Darmiyaan - A Shivika Short Story [Chapter 5 - Page 23] *18/8* - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rainzz

❤️

This story has some sweetness that brings smile on my face.

Finally Shivaay knows.

I am loving this extremely sweet story of yours.

Please update soon.

Regards
Rainzz

Thank you so much, Rainzz. ❤️ I'm so glad you like it. Will update soon. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _fati_

Simply one word for the update

LOVE ❤️

Thank you so much dear. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

amazing update dear
loved itt soo much...

Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shrishti.

Lovely update. I'm reading liking how the story is progressing.

Thank you so much, Shrishti. Glad you like it. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

OhMyGod !

What a story, Rhea ❤️
Damn it's so simple and sweet and freaking amazing.
Read the whole thing at a go and enjoyed it immensely. No huge complications but still the underlying pain is present. Just two people falling in love *so dreamy*
You are one amazing writer sweetheart.
A big love from me for penning down this brilliance perfectly and soulfully.
And a again a thanks for taking out time to send a PM.
Take Care :')

And please update soon *Yes I am kinda greedy* Just dying to read the next update.


Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

Rhea dear , please update soon.

Can't wait more :(

Thank you so so much, Lisa. ❤️ Really means a lot. I'm so glad you're liking this story!
Yes, will update real soon. I have started writing the next chapter. So sorry for keeping you all waiting. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazing update
Anika and Shivay shared their problems and pain with each other
Totally amazing when Anika saw the pain in Shivay's eyes which no one saw
Omkara and Gauri are happy that they both find happiness together
Update next part soon

Thank you so much dear. Glad you like it. 😃 Will update real soon. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

the way shivaay understands anika is amazing in ur story

really love it a lot 👏👏

Thank you so much, Jen. Glad you like it. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MRS.SSO

Awesummm

Loved it
So so so goood
Awww the heart to heart !!!
Pure souls
Cont sooon

Thank you so much! So glad you like it. Will update soon. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Nice updates

Liked it
Unknowingly their moms r arranging their relation na...
Rudra informs Shivaay any Anika being drunk
& Shivaay goes to find her...
Shivika share their pains...
Rikara r dating???
Plz if possible give a.small scene of them too
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

Sorry couldn't comment on previous chapters as was busy with xams

Thank you so much dear. ❤️
Yup, Rikara are dating. 😆 Yeah there will be a RiKara scene. Dw. 😉😳
Will update soon.
It's okay. I hope your exams went well. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hello Rhea!😳
Just read this story in one go and believe me it was worth the time I spend here reading it.
it was amazin,you have really shown a different shivaaya s well as annika over here,one is broken while the other tried to be strong, it's lovely to see both of them sharing their past with each other and the best part of this story is that shivaay called her billi and annika called him billuji! It just soo cute and when annika woke up and shivaay said taht "Jaag gayi meri billi" I was like awestruck! And I'm definately sure that both of their mothers are talking about them, th story is just simply yet beautifully written, Do update it soon.

Love,
-Anya❤️

Hello Anya.Thank you so much dear. I'm so glad you liked it. ❤️ Will update it soon. 😳

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