Till I Found You - OnTrack ShivIka FF [ Discontinuation Note on Pg 31] - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story.
Loved it.
Read both d parts.
Very well written.
Every emotions were portrayed beautifully
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heart touching update.
You beautifully portrayed the thoughts of Anika.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous ipdate harshu...ahort nd impactful
Sometimes small things creates big difference
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite



Glad to see you on this thread Tanisha. Thank you. See I updated too😆

I start reading all the stories you wrote😳
Shivay 😡
But virginity test???
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow such bold step
go anika
love anika ahaan convo
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
read all t parts in a go.. such a amazing story.. and that virginity test thing was a shock.. just want to know shivaay's reaction.. plz update soon n other work of urs too
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice..i liked the talk b/w anni n..ahaan..
annika going for virginity test..to prove her innocence..finally she took some step to prove herself correct n to mentain her selfrespect..! not waiting for him to realise his mistake on his own..GOOD..do update soon..
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superb update...
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First of all m liking the speed of story. It's quite interesting😊
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Posted: 8 years ago




This Cannot Be True.


"Anika?" Shivaay gasped in shock. Even before he could recover from the shock, he absent mindedly grabbed her hand and pulled her out of the Doctor's cabin. "What the hell do you think you are doing?" He wasn't just angered, he was beyond that.

"Why are you getting so angry? You have pointed a question on my character and I am just proving my innocence. What problem do you have in this?" She freed her hand from his grip, shifting away. He was being unreasonable, for her.

"You are doing no such thing." He declared with God knows which authority. It shouldn't have bothered him really even if she was undergoing such test because he knew what the result was going to be. He bloody knew it yet a part of him refused to let that happen what she was willing to do.

She laughed at the irony. "Karna to mai bhi nahi chahti Shivaay. Par aapne mere paas aur koi rasta nahi chhoda hai. Anyways, I don't have time for this discussion." With that, she slightly touched on his arm asking him to get in.

"Leave my hand. I don't allow you for this." His resistance was amusing to her. He was so damn sure about her having illegal relationship with Daksh, he was utterly disgusted with even her sight but he was not ready to let her do a virginity test. It did not make any sense.

"I would have done this alone but then, you would have put blame on me to have replaced reports and I don't have more strength to justify it again. Isliye mai aapko sath layi hu, taki aapko koi doubt na rahe." She felt it was necessary to let him know why exactly he was brought there. The man who did not trust her even a fraction of a percent... how would have he believed on her reports? He wouldn't have rather again accused her of manipulating the reports.

Somehow, it had shaken him inside out and he did not why. Something twisted in his heart sharply at even the thought of it. She pulled him along her and he did not know how to react.

Dr. Ananya was the one attending Anika. She looked at the couple who was sitting next to her and it did not take her long to figure out that something was terribly wrong with them. "Are you sure, Mrs. Oberoi?" Dr. Ananya asked, confirming taking her file in hand.

"Would appreciate greatly if you could address me as Anika." Anika spoke up rather asserted, half smiling at the Doctor.

It said all. Dr. Ananya nodded earnestly. "Sure. Anika."

"Come with me. You will have to wait here Mr. Oberoi. Getting up from the chair, she pointed Anika to get on the bed, and she closed off the curtains hiding her view and she asked Shivaay to wait exactly where he was sitting. Shivaay sat in the chair almost like a statue as Doctor and Anika moved for check up.

*

"Check up to ho gaya hai. You'll get the reports in an hour." Dr. Ananya remotely told them. Anika nodded while Shivaay was still in a state to not speak anything. They walked out of Doctor's cabin, and made their way out. "I think we should wait here. Otherwise you will again say, I changed the reports." Anika suggested as they reached lobby.

He shot her a look. For him, she was testing his patience by repeating he would never trust her as if he never did. Did he really never? He did but she forced him to question her. He hadn't presumed his accusations on her. He had seen everything with his eyes. He didn't trust anyone else but him.

"This is bullshit Anika. Bullshit, you heard me? We both know what the truth is." Finally stabilizing himself, he brought himself to talk rather retort. Every five minutes... after every five minutes, Daksh's words replayed in his mind, Daksh's shirt lying on the floor and Anika there scene, the fifteen lakhs thing... and whenever it did, it overpowered him, just like it did, now.

"Wahi to baat hai Shivaay. Aap use sach maan rahe hai jise aap manna chahte hai aur mai aapko wo dikhana chahti hu, jo SACH hai. Sach ke chehre kai ho sakte hai lekin sach... sach sirf ek hota hai." She walked along with him, as he continued to get out of the hospital. The place was suffocating him.

*


Half an hour! It had been almost half an hour since they were sitting in the car, in silence outside the hospital. "I don't get a point ke tum ye sab karke saabit kya karna chahti ho. His frustration landed on the steering. She stole a glance of him but remained mum. "Isse kuch nahi badalne wala. Meri nafrat tumhare liye kam to nahi hogi ulta badh jayegi."

"Dekhte hai." She mumbled to herself.

Anika's phone started ringing and after she picked up, she got know that it was from hospital. Her reports were ready and the receptionist was informing her that she could collect her reports then. She told Shivaay the same and they again got in, the hospital. Anika did not take the reports by her hands instead she asked Shivaay to collect them.

"Yaha nahi." She stopped him from opening the reports in the hospital asking him to drive home and see there. He was too drained off to argue and rather did whatever she went on saying.

*

"Yaha aane se reports badal jayegi?" He mocked as they stood in their room.

She felt tears threatening to fall from her eyes but she held them back. "Nahi. Mai chahti hu ke aap sach waha dekhe jaha aapne mujhpar itna ghatiya ilzaam lagaya tha."

He just shook his head, pretending he did not care, whatever she said. Desperation was in the force with which he was tearing the cover of the reports. His eyes closed momentarily before he laid his eyes on them.

Virginity test: Positive.

You are a virgin.

It was shock or what, he did not know but the reports slipped off his hands. He suddenly felt like everything twirling around him and he almost fell on the bed sitting, resting his palm against it.

This isn't true. This cannot be true. How can it be?

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