RiKara OS - KEHNA HI KYA

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awww...
See i already told you that you are allrounder.. another different version of rikara
Wow
Amazing yar
Kal rudra and aaj pinky aunty acha hai😆
How dare she... kitne gande tarike se baat ki gauri se.. but glad gauri give back mzaa aa gya...dadi and jhanvi supports gauri...
And in her room the way she pull him with full energy ahh poore haq se you know mujhe lga kahin slap hi na kr de😲 and then her questions and that tod fod..iwas really scared with her reaction but finally our dear kara ne bcha liya woh painting bhi or ri bhi..😳 awww he made her painting.. really he remembered that scenario??i wonder anyway i liked that..
And that chotu chotu se romantic moment like anklet or wiping her tears cheeks touch were awesome..after that pinky aunty ki OMM.. glad she tell him..show ke jaise nahi kuch btaya hi nahi
You know what goosebumps hi aagye mere when he said GAURI OMKARA SINGH OBEROI wow moment tha👍🏼
Again awww he knows her very well han her dabang avtar and he said
yeh Bareilly ka bawandar bohot khatarnaak hain ... isse gussa na hi dilaao toh behtar hoga nahi toh aapko ek jhaap lagaake aise deewar mein sataaegi ... ke aapki hi Oh My Mata ho jaaegi🤣 haha really yarr itne ache dialogues you are amazing yar.. you dealt every emotions with perfect dialogues...i must say your dialouges har bar khidkitod hote hain and i love your dialogue baazi👏
Pinky ke sath us naagini ko bhi maafi mangni padi..kam hi aisa kiya tha..itne garm mahol mein slefie le rahi thi🤣
Again aww moment he made kheer for her but with 2 spoons of sugar..really omkara?? Haha and she said apko bhi bhua maaji ke sath mental hospital mein hona chahiye😆
And the way he said ab kya kru achi lagne lagi ho tum and samjhate samjhate maiin hi baura jayunga.. superb.. plz doc di come and help my poor kara
Amazing poorva i really enjoyed... maine dopher ko padhna start kiya tha abhi finish kiya😆
You know well mere late hone ki wajah..but rikara ke liye time nikal leti hoon tere liye bhi😳
Luv you itna sara behna🤗
Keep writing👍🏼

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome one again...😳

Main end mein kya free service dene aaungi????

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: priya_86
Awesome one again...😳
Main end mein kya free service dene aaungi????

Priya 😳🤗 just felt like mentioning your name 😉

And Kara is not going to take free service from you 😆

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Naina

@Naina280599

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

This is so amazing. Everything was so perfect.

Loved it too much!

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Amazing update
Loved how Jhanvi and Omkara stood up
For Gauri
Pinky ki oh my mata ho gayi

Thank you Gurveen 🤗

Jahnvi is Sasu mumma goals & Kara is darling Husband goals

Gauri is one lucky girl 😳

About pinkys ... She so deserved it... Humaari heroine ke saamne itni bakwaas karegi toh main kya aise hi jaane dungi ... NAA JI NAA 😆

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Tasnim 🤗

I agree we do have a very strong connection ... AMBUJA CEMENT strong 😎

You know I should be a bit apologetic about how it took so much of time for me to type the whole update and post ... I started working the day the E24 news segment came about Pinky doing nonsensical drama with Gauri ... Its just that I did not feel like typing it then 😆 aur kal socha niptaake chhap hi deti hu.. Can you believe I am upto composing eight more different RiKara concepts ... Trying to equalize my thinking and typing speed 😆

Pinky is one ridiculous character when it comes to planning and plotting ... TRP aunties ki favorite 🤣 ... I wanted her to have a good dose of her own medicine 😉 and adding to it was my annoyance about Ragini calling Gauri a villager toh Pinky and Ragini in package deal...seel batte waali Kutaai pisaai ek ke saath ek free 😆

I have terribly missed the authentic characters Soulful Kara and Dabang Ri ... Phir Maine socha ke agar writers unhe waise nahi likhna chahte toh koi baat nahi hum hi likh dete hain. KARA all shaant Chirota when RI becomes a ministration of angry young woman ... Tod phod and satyanash remains my fvourite part 😉

Kara had to support Ri ... As a husband farz banta hai uska plus I wanted to potray angry Kara for all right reasons, aur bhi dialogue baazi karwaani thhi mujhe but then I realized that this is a RiKara OS and not a PinKara OS 😆 isiliye had more RiKara moments 😳

Ahh the painting, you know I have a still of her golgappa eating scene ... That is my favorite and so I described it as a painting ... I wanted it to be more spontaneous than something intense because their relationship is budding and another reason being that we all wanted Kara's first painting for Ri to be something of their own, personal and not his Sasu mom! Toh maine likh diya

I know that the writers keep forgetting what they have scripted previously but even I did not have in mind that Kara has Ri's anklet ... I wanted an intimate moment for them because I am a sucker for intimate moments and I swear that scene was SPOT ON! 😳

Again the kheer scene being something that was on the spot. For I was just reminded that Kara hates Mishti ... Maine socha Ri ko bhi pata chalna chahiye thode atrangi style mein 😆 after all its about them trying to know each other.

Dr. Priya to the rescue 👍🏼 I say jitni CVS ne gadbad ki hain naa ... Only our doctor can save RiKara because she has noted everything from their costumes, to their scene settings to the quality of editing ... I hope the PH discovers someone as sincere as our Priya 😊

You know I loved jahnvi in the beginning of IB ... She was a daring baaz now she has become weak both emotionally and physically as required for her character sketch.. Not just sasu mom ... The old jahnvi was a 21st century metro politan woman ... #WomanGoals

The most important part of writing being that you enjoyed it ... Thank you for spoiling me with your affection 😳 ... With a lot of respect that you made so much time to appreciate and thank me ... I will just say Main tumse bohot pyaar karri hoon tasnim... You are a darling.

Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Superb OS
Just what I want to see in show
But u know what the viewers want
Only u can give us these Rikara moments
Which we are dieing to see in the show

Thanks for the PM

Vrinda 🤗

You know these are all the simple moments of normal daily life of any couple who is trying and understanding each other ... RiKara being mature is relatable that way ...

All thanks to the neighing horses of my uncontrollable imagination ... RiKara on my mind 24*7😆 ... I want to capture their essence and so make efforts to express it whichever way I can. I know the regularity and repetition in daily soaps ... And so now I am off to RiKara land along with their onscreen chemistry

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: krazykaju
Amazing OS. I love all ur works and love the way you xpress each and every emotion.
awesome work.

Keep writing nd keep smiling.😊😳

Thank you @KrazyKaju 😳

My emotions and expressions always depend on my mood. Writing is proven to be a great stress buster for me... Whimsical I am 😉😆

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: writergenie17
OMG OMG OMG!
This was absolute perfection my dear princess!

Kya OS likhi hai OSBaaz ne aaj... Hum sab ki OMM kar di! 👏

I've so wanted Kara to know about all the venom Pinky unloaded on Ri... lekin aaj to aap ne humein poori confrontation, declaration aur reparation bhi de di. Thank you so much for writing this... I can't tell you just how satisfying this was to read and more than that, just how amazing it is to know that this could be canon... you could just take this enblock and fit this into an episode and still have the same story flow as now... so this is my headcanon from now on.

Every bit of this OS was absolutely perfect my friend... you kept their characterizations and made them even better! From Gauri's temper tantrum to Omkara's calm response, his own confrontation with Pinky and Ragini (who was fabulously funny btw) and the final bumbling attempt to make kheer for his lovely wife. This is how Omkara should be, how he should react and how he should try to express himself... And Gauri's gentle exasperation with her husband's weird ways of expressing himself was perfection too! I love, love, love this!

Thanks for sharing...

Can't wait to read more awesomeness from you!

Genie 🤗

You know I was very keen on writing some ' GAURI MERI BIWI HAIN' content with some tension and drama.

Seeing the spoiler where pinky lets down Gauri, I started working on this one shot ... Wanted it to be heavy gauge but then decided against it because we have enough footage for drama on the screens. We can enjoy RiKara fully here.

I kept the original characters of Ri & Kara intact because their such execution is awaited on screen. GAURI has to be all blasting like reckless waves and OMKARA is her deep blue ocean and so is their husband wife compatibility.

I am dying to see them make efforts to normalize their marriage, the effort has to be both ways. You know I really like subtle RiKara so its easy with them that we can connect to routine life.

I made attempt to gift them moments.

Moral of the story being that whatsoever happens ... RiKara is together and strong. People better not mess up with them. Pinky and ragini being instances for the while ...

The theme drastically changed from Gauri wailing and sobbing & Omkara taking a stand for her to Gauri & Omkara making their share of efforts to make their marriage work ... It changed for better.

Working on some more themes will update ASAP 😊