Rikara FF: Waiting for Him (part 5 updated pg 7) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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You are making me excited...
Waiting for next and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excited to see angry kara side of om
Gud start

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
Omkara is so angry
I feel bad for Gauri
But she will heal him

Wish they talk
Gauri deserves a chance

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb concept.. keep writing dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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great start! takkar wala pyar! please continue
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It's interesting..I am loving it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Omkara is full on angry mode
He is angry on gauri also just becoz of her sis
Gauri deserves a chance i hope in next chap they talk about it
Update soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely.. Please write longer chapters you have me hooked up to the story 👏😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3:

Gauri: o...om...omkara ...im really sorry about what di did...I know ur really hurt and there is probably nothing I can do, but u can share anything with me if It makes u feel better.

Omkara: wow ..toh ek behen chot deti hai toh dusri medicine degi how convienient...you don't even know how it feels so just back off

Gauri was hurt by omkaras sarcasm, but she knew he was angry

Gauri: om I know ur really hurt but plz ...it wasn't my fault..if I had know did was serious about running away I would have told everyone...i...

Omkara: WHAT!!!!!... so u knew she was going to run from the wedding?????

Gauri: no I didn't. I mean she was saying yesterday "guari I feel like running away im not sure if this will work out...and I thought di was just nervous about the wedding so I told her everything will be fine... that's it I didn't think she was seriously going to run...

Omkara stared down at gauri ...he was still mad ..he sat down on his bed in anger

Gauri: look omkara I know she gave you a lot of pain, maybe it wasn't meant to be...I know im not ur choice, but I will try my best to make this work...when we took our pheras I made a promise to myself that ur happiness will be my priority...plz just give me a chance ...om, can we atleast try to be friends?

Omkara: don't u dare call me OM!!! Only the people that are close to me can call that and I already know u will be exactly like riddhima. ...tell me gauri why did u agree to marry me huh why? For the business merger right..just for more money right... well you know what even if u didn't marry me the merger would have still happened ..the talks about merger were way before I purposed to riddhima so when I purposed both familys thought it would be a great idea to do merger day of wedding...so technically one girls goes to the US for money an the other marries great!!!!!!!!!!

gauri was crying from the accusations omkara was throwing at her

gauri: that's not true... I don't even know about any merger...I just said yes due to the hope I saw in my parents eyes when they asked me ...I did this for both families reputation...I just wanted to somehow fix what di did...

omkara: you know what gauri I don't care anymore, everything is ruined , so it really doesn't matter anymore...for me this marriage means nothing and neither do you, im just stuck with you...just some advice don't expect anything from me because you may be my wife to other but there will be nothing of that sort...love for me is all a lie now, after what your GREAT sister did I don't think I'll be able to trust anyone with love... just for our families we will b husband and wife but not in this room.

Gauri: just give me a chance omkara... plz...said gauri crying

Omkara just left his room and gauri fell on the bed crying... "why does he think I like di...how can just assume that without knowing me why...what wrong have I done to deserve his hate god? I was thinking that I'll be able to fix everything an maybe my innocent childhood crush made me agree for marriage, but I didn't know it will be this hard to deal with...I know he hates me...but I'll keep trying... par hum unka vishwas jeet ne ki puri koshish karenege...he doesn't have to accept me, but ill still fulfil my duties as a wife. Gauri thought in her mind as she crying.

Omkara came back to his room an hour later...he picked up a pillow an was going to the couch since laying on the bed since she was crying...gauri grabbed omkaras hand to stop him... he looked at her...

Gauri: u sleep here I'll go on the couch...besides its your room and your bed... I have to right if you can't accept me ...

Omkara: suit urslef...and he lied down and pulled the sheet over him

Guari grabbed a pillow and quilt and lied down on the sofa thinking of the difficulties she will be having trying to gain acceptance...she knew that she shouldn't take anything he said to heart since he was heart broken, but his words still hurt...and she wanted to prove to him that she wasn't anything like her di and soon she dosed off too...it had been a long day.

Next morning...

That's it for now guys hope you guys like it do let me know thanks =)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey i read it..before recieving you pm😆
Awesome update dear..
Omkara is very angry..he is angry on gauri why?? It is not her mistake..why omkara thinks that she is like her di..come on omkara try to understand her..but gauri is gauri.. she will try her best for their marriage..she will fulfill her duties as a wife..nice..
I loved it...plz change the font size..its very large..

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