Darmiyaan - A Shivika Short Story [Chapter 5 - Page 23] *18/8*

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
aww so sweet drunk shivaika are the best
loved it

Aww thank you so much, Sumi. ❤️ Glad you liked it. :)

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Nice updates

Liked it

Unknowingly their moms r arranging their relation na...

Rudra informs Shivaay any Anika being drunk

& Shivaay goes to find her...

Shivika share their pains...

Rikara r dating???

Plz if possible give a.small scene of them too

Continue soon

Thanks 4 pm

Sorry couldn't comment on previous chapters as was busy with xams

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Hello Rhea!😳

Just read this story in one go and believe me it was worth the time I spend here reading it.

it was amazin,you have really shown a different shivaaya s well as annika over here,one is broken while the other tried to be strong, it's lovely to see both of them sharing their past with each other and the best part of this story is that shivaay called her billi and annika called him billuji! It just soo cute and when annika woke up and shivaay said taht "Jaag gayi meri billi" I was like awestruck! And I'm definately sure that both of their mothers are talking about them, th story is just simply yet beautifully written, Do update it soon.

Love,

-Anya❤️

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Khidkitod

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Hello Rhea!!

Read last two chapters in a go!! They are amazing!! Which I love the most about this story that Shivaay called her Billi here!!😛 It was so cute!! So now. Shivaay knows that Annika has some health issues..Loved how Om cares for Annika..This is simple yet beautiful story!!⭐️ And I think their mothers are talking about them only..Drunk Shivika is a treat to watch..Loved it!!

Update soon!! Thanks for the pm..😳

With love,

Rusha

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Read all the parts together
They were khidkitod Amazing awesome fsntastic nd superb
Tq fr pm
So sorry fr rplying late as I was having my exams...they jzt got finished yesterday only

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: minamma
Such a cute chapter
Loved it

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. :)

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar 🤗
shivika conversation was so cute ⭐️
awww mallika thought that they were together 😉
Now shivaay knows everything about Annika...
he knows Annika had heart problems
They are getting comfortable with each other

Thank you so much!

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Awesome Update...Loved It❤️
The poolside convo was amazing!!!
The way you express the emotions is amazing!!!
Waiting for the nxt😊

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. :)

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CaffeineMuggle

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Rhea dear , please update soon.
Can't wait more :(

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
awesome amazing have I told you how much I love this story? Mine is a renal issue, hope I can find someone like Shivaay in this story to be my life partner

Thank you so much, dear. I'm so glad you like it. :)

Don't worry dear. You'll definitely find someone soon. ❤️ Take care of yourself. :)