Darmiyaan - A Shivika Short Story [Chapter 5 - Page 23] *18/8*

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..
Amazing story Rhea!!!
Loved it!!
First chapter was amazing!!!
I love your writing style yaar..
That's amazing!!!
Shivaay's reaction when coffee falls on him was unexpected for me:)
Loved each and everything yaar!!

Continue soon
and take care of yourself!!!

& Thanks for PM sweetie!!!

Thank you so much, Chhaya! I'm so glad you liked it.

It really means a lot. <3

Will update soon.

Yes, I will. In fact, I'm doing much better now. Thanks for the concern. You too. 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Gurveen
Nice update
Anika and Shivay's first meet was beautiful
And they will meet in Rudra Soumya's wedding
Eagerly waiting for update

Thank you so much!

Updating soon! :)

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Apu_915
Awesome Update...
Shivika's first meet was amazing...
So they are gonna meet in Rumya's wedding ...
Post Soon

Thank you!

Will post the second chapter soon. :)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Rainzz
New storyline.😊😛
I am looking forward to this. 😆😆

As you said you have written this earlier for another forum, I am expecting fast updates.😉😉

Yes, I've written something very similar to this on another forum. But when I sit to edit names I end up writing a whole different chapter. 😆

But will definitely try and update soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: S.love1
Yaaayyy first chapter is up
I love the bond aniri share,
Shivaay and annikas first meet went quite smoothly without fighting, nice
Shivaay seems to be a nice guy here, not arrogant or rude
Loved the chapter as a whole
Can't wait for them to meet again in rumyas marriage
Keep writing
Much love
Soumya

Hey Soumya,

Thank you so much. ❤️

Yeah Shivaay is the total opposite of how he is in the show. 😆 Kind of heartbroken.

Will post the next chapter soon. :)

With love,

Rhea

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Seema84
New story definitely I'm looking forward to it... n nice start of the story

Thank you so much! <3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
nice one

Thanks. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose
wow u gave a new shape to anika's character
she has a family and saumya as her friend and gauri as her sister and her parents wow that is too godo rhea

show mein this isn't there but here her great old childhood memories as she narrates seems really amazing I just loved it

pls pls continue soon

want to read more

Thank you so much, Jen. Glad you liked it. :)

Updating now itself. :)

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#39

Originally posted by: black_hawk
Eagerly waiting for their next meet!!!! :)

Yes. Updating in 5 mins. 😃

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#40

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome concept yar 🤗
So Annika had a heart problem and her wedding proposals are breaking because of it... but she is positive about it... she believes that her prince charming is waiting for her... ofcourse shivaay is there na... waiting for the next update
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

Yes, Shivaay her soulmate. ❤️

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