ONE SHOT: FREE BABY updtd LAST PART PG 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
hehehe anika rocked OM members shocked
hehe kya entry maari hai
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
This is Damn Interesting!!
I am like the Story is going to be Khidkitod Awesome. ...
Do Continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
plzzz update soon
loved it❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
SOUNDS INTERESTING, DO CONTINUE PLEASE
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Fantastic concept
Eagerly waiting
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Omm!!! Ee kaise ho Gaya??
This is gonna be super funny I know
Plz update soon.m waiting

A request wen u update plz.pm me so I can read further parts
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Please continue there is so much suspense ohh God don't be so cruel dear please continue the story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

PART 1
FREE BABY
Image result for baby photos

Bade papa: What pregnant...

Daadi: Billu baap banne wala hai????

Pinky: Mein toh meri bahu ki swagat ki thaiyyari kar rahi thi,, ab toh free mein pota/poti bhi milne wali hai mujhe...

Saumya: Ha choti maa sach mein..

Dad: Shivay yeh sab kuch ho kya raha hai..

Shivaay: I don't know dad, and I don't know this girl,, one second,,, let me handle this... (to Anika),, tell me the truth who are you?? And why are you here?

anika: Shivaay,, mein,, Anika,, your Anika...

shivaaay: Don't try to act smart,, ok,, tell me I don't know who you are,, so tell me the truth or else I will call the police...

anika: (crying)... shivaay,, you forgot me,, itni jaldi,,, your forgot our love... mein ek bewakoof joh aapse pyaar kar baiti,, mein to hiss kanji eyes ki pyaar mein doob gayi,, (crying and sniffing)

all: Love...

Shivaay: Om, rudra, daadi,, believe me guys,, she is lying,, I don't know her,,,

Anika: You don't know me,, ok tell me 2 week pehle aap kahan the,, Bangalore mein the na,, and you were staying in rosewoods hotels , room no: 657mein right..

Om: Yeah,, how do you know that??

Anika: Because he himself told me,,, jab hamari phone per baat huyi thi thab..

Shivaay: No,, that's not true...

Daadi: Billu tum chup raho,,

Shivaay: Daadi I,,,,

Daadi: Aap bolo beta...

Anika: Daadi ji,, me and my parents stays in bangalore, papa ki wahan hotel hai,, I too helps him in his business,, aur we two met each other at our hotel and then you know...

Rudra: Yeah we know...love shove... (anika blushed and smiled)

Shivaay: Rudyyy,,,,,

Rudra: Bhaiyya,, isme mein kya karoo,, you fell in love, you did all the karnama,, and you are going to be a papa soon... waise bhaiyya, boy hoga ya girl???

Shivaay: Shut uppp rudyy...

Rudra: Acha tik hai bhabhi you tell me,, boy or girl??

Anika: Waise I wished to have a boy like him,, kanji ankhewale..

Saumya: Oh,, so sweet bhabhi...

Shivaay: Will you guys shut up,,, and she is not your bhabhi ok,, nor wife or my baby's mother..

Om: Shivaay,, par sochne ki baat hai ki,, agar tumhe koi,, you know like some galti or,,,

Shivaay: Om now you too,,

Gauri: Nahi bade bhaiyya,, aap ek aur baar sochiye,, anika bhabhi bahut achi hai,, wo bhi choot kyu bolegi,,

Shivaay: Toh mein choot bol raha hoon..

(omakara signaled gauri to keep mum,, because he knew shivaay ki sir garam ho raha ab,, agar yeh baatchit zyada chala toh wo kisi ko jaan se maar phi daalunga..)

Shi: Guys,, koi toh mujhpar trust karo,,, (hearing this om thought for a second and said)

Om: Ok anika bhabhi,, aapke paas aap dono ki koi photo hoga kya??

Anika: Photo...

Shi: Thank you OM,, you said it... (anika looked at shivaay and said)

Anika: I had our photos but I deleted it,, because shivaay said,, agar kisi ke haat photo lag gayi toh problem ho jaayega and media also will create problem for me and my family,, I belived him.. and now yeh mujhe cheat kiya... cheat kiya... mere mamma papa,, (anika again started crying.)

Janvi: Arey beta don't cry its not good for your health it will affect the baby you know..

Daadi: Billu don't shout at her ok,, , its not good for your baby,,,

Shi: Its not my baby,,,

Dadi: Billu... Tum chup kar,, beta iski baat mat sunna,, (daadi gives paani to anika) aap paani piyo,,

(after having water anika thought something and said to om.)

Anika: Aap inki phone se jane ko phone karo..

Shi: Mein kisi jane nahi jaanta..

Saumya: Jane kaun??

Rudra: Bhaiyya koi aur ladki bhi hai is line mein??

Shi: Shut up rudy...

(om takes shivay's phone and searches for the name jane)

Om: Jane hai shivaay..

Shi: No it cant be... (om dials the number and anika's phone rings and everyone become confused)

Gauri: See bade bhaiyya ne bhabhi ji ka number koi aur naam mein save kiya hai,, aur hum mein se kiso shak bhi na ho..

Rudra: Sahi ho bhabhi..

Shivaay shouted on top of his voice...

Shi: NNNOOO...

Ok guys I decided to write the story in two parts so will post the LAST part today itself.. so guys support and encourage me with your replies.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
It was damn hilarious..
Totally funny.
Is it plan of OmRu with Dadi and all??
May be I am wrong:)
But totally loved this
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Hahahhahaha really funny know one believe shivaay
smart anika 😆 poor shivaay 🤣
Actually kya raita he ?
very excited for next
countinue soon

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