RiKara OS - KEHNA HI KYA

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Hola guys🤗

Pooru waapas aa gayi!😆

Now I present to you my version of Pinky doing all ridiculous dialoguebaazi to let down Gauri.

The plot being Omkara giving and taking time and space in the RiKara relationship after not letting her go back to Bareilly. He really wants to make things work out between both of them.

I hope you enjoy

Happy RiKara Reading!

KEHNA HI KYA


Woh Humse Hum Unse Kabhi Na Mile ...

Kaise Mile Dil Naa Jaane ...'


Anpadh gawaar kahiki ... aai badi mere ghar ke faisle lene waali ... Pinky was lashing her wrath on Gauri now ... for something as simple as choosing a set of curtains for the windows of the hall. Gauri was equally angry ... having not spared even her own husband for haphazard circumstances ... taking such nonsensical drama from Pinky was utterly not her thing ... Dekhiye auntyji agar aapko pardo ka rang pasand nahi hain ... toh aapko jo pasand hain wahi lagwa dijiye ... aise phizool mein hum par barasne ki zarurat nahi hain ... aapko jo karna hain kijiye, humme bohot kaam hain hum jaate hain yaha se ... Gauri returned all of Pinky's favor is alike octave and turned to leave ... Dadi witnessing the scene from a distance was quite proud with her Grand-Daughter-In-Law. Even Anika had not given Pinky such publicized dose of her own medicine...

Tu ek baat samajhle ... Yeh Bareilly ke tevar naa Bareilly mein hi jachte hain. Pinky was determined to not stop. After all Gauri teaming up with Anika had become her brand new reason of worry and frustration. Gauri stopped in her track to clench her fists. Tu bata tu hain kaun ... jo mujhe bata rahi hain ke main kya karu aur kya nahi. Gauri turned to reply but Pinky continued bashing her ... Om toh tujhe biwi maan nahi raha par phir bhi tu kabhi pregnancy aur kabhi chot ki nautanki karke iss ghar mein leech ki tarah chipki hui hain ... Bhaujaai had discussed to Gauri about how much of a witch Pinky can be but what she started now was stooping to another level. A part of her brain was infuriated because of her personal life being exhibited as a free show and a part of her heart was hurt because even if it was only one sentence about Om ... it was sort of true.

Chup kar Pinky. Gauri bahu hain iss ghar ki ... Om ki patni hain... Dadi had to interfere to shut Pinky's Oh-My-Mata. Aise kaise hum isko bahu maanle mummy ji, aukaat kya hain iski aur hum main se kaun inki shaadi dekhne gaya thha ... Ameer ladka dekhke phasa liya hoga iss sadakchaap ne! Pinky continued the derision until she felt a sharp pull and realized Jahnvi had hit her cheek real hard ... the whole of Pinky's face started aching painfully. And before she could say any word ... Jahnvi warned her, PINKY! Main tumhaari saari bakwaas bardaasht karti hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ke tum mere bachhe ke saath bhi wahi karogi. Nobody talks to Jahnvi Singh Oberoi's Daughter-In-Law like that. Gauri ko aukaat dikhaane ke chakkar mein mujhe tumhaari aukaat pe aane mein majboor naa hi karo toh behtar hoga. Jahnvi was not that ridiculed by Pinky's behavior. Creating such scenes was Pinky's favorite pass time.

Gauri was staggered by her psyche. Her senses did not allow her to speak and her limbs gave up the idea of moving. NUMB. She did not want to wail, all the family members and housekeeping staff had witnessed enough drama but the only thought which kept revolving around her mind was the very idea of her being. Who is she? and why is she staying in Oberoi mansion? Whatever Pinky said to her made some aspect about her social standing as an Oberoi.

Omkara stood by the window to look at Gauri's previous night camping spot. A small smile adorned his lips when thought of Gauri's late dark camping adventure when she stormed in the room pulling to turn him with all possible force. Omkara was astonished but Gauri was angry.. kya hua? Om asked deciphering the expression. He knows her. Pinky aunty ne pata hain humse kya kya kaha? Unki wajah se bohot tamasha ho gaya hain ... she succumbed to tears in front of him. He understood the magnitude of the whole melodrama, After all it was Pinky- The Great! Toh tumne unse kuch kaha kyon nahi ... jawaab kyon nahi diya ... tum toh Bareilly ki tope ho naa! Yeh gusse ke toofanmel ki jagah, aansuon ki tsunami kya kar rahi hain? His doubt was genuine.

Hum kyon unhe jawaab de Omkaraji ... kis haq se? she jerked off his hand when he tried to wipe the tears. Aap Pleajj humme yahaan se jaane dijiye Omkaraji ... hum yaha rehne ki keemat apne aatma sammaan se nahi chuka sakte... aap sab ki zidd ki wajah se damm ghutne laga hain humara. It was because of the pre nuptial agreement that Tej had threatened to legally sue her if she left the marriage before three more months ... three months was the time after which she could return Omkara's share of Oberoi asset and live freely otherwise everything would be automatically transferred in her name if she tried and moved out. Gauri had to save her life from a malicious Tej Singh Oberoi ... Omkara not wanting her to leave becoming a secondary but confusing reason.

She was limping backward baby steps realizing her injured foot was paining even more now. Accidently her back hit a table and one of his semi formed damp sculpture fell on the floor totally warped. Omkara shut his eyes thinking about his previous night's hard work, lying on the floor now. he kept staring at her and she was disgusted not getting a proper response from him, she was livid. Aapne humme samajhke kya rakha hai? Jab mann karta hai baat karte hain ... Jab mann karta hain chup ho jaate ... humse baat kijiye aap, kuch toh bolne ki takleef kijiye! Gauri was splurging wrath at her Jatadhari totally dumbstruck because of his serene composure ... here she was so reactive about her emotions and he was just upto giving the " Okay-I-Am-Listening-Look!

She looked around to see different kinds of paint boxes, all the sets of brushes, charcoaled and tinted canvases, every possible kind of measuring scale and every graphite of HB pencils and finally she glanced at him, her eyes growing wider, her face swelling mad red and her fists clutched firmly. She stomped ahead of him to push down his rack of brushes and then spill all the paint splattering the floor as an abstract then she managed to break some recently painted pottery. With hands crossed against his chest he intently observed her unpredictable behavior. This was just a modest display of the kind of chaos she can create ... it was okay for him because she was not hurting herself but he was so relieved that he never accommodated any bulldozer!

She threw away his canvas boards and kicked one of the paintings at its stand when he rushed to get hold of the silk drapery of the canvas steadying it and even gripping her by the waist. She sobbed loudly as now her hurt foot was aching terribly as if it was shot at point blank range again. Please shaant ho jaao Gauri ... he requested making her sit on the bed and opened her bandage to clean the blood. She wanted to beat him with a broomstick now but her leg was paining very much and adoring him for changing her bandage was not helping her for any good. Gauri agar tumhe aur tod phod karni hain ... toh hum mere studio chalte hain ... aise satyanash karne laayak bohot saamaan milega waha par. His expression was comical but she had a twofold feeling, a part of her was guilty that she destroyed the whole of his work space but anyway it was even her room! She again considered and a part of her was amazed seeing how Omkara accepted her immature violent behavior. Her jaw dropped thinking of what exactly is her man made of? Caramel, Brown Sugar or Honey? She looked at the maroon silk covering the canvas ... the only canvas he tried and saved.

Leisurely, the maroon silk slid down the edge of his creation to reveal bright water colors, a beautiful painting ... HER PAINTING. She is amazed about how cute she looks ... two gol gapppas stuffed in her mouth with both her palms pressed on her cheeks, she remembers that her eyes were shut in excitement of the sour and spicy Gol gappa but in that moment her eyes were covered with her favorite pair of sunglasses. The sleeve of her dress was grey ... yeah she wore a grey anarkali suit that day but how is Omkara able to memorize such intricate details? He cared so much to learn by heart the RiKara acquaintance at the world famous Gol gappa stall of Sarmaji in Bareilly. Was she so important for him? She wanted to cry even more realizing Nandi is such a sweet heart.

He had knelt to change her bandage but now properly sat down to study the angles of her toe and heel. Her skin was so soft and clean ... he looked at the embossed impression of the silver anklet on her anle and gently brushed his thumb over the red design imprint. She shook his shoulder disturbing his thoughts and he looked up to see her beautiful smile. Aapne humaari tasveer banaai Omkaraji! She said pointing towards the painting and he pouted disappointedly because his surprise was ruined. Hum iss din pehli baar mile thhe naa Gauri... he said his smile matching to that of hers ... haan Omkaraji par bajaar mein nahi hum toh Mandir ke paas mile thhe! She was confused and Omkara's expression changed ... Gauri I did not want to paint a trash can out of my car ... he said with a plain face and she smacked his shoulder. Both of them chuckling.

Jaanke achha laga ke tumhe yeh painting pasand aayi, maine tumhaare liye apne dil se banaai hain Gauri ... kisi majboori ki waajah se nahi. He spoke holding her face. her brain pushed the rewind button and she recollected their tiff of last night... she had screamed at him so confused with the change in his manners and then even forced him out of the room. He was unruffled and silent then also. she had been a madder person when she dealt with Mad Kara but such Sweet Kara was proven to be driving her crazy. Why is he behaving like a nutcracker? All lovable and charming making her fall for him even more.

He wiped her wet face after tucking the tendril of hair behind her ear. Ab bataao Gauri, Kya hua? Kya kaha Chhoti maa ne tumse? He asked rubbing her hand over his palm. She started fumbling. Please Gauri main Jaan na chahta hoon ... Bataao mujhe Omkara insisted. Woh Omkaraji Pinky Aunty ne humme bohot khari khoti sunaai, bola ke hum anpadh aur sadak chaap hain , ke humne aapko shaadi ke naam pe phasaya hain aur bhi bohot bakwaas ki. Gauri did not cry as she expected that atleast now Omkara will express to her that he wants her in his life ... he did not say a word and she understood the "I Am Disgusted look on his face.

Aap apni Ghatiya harkaton se kabhi baaz nahi aaengi na! Om yelled at pinky pushing open the door of Pinky's room to note that Pinky and Ragini were scheming something ridiculous yet again. Pinky was surprised to see Omkara snap her, she had not expected it knowing that Om's anger was a rare situation and with it she even knew it was lethal. Kya hua Omkara mujhpar itna angrys kyon ho raha hai? Pinky asked wanting him to calm down. You are so versatile chhoti maa... Duniya bhar ka drama karke itni jaldi sab kuch bhool jaati hain! Om knew pinky very well and she had to learn her lesson now.

Oh My Mata! Toh tumhe uss do takke ki gawaar ne chaabi bharke bhej diya mujhse ladai karne. Pinky was going to fight with Om now. Yeh kabhi mat bhoolna ke uska naam GAURI OMKARA SINGH OBEROI hain, Om spat his annoyance. Tu aisi ladkiyon ko jaanta nahi hain Omkara ... bohot chalak hoti hain, Gauri iss ghar mein tikke rehne ke liye tujhe Phaas rahi hain. Pinky was suddenly so concerned.

Woh mere saath mere ghar mein reh rahi hain kyonki main usse shaadi karke yaha laya thha ... usse iss poore mansion mein jaha rehna hain jaise rehna hain woh reh sakti hain, I don't think you should have a problem with it! Omkara fired Pinky. Toh Omkara kalki aayi hui ladki ke liye tu mujhe ulti seedhi baatein sunaaega ... itni aasaani se bhool gaya ke humaara rishta kya hain? Pinky was upto black mailing Om emotionally.

Kaise bhool sakta hoon chhoti maa ... aapke saare rishte bachate bachate yoh main hi naajaayaz zaahir ho gaya. Omkara was so well prepared for this. Pinky began tasting disgrace. Her head was lowered her eyes fixated on the floor.

Oh dear Om ... tum uss villager ke liye itna trouble kyon face kar rahe ho? Ragini spoke pouting for one more selfie ... capturing Omkara with her in the red wall frame... she could see the irritation on his face. Om thought that Ragini was so god damn brainless ... the heights of the selfie queens stupidity were beyond his level of understanding. Ragini spoke because she wanted to. She loved the dramatic tension in the air.

Ragini I know ke Shivaay doesn't have a problem with you calling him Shivu but don't ever forget ke mera naam Omkara hain, don't take the pain of calling me Om! Aur haan jis ladki ko tum villager keh rahi ho naa woh iss family ki member hain ... tumhaari tarah koi bin bulaai mehmaan nahi and you know she does not prefer calling you Naagini like anybody else because usse baat karne ki tameez hain. Again SO NOT YOU! This much amount of Kara medicine was enough for Ragini to Shut up.

GAURI!!! Om called for her twice and then she peeped into Pinky room through the door ajar. He called her in. Both of you apologize to Gauri, right now! Saying this Om was subjected to three pairs of wide eyes. Ragini was feeling embarrassed, Pinky's ego was hurt and Gauri was not able to believe what her Jatadhari hippie just said. I am Sorry, Ragini debuted the apology... Pinky kept looking every where else in the room except Gauri not wanting to utter a sorry but meekly said it feeling Omkara's temper.

Chhoti Maa, Main Shivaay nahi hoon toh zabardasti aapko meri maa banne ki zarurat nahi hain and about Gauri ... iss galat fehmi mein mat rahiye ke Gauri apni bhaujaai ki tarah aapki harr sahi galat baat sunti aur maanti rahegi ... believe me, yeh Bareilly ka bawandar bohot khatarnaak hain ... isse gussa na hi dilaao toh behtar hoga nahi toh aapko ek jhaap lagaake aise deewar mein sataaegi ... ke aapki hi Oh My Mata ho jaaegi! Gauri could not accept the fact that her husband was so ruthlessly truthful. Aur main aapse pehli aur aakhri baar keh raha hoon ... humari personal life se durr rahiye, Om continued. Both of them held hands and left the room.

Gauri sat with her head down on Omkara's sculptor table... she was having a terrible headache after Pinky's dramatic daily soap stint. She wanted to rest but did not feel like sleeping because all of Omkara's words and actions were swirling in her heart. He repeatedly scolded her and wanted her to get out of his life and then made desperate attempts that she stays with him. Once upon a time so arrogant, now he was so supportive! He always expresses but never says that she is important to him. Gauri is not able to live with his dual personality disorder.

Suddenly she feels something being kept on her table and so she raises her head to see Omkara stirring the bowl. She takes the spoon and plays with the white liquid which even had rice and dry fruits combined. Ab aapne kaunsa angrezo wala chonchla kiya? She asked thinking what version of porridge did he bring to her. Tumhara mood bohot kharaab hain naa, isiliye kheer banaai tumhaare liye! Omkara was happy but Gauri's eyes became disco dancing saucers. Om made kheer for her? Because he wanted to uplift her mood? He is such a puzzle! Not letting her remain angry with him for more than a few moments.

Aap ko pata hain Omkaraji aap bilkul poore paagal hain, Buamaaji ke saath saath aapko bhi Paagalo waale aspataal mein bharti ho jana chahiye! Rukiye humaare paas wahaki Dr. Priya ka number hain, woh hi aapka ilaaj karengi ... Gauri's crazy dialogue made Omkara laugh out so hard ...

Arre pagli taste karke bataao toh sahi kaisi bani hain. Omkara persuaded. Gauri tasted a spoonful just to make faces and Omkara felt weird. Kya hua Gauri? He asked confident of his cooking skills. Aisi beswaad kheer banata hain koi ... bataaiye Omkara ji, pheeki si hain! The blend in milk tasted absolutely bland to her. Par Gauri maine toh isme two spoons sugar dali thhi... Om explained. Heyy Shankarji, kheer mein do chammach to kya ... do katori cheeni daalo, who bhi kam padti hain! Om stood scratching his head. No wonder he never had a sweet tooth.

Omkaraji humme lagta hain ki aapka dil aur dimaag dadi ji ke saath tirupati ki yatra par nikal gaye hain ... isiliye aap aise pagleit chirotey ho gaye hain ... humme kya kehte hain ... humaare liye kya karte hain, humme sachmein kuch samajh mein nahi aataa aur aapke saath rehkar pakka hum bhi paagal ho jaaenge! She banged her fist on the table, snatched her bowl of kheer from him and went away to do some sugar repair.

Ab tumhi bataao Gauri, Kya karu? Achhi lagne lagi ho tum mujhe ... lekin tumhe samajhte samajhte main Baura zarur jaaunga ... Dr. Priya please come to my rescue! Omkara mumbled to himself and sighed.

RESPONSE AWAITED GUYS!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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pooru 🤗
this is too beautiful and magnificient yaar.i want same scenes in show also..



woow daabaang gauri gave back to OMM nicely and even jhanvi too slapped OMM and i'm like


dabaang chirraiyya ki todphod in om's room is ek dum khidkitod..


raagini's interference.
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om is doing totte totte of OMM and naagini


omi is taking care of gauri..




thanku so much for this beautiful os pooru..see u after ur next update 🤗
Edited by lakshmi32 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres soon phataakdu and her money Di ... I am so excited to know your take 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update
Loved how Jhanvi and Omkara stood up
For Gauri
Pinky ki oh my mata ho gayi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear god..!! Utha lo mujhe..yeh toh kuch zyaada hi tha for my weak heart...u know Poorva dear, aaj prove ho gaya that we share a connection of heart...thodi hi der pehle, umm shayad 2 ghonta pehle I was under my shower nd thinking that I would pm u to write an OS on the OH MY MATA jaap karne wali Pinky's fiasco...I terribly want Omkara to know what kind of damage his choti maa did to his nanhi si biwi's heart...itna bhala bura sunaya meri Ri ko that I literally cried after watching that episode...I really wanted Om to support Ri..but show mein humare chahne aur sochne jaisa kuch hota kab hain..?!! But I was sure that if we demand an OS from our OSbaaz she won't disappoint us...mujhe sochne mein waqt laga ki I should tell u to write something where Omkara is doing OH MY MATA of Pinky..par dekho humein to Pinky ke saath saath nagini ka bhi OH MY MATA hote hue dekhne ka mauka mil gaya..thanks a lot bin bole meri dil ki baat samajhne ke liye..okay now enough of my bakbak and coming to Rikara...yeh Omkara meri jaan lega kya..?? Itna sweet kaun hota hain..!!! Aaawww...I'm in love with this Omie...purane understanding Kara nd dabang Ri...waah..!! kya halat ki hain apne kamre ki...aisa thod phod ke baad bhi mera Omie kitna shan't tha...he tried to calm her down...apni biwi ki bhayankar krodh ka andaza hain jatadhari ko...aur woh painting..!! Hayee...yeh tamannah bhi poori ho gayi...she was surprised as well as me..this part was totally unexpected..but surprises kise naa pasand..?? Aur phir woh anklet wala moment...CV's ko yaad bhi hoga ki Kara ke paas ek anklet bhi hain apni biwi ka...!! kitna kuch dekhna chahte hain hum..par milega kuch nehi...but when u r here why should we think so much..kisi na kisi tarah se poori kar hi deti ho humari wishes..nd I was laughing like hell after reading the kheer wala scene...khana atak gaya tha mere gale mein...who put 2 spoons of suger to kheer..?? Omie sach mein mithaai se darta hain..lekin biwi jab itni mithi ho toh mithaai se dur bhagke kya fayda..!! Paglait chirota..Dr.Priya ko bulao GKS AT se Omie ka dimaag theek karne...apni biwi ke pyaar mein pagal ho gaya hain...uske saath saath main bhi pagal ho gayi hoon after reading this..kehne ki zaroorat toh nehi..phir bhi I want to hug u for this amazing OS nd fulfilling my barson ka tamannas...u r such a darling...waise inti lambi comment ke baad agar aap theek rahogi toh will u plz send jhanvi to me as my saasu maa...?? Plz plz..?? I just loved her..saasu mom goals hain woh...aur rahi baat aapki tarif ki toh I just want to say I LOVE YOU itnaaa sara...thanks for the pm..nd thanks a trillion for writing this...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb OS
Just what I want to see in show
But u know what the viewers want
Only u can give us these Rikara moments
Which we are dieing to see in the show


Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing OS. I love all ur works and love the way you xpress each and every emotion.
awesome work.

Keep writing nd keep smiling.😊😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!
This was absolute perfection my dear princess!

Kya OS likhi hai OSBaaz ne aaj... Hum sab ki OMM kar di! 👏

I've so wanted Kara to know about all the venom Pinky unloaded on Ri... lekin aaj to aap ne humein poori confrontation, declaration aur reparation bhi de di. Thank you so much for writing this... I can't tell you just how satisfying this was to read and more than that, just how amazing it is to know that this could be canon... you could just take this enblock and fit this into an episode and still have the same story flow as now... so this is my headcanon from now on.

Every bit of this OS was absolutely perfect my friend... you kept their characterizations and made them even better! From Gauri's temper tantrum to Omkara's calm response, his own confrontation with Pinky and Ragini (who was fabulously funny btw) and the final bumbling attempt to make kheer for his lovely wife. This is how Omkara should be, how he should react and how he should try to express himself... And Gauri's gentle exasperation with her husband's weird ways of expressing himself was perfection too! I love, love, love this!

Thanks for sharing...

Can't wait to read more awesomeness from you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another mind blowing story from you 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its superb ... bindaas rikara!! Ok starting talk like gauri that's nice..why did u include pinky drama that will be bit dispointed...always u rock it...who is dr.priya??

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