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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: zeenucharm
Such a cute update...love it.. keep it up

Thank you 😳

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xxxyyyzzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Oh this is so Good ...RomanticKara is bliss.. 😳 awesome writing. 👏 I can actually visualize Omkie doing all these things . Keep it up girl 👏 👏

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: xxxyyyzzz
Oh this is so Good ...RomanticKara is bliss.. 😳 awesome writing. 👏 I can actually visualize Omkie doing all these things . Keep it up girl 👏 👏

Thank you so much love ... I had a great time visualizing and writing about Omkie manaaofying his wife

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

It was like dhoom taana dhoon taaana taana taana performance😆 aahhh thak gayi dance karke

I really really loved it poorva...for omkara it was like pyar hame kis mod pe le aya 😆

He was thinking about gauri and then rudra ne entry mari woh bhi helen style dekho woh aa gya dekho woh aa gya

And then he sings his own version of mera piya ghar aya o ram ji hahah too funny it is🤣

Kara ran out to see gauri and did not care of anyone' s presence just hugged gauri ahhh in romantic way and he shots many questions...loved the way you write dialouges👏i loved these dialouges..

That was lovely ab aa hi gayi ho toh meri baat suno...pati hoon tumhara and she said aab pati jap mat shuru kijiye...kadoo kathal jaise muh bnaye baithe...ab jyada itraiye mat...and that last line said tumhe toh mai mna kar hi rahunga..ahh dil khush kar ditta...i really enjoyed it yarr..and title is very nice

Waiting for more...

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perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

You know out of the three Obros ... Omkara is going to be the most intense lover ... So thought of exploring the Romantic Kara side ... He is pro active now because he has realized that there is no point of behaving stupid with your MRS. ALWAYS RIGHT when you are at faults and for him more attractive is the fact that she is so beautiful.

intense and more mature.. shivaay's love is also intense but then so is his egoso irritating!

But omkara... half the times i only stare at his eyes.. he hardly ever needs words to express anything.. and when that dreamy voice of his does come to work.. haiii drives the last nail in the coffin only too deep!

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Era

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Aww this was so beautiful...made my day...

...RomanticKara is Heavenly Beautiful...

I had actually visualized and

wanted Om to HUG Gauri out of concern when she returns back...but...

.Ahhh...Kuch Khwahishein Adhoori hi reh jati hain Duniya mein.🥺...

but Koi na u r there

as a Fairy Godmother to Rikara Fandom to fulfill all our pending wishes.

So,Lady Keep it up & go on With this Concept of every day Drabbles...

...I will wait impatiently everyday for this blessings in Disguise...

Lots of Love & Respect🤗👍🏼👏

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rikara94
It was like dhoom taana dhoon taaana taana taana performance😆 aahhh thak gayi dance karke
I really really loved it poorva...for omkara it was like pyar hame kis mod pe le aya 😆
He was thinking about gauri and then rudra ne entry mari woh bhi helen style dekho woh aa gya dekho woh aa gya
And then he sings his own version of mera piya ghar aya o ram ji hahah too funny it is🤣
Kara ran out to see gauri and did not care of anyone' s presence just hugged gauri ahhh in romantic way and he shots many questions...loved the way you write dialouges👏i loved these dialouges..
That was lovely ab aa hi gayi ho toh meri baat suno...pati hoon tumhara and she said aab pati jap mat shuru kijiye...kadoo kathal jaise muh bnaye baithe...ab jyada itraiye mat...and that last line said tumhe toh mai mna kar hi rahunga..ahh dil khush kar ditta...i really enjoyed it yarr..and title is very nice
Waiting for more...

Derena Derena Derena Derena ... Dhoomtananana 🤣

You know your " Pyaar Humme Kis Mod Pe Le Aayaa " reminds me of the Obro song sequence with Omkara holding ghanti and dhanuchi 🤣

God!!! You got MERA PIYA GHAR AAYAA OH RAAMJI 😆 ... Humesha mere dil ki baat samajh jaati ho jyoti

Omkara having realized the importance of his wife is trying to leave no stone unturned to manaaofy his wife by jataaofying his haq... He is just improving himself as a husband ...

You know as I said previously it becomes very difficult for a writer to appreciate their own work ... And so if you say my dialogues are good ... I would love to believe you ...

" Dil Mein Jaagi ... Ishq Waali Manmarziyaan ...

Zidd Ke Maare ... Bholi Bhaali Manmarziyaan ..."

You know jyoti ... I always put extra effort to give a title to any composition ... I am glad it is being noticed.

Love you phatakdu 🤗

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
superb!!

Thank you Afrin 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

@AdiShree ❤️

You know you just pushed me down a cliff of anticipation and coaxed me hammering the last nail to cover my coffin ... Jaan lene waali baat kardi tumne ☺️

You know when I watched the older shows of Kunal ... I did not like him without his beard and hair ... He looked cute but now he looks handsome ... It is a clear transition from a boy to a man

Even when I did not like the cute Kunal look I was a lover of his voice and the way he speaks ... It was and is so man-like in fact Gentle man - like effortlessly ... It feels that shaayad KJ ko pata hi nahi hain ke what affect does his voice have ... I tell you being a Bengali girl ... I have heard many manly voices of Bengali men ... They are perfect and I say so is Kunal 😳

And now uski Aakhein he is so expressive ... Mujhe toh abhi uske baare mein sochkar hi sharam aa rahi hain ... Shankarji bachaalo !!!

About being the intense lovers, I loved the way ShivIka was scripted from Day One and Shivaay is one good hero with an ego life size but you know watching them I felt they are an outcome of something which GK and team does best ... Rich Egoistic Guy & Simple Innocent Girl love stories ... Like AsYa and ArShi ...

Omkara as a character is very different, he is my spirit character ... One reason being I can say he will be an intense lover adding to it is his artistry... I love his solitude

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Derena Derena Derena Derena ... Dhoomtananana 🤣
You know your " Pyaar Humme Kis Mod Pe Le Aayaa " reminds me of the Obro song sequence with Omkara holding ghanti and dhanuchi 🤣
God!!! You got MERA PIYA GHAR AAYAA OH RAAMJI 😆 ... Humesha mere dil ki baat samajh jaati ho jyoti
Omkara having realized the importance of his wife is trying to leave no stone unturned to manaaofy his wife by jataaofying his haq... He is just improving himself as a husband ...
You know as I said previously it becomes very difficult for a writer to appreciate their own work ... And so if you say my dialogues are good ... I would love to believe you ...
" Dil Mein Jaagi ... Ishq Waali Manmarziyaan ...
Zidd Ke Maare ... Bholi Bhaali Manmarziyaan ..."
You know jyoti ... I always put extra effort to give a title to any composition ... I am glad it is being noticed.
Love you phatakdu 🤗

Luv u too PC and behn hoon teri baat toh samj jayungi na😳

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