

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Awesome both parts
beautifully wrritern
i love it
thanks for the pm

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chek

@chek

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

THANK YOU!! OH MY GOD THAT WAS JUST MINDBLOWING!! The way you described everyone, everything, Shivaay, Anika, everything was JUST!!! I swear I would replace you in the IB's writer's position anyday!! Please continue to write like this and I JUST LOVED IT!!:33 thank you for putting in so much time and effort and good luck for the future:))

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panjami

@panjami

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Wonderfull ts ...how much these two love each other... i expected ragini too feel the same way as vikram... ragini without teeth would have been a wonderfull sight. . Loved it dear...

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Khidkitod

@Khidkitod

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Hi Mushfika!!🤗

What an amazing update..⭐️You have nailed it..You were phenomenal in every part of this update..If I say it was outstanding,that would be an insult for the update as well as you..Vikram is jerk..😡But then our hero..😎Loved that part so so much..😉😉😛Wohhooo..Shivaay is beating Vikram..🥳🥳 Washroom scene brought tears in my eyes..😭😭 Shivaay's care for Annika..Awww..The way he pacified her..❤️Then proposal was cute..😳Naughty Shivaay..😛😛😉You have portrayed that Shivaay is accepting Annika back without knowing the truth..I loved that..Unconditional love..Loved that dear..This was an amazing journey..Going to miss this TS..

Do write more..Keep up the good work..

Love,

Rusha

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

just hated Vikram, but loved Shivaay's revenge more, poor guy will need jaw plates and false teeth now lol. Poor Annika, but I loved how Shivaay consoled her, that was so beautiful and the proposal mindblowing

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SHARMILAPREM

@SHARMILAPREM

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#119

It's just an amazing piece. Don't stop, waiting for your next story. All the best.

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Rohini

@ithihaas

Trailblazer

Posted: 8 years ago

#120

The last part was just a fitting end to the story that you have started.

I can totally imagine Shivaay beating blood out of Vikram for making Annika go through so much of emotional and physical torture.

That man cannot see a small wound on his lady and Vikram went to the extent of physically torturing Annika.

I really loved that you didn't include Pinky and her blackmailing truth in this story. I, for one, wanted Shivaay to accept Annika without knowing truth. Truth will eventually come out but I thought it's enough for Shivaay to know that she did on purpose three months before was for some reason.

You are magical with words. I really loved the way you have written. It was emotional, heart wrenching. The last part was really cute.

You should keep writing more. I will keep looking forward to your works on Shivika.

Edited by ithihaas - 8 years ago