Rikara FF: Waiting for Him (part 5 updated pg 7)

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index:

part one- page 1

part two- page 2

part three- page 4

part four- page 6

part five-page 7

Okay guys here is a new story: info about characters below:

- so omkara singh oberoi , guari sharma , and riddhima sharma are neighbors/ friends since their mansions are next to each other and their families are friends

-omkara is 28 years old, riddhima is 28, guari is 25 and rudra is 23

- shivaay and anika are already married

-riddhima and gauri are sisters

-om fell for riddhima since they did their schooling together and are closer in age so they are closer

-gauri: has always had a secret crush on Om since she was a teenager, he use to tutor her at times and share his art work with her since they both liked creating : guari liked sketching clothes and om liked making sketches as a hobby... gauri had gone to banglore to study fashion design and just returned to Mumbai 3 months ago after finishing her studies

- omkara: is a business man but sketching and making murti's is his hobby

-riddhima wants to be a model

Part 1:

Day of the wedding:

The baraat had arrived and omkara was sitting in the mandap.

Rudra: O tu ab paraya dhan hai, ab main akela bore hota rahu ga...vaise ab bhi time hai mujhe riddhima di kabhi pasand nahi ayi, agar who mujse buri tara pesh ayi tu meri side lega na???

Omkara: shut up rudra!!!!!!!!!

Shivaay: Om ignor kar isko meri shaadi pe bhi isne yeh dialog mara tha, per ab dekho, anika ka chamcha hai

Rudra: maine yeh anika bhabi ke waqt nahi kaha tha, yeh to maine lady baba ke waqt kaha tha... dekha bach gay na

Shivaay looked at rudra irritated but agreed in his mind

Mrs.Sharma: riddhima, tu tayaar hai na beta ...riddhima beta darvaza kholo...riddhima...

Guari reached the door her mother was knocking

Gauri: hya hua ma?

Mrs. Sharma: riddhima darvaza rahi khol rahi ...tu bahar kya kar rahi hai tu riddhima ko tayaar kar rahi thi na?

Gauri: di ko paani peena tha, toh yeh water bottle lene gayi thi

Guari opens the lock of the door with her hair pin and when mrs sharma and guari go into the room riddhima was not there...guari noticed the window was open...she saw a ladder...on the bed her mother found a note which said: "sorry mom I got a modeling assignment in the US, I asked you guys to change the date of the wedding, but you guys just didn't care about my dreams as much as guari's I guess...I told Omkara too, he said after the wedding I can do as I wish so I was fine with that... but now I just realized me an Omkara cannot work out, he will always chose his stupid brothers over me...I asked him if we can buy a house to ourselves after the wedding, but he refused and I really cannot tolerate his brothers an family they are all so clingy... even when we were younger he would tutor gauri in math since you guys asked but he wouldn't ditch a tutoring session for movie with me and then when gauri went to university he stared tutoring rudra...yeah he helped me get modeling contacts an all but I cannot me stuck with his cling family, its just too much to deal with so I have decided to focus on my career for now ...I don't know if I love omkara...maybe I thought I did, if he loves me he can wait ...im sorry mom and dad but my dream is finally coming true...bye. "

At the mandap, everyone was waiting for the bride ...mrs sharma informed jhanvi who was shocked, the oberois and sharmas were discussing about the situations when omkara came into the study room where everyone was talking about the situation.

Omkara: mom , dad aunty kya hua?

Mrs sharma handed omkara the letter... Omkara was shattered and angry .. he couldn't believe she left him for that modeling contract when he told her he was fine with it and that he would support her ..that just broke him how riddhima chose her career over his love...but what she said about his brothers and family just angered him to the core...rudra who finally realized that his would be sis in law ran away was happily dancing in his mind since he never liked riddhima.

Mr and Mrs sharma: hum app sab se maafi mangte hai agar humme pata hota toh yeh sab nahi hone dete

Jhanvi: app kyun maafi mang re hai ..isme app dono ki kya galti...per ab hum sab kya kare? Bahar sab media aur rishtedar hain ...I think I should go say that the wedding has been cancelled.

Tej: are you out of your mind jhanvi...everyone will laugh

Jhanvi: but there is nothing we can do tej

Tej : shaadi hogi agar riddhima say nahi toh phir gauri se... mr and mrs sharma kya hum gauri ka haath mang sakte hain omkara ke liya

Omkara was shocked, but he knew his families reputation was at stake

Mr and mrs sharma: let us talk to gauri first

They took gauri to her room to talk to her ...her parents told her there is no pressure from them but if she is willing to marry omkara it would make them feel less ashamed in front of the oberoi family...gauri who had a childhood crush on omkara and forgotten about it in banglore now felt butterflies thinking of omkara as her husband ...she was thinking about if he would accept her or not...her parents were waiting for an answer...seeing the hope in their eye she agreed for their happiness...mrs sharma told the oberois that gauri has agreed.

Shivaay: om are sure about this...u don't have to if ur not okay..

Ommkara: yeh tu bol raha hain shivaay ... baat humari family reputation ki hai

Shivaay: tu kab se logon ki baaton se affect hone laga

Omkara: jabse riddhima ka leter read kiya... she left me I chose the wrong girl... the reason you guys are facing the embarrassing situation is because of me so I will fix it even if I have to marry HER younger sister! Maybe she might be the same who knows...omkara stormed off to the madap

shivaay goes to Annika and tells her what omkara just said

shivaay: anika omkara is getting married in anger what if he gets hurt and hurts gauri...

Anika: I think everything will be fine ... shaayad this is happening for the best...maybe gauri was meant for om and not riddhima ...remember how we happened...

The media found outside had found out from the servants that riddhima had ran away and now omkara and gauri were to get married.. they all waited outside the mansion to get and interview of omkara

Gauri reached the mandap and sat next to omkara...

hope you guys liked it ...do let me know ... thank you =)



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow superb plot dear...very excited to read the rest...
& Please pm me once u update... loving this...
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nice start
love to see how rikara relationship progress from this point
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Interesting please continue soon😳😆
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Nice storyline
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Nice concept
Fabulous update

Omkara & Riddhima were getting married
But she left for her career
Omkara is so angry
He doesn't know Gauri that we'll
He thinks she might be same as her sister
Gauri is getting into this wedding
Thinking of her crush on omkara
Plus this is matter of their family's reputation

Wonder how will Omkara react to Gauri & media
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Loved it waiting to read more...
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I like the concept and the idea. Accidental marriages might be an Oberoi family tradition lol. I don't really have a sense of Omkara and Gauri just yet. But I'm looking forward to getting to know them and read more of their love story
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Note: I going to change this a little...so as I said they were neighbors ...lets just change it so now they are not neighbors just family friends ...thank you =)

Part 2:

Once guari sat next to omkara in the mandap the pandit started chanting the mantras...soon panditji said the tie the mangalsutra...omkara had the magalsutra in his hand and froze thinking "I don't love her and I don't think I can love again...especially not her, she might just be a cheat like riddhima...

Jhanvi: Om, beta tie the mangalsutra

Omkara looked at his mom and thought...nahi mujhe yeh shaadi karni padege, mere liye nahi par apni family ke liye and our reputation ... omkara tied the magalsutra around gauri's neck then he filled her maang with sindoor and soon panditji said to stand and take the pheras...

Gauri thinking while taking pheras: I know I had a crush on him and I think I still do...I just hope I'm able to make this marriage work.

Omkara thinking while taking pheras: shes going to be just like her sister if not worse, great... this like punishment for loving the wrong kind of girl, but ill make sure its just as hard for gauri.

The wedding was complete so omkara and gauri took blessing from their elders... gauri was crying really badly since she was leaving her parents all of a sudden...omkara stared at gauri and felt bad he was reminded of the time when she was 16 and he was 19 and gauri had failed a math exam and she was crying really badly when he was at her house and her mom had asked him to tutor her and he had agreed just by looking at her tears...omkara brushed the thought away and now they were exciting the sharma mansion...right when they stepped out the media came right to omkara.

Reporter 1: Mr Omkara Oberoi is it true that Riddhima ran away?

Reporter 2: are you feeling cheated Mr Oberoi?

Reporter 3: are you sure you made the right decision by marrying Gauri Sharma sir?

Gauri grabbed onto Omkara's arm tightly looking at all those reporters coming at them...omkara looked down at gauri and then back at the reporters

Omkara: omkara put on a smile an said " she left, her loss not mine and marrying gauri was a great decision, I have to get married someday then today it was... now plz let me get going I have to get home home to welcome my bride.

Gauri said bye to her parents and got into the car with omkara... she silently cried in the car

Omkara: great shes crying like I forced her to get married and leave her home, its her sisters deeds not my fault omkara though in his head.

They reached oberoi mansion and she was welcomed in ... after her greha pravesh they had to find the rings in the milk...thye both found it at once and pulled it out at the same time...gauri blushed a bit and om let go of the ring and left since the last of the rituals were finally over

Shivaay: tu khush hai na Om?

Omkara: khush yea right I just married the younget sister of the girl who cheated me and my family and tujhe lagta hai ki mujhe khush hona chahiye...

Shivaay: om tu usse iss sab ke liye blame nahi kar sakta

Omkara: kyun...maybe she knew that riddhima bhag jaye gi

Shivaay: usne humari family ke liye tujse shaadi ki hai...she somehow tried to fix what her sister did

Omkara: I don't care shivaay...I cant trust her okay

Omkara marched off to his room in anger...anika came to shivaay after hearing om an shiv's conversation...

Shivaay: anika how can om just change within a few hours its like the old caring om is gone...hes so ..i don't even have the words

Anika: he so... SSO right now haina?...hoga kyun nahi apka hi bhai hai na...par koi baat nahi app normal ho gaye hai toh woh bhi teek ho jaye ga bas kuch time lage ga ..abhi zakham tazza hai...aur zakham ki jo medicine hai na who bhi yehi hai so not to worry...

Shivaay: konsi medicine?

Anika: gauri...she will fix everything

Shivaay: u mean like us? Shivaay winked at anika

Anika just blushed and said haan, just like us. Omkara enter his room and saw that gauri had changed and was sitting on the edge of the bed waiting for him... he gave her an angry look and grabbed his change of clothes and went to the bathroom and slammed the door shut...gauri got tensed, but she knew he was mad, who wouldn't be if this had happened to them...she needed to talk to him since they hadn't talked at all this entire day...she was also nervous since they had not had a real conversation since the time she left to complete her studies... the bath room door opened and omkara walked out...

Thanks for now...let me know how you guys feel... =)

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