Rikara SS 'Teri Yaddein' 'Part 10' updated |7 September| - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: loveispure

Such a cute story. I can imagine the scene.

Looking forward to your updates.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: harekrishnahare

Superb

Waiting for next update



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Posted: 8 years ago
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A/N After reading this part do tell me if you like group scenes or not. If u don't like group scenes then from next part I will try to post only Rikara scenes. Also like this part for om's coz u all are not on my buddy list [B][/B]

Part 4

"No i don't think so"

"Why can't O be smart like me. If I was at him I would've made amends in click of my fingers"

"Yeah you did with romi"

"Sumo you just concentrate on your food okay"

She gaped her mouth at his comment and poked her tongue out teasing.

"Stop it. You guys are married. Don't act like kids"

"Awww ap bhi na ek number ke Billu ji hai"

Anika pulled shivaay's cheeks adoringly

"Anika..what are you doing"

He tried to move away from her pinching fingers.

"Why does always the spirit of SSO comes in to you"

"You are married and plus have a kid. Don't behave like her"

Rudy retaliated.

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Emptying half jug of oil on floor Rudy got up with a thumbs up to trio in front settled on couch.

Rudy quickly joined them on couch.

"Gauri look that vase is so pretty right.?"

Gauri stopped and looked at anika. She glanced at vase at her right side and nodded.

She continued her walk to kitchen

"Gauri.."

"Yes.?"

"It.. uhhmm. It has some dust on it so why don't you clean it"

"The cleaning hasn't done properly I have to talk with khanna about this"

Comprehending, gauri resume her walk.

"No you do it now because shivaay hates dust"

Gauri looked at her suspiciously

"Yes I hate dust..it's just"

"Since when did you start noticing dust.?"

Om asked descending stairs

"Because dust is... dust is harmful"

Rudy replied

"O come here quick"

Rudy calls him and he walks in suspicion

"Wait stop"

He yelp and om stopped in his tracks shocked at his behavior

"You stopped too soon. Take a step forward"

Shivaay was ready to swatt rudy's head and anika did that on his shoulder

"He meant.. to say...shivaay what did he meant.."

"He meant.. oh no what's that on you shirt. Oh god gauri check"

Shivaay panicked and gauri rushed, slipping after few steps as planned.
Om quickly held her with shoulders

"Are you okay.?"

She nodded and he left her.

Gauri checked if there was something but

"There is nothing"

She stated and he agreed

"It flew. Shh. There are flies and insects I should ask khanna for pest control"

They stood there staring suspiciously, shocked to see shivaay's behavior. He was behaving way too weird and they very well knew it was due to rudra or anika that they managed to make him weird from sensible.

Om glanced back at gauri. She was still suspiciously staring but turned around to leave and He took a step back clearing her way.

She left and he saw her retreating figure he strolled to dining table for some water to clear his mind from her thoughts

"Fhat the wuck.! How is this possible. No oh saathiya moment"

Anxiously Rudy looked at them.

"That was a bad idea"

Shivaay stood up and left

"I should go help gauri"

"I'll come with you for company"

Anika left with soumya following her

"Am I the only one in this mansion sane"

Rudy expressed sadly

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I again tried to bend my hands trying my best to tie two threads on my back

I did it so easily in morning but why is it difficult now.

I tried again.

"May I.?"

I smiled and nodded

He tied those two hanging threads on my back swiftly. Not to forget the warm feeling I felt at the brush of his fingers on half bare skin on my back

I turned back with a smile and encircled my hands around his neck

"My jatadhari is such a gentleman"

Adoringly I brushed my nose with his, tiptoeing.

He smiled warmly at me. The smile which could make any heart flutter

I blinked at my reflection with moist eyes and smiled cherished

"May I.?"

I heard his soft voice and noticed him standing right back hesitantly

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The look on her face I saw through mirror made me admire her even more.

The smile she had as if cherishing the moment again made me smile back at her.

The constant admiration I had for her made me more conscious but I couldn't restrain myself from helping her.

I tied those pink threads which had accessorized small round ball at end.
Carefull not to brush my fingers while doing.

More careful about my feelings, my attraction which wasn't a good sign. I'm not that kind of a guy who ogle or attract to any girl but this girl.

She was different. She awakened the feelings which I never felt before making me fancy.

Her rapturous behavior is what I always crave for. It makes me yearn.

I don't want to complicate things more with my attraction or whatever it is I can't forget what is she though.

The girl in my memory is real or the one standing Infront of me.?

I quivered at sudden soft scratching above the cloth of my pants near my ankle, breaking my out of my muse

I looked down and saw ved who sat their looking here and there and soon vyoom went straight crawling to gauri and sat just below her, near her foot waiting to get picked.

"Oh you came here"

She looked surprised

"They were in crib right.?"

"Yes then they woke up and I made them busy with toys and games in their room. I guess they got bored and crawled back here"

She smiled sweetly at vyoom who sat there with his hands resting in his lap.

Now I knew why she always kept the door open.

*knock, knock*

Shivaay stood at the door

"Hey shivaay come in"

"No I just came to call gauri"

"What happened bade bhaiya.?"

"Don't know anika was calling you. Why don't you ask yourself"

She nodded and looked down at kids and back at me, then she left with shivaay leaving me alone with kids. Again.

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I entered in bade bhaiya's room and he followed me inside closing the door behind.

Rudy and soumya were also present.

"What wrong.?"

I asked

"I asked the doctor about om's amnesia today. The reason for his amnesia was the side effect of sleeping drugs"

I stared at him horrified

"He was having ambien for about week and after that he was given a high dosage of benzodiazepines and it caused amnesia"

"But why would he have that"

I asked startled

"That's the point. Did he ever mentioned you about this.? Or was he having any kind of stress.?"

I tried to think hard

"He was stressed about his upcoming projects and the offer of joining Oberoi Industries but he never mentioned about having sleeping drugs or something like that"

"How could I be so careless"

Shivaay threw his phone on wall and I flinched at the noise. it shattered in pieces at the impact.

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There was one person in the room who was stiffened, with face turning pale.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Let me answer ur question first..group scenes are good..but to be honest I personally don't like anybody to interfere in Rikara life...I mean Rikara is a sensible couple..though Om is having an amnesia, I've faith that both of them are matured enough to recreate the magic of their love again...so if they sort out everything with their own way it'll be great...otherwise I love obros nd obahus...anyways back to Rikara..Ri was recollecting the moments spent with her Kara..their dori scene before amnesia made her teary eyed...Omkara is getting attracted to her..but somewhere in his mind there is picture of the girl he met in Bareilly..so I understand it's difficult for him to accept the attraction for her..I guess it'll take some time to build up their relation with the Kali thakur wali misunderstanding..koyi nehi..I'm ready to wait..as long as they're together I've no complain..it was awesome..but I'm thinking who could drug Omkara...for now I'm totally clueless...but dekhte hain age kya hoga...thanks for the pm..nd really sorry for taking so much time to read nd response...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Fabulous update
Loved how everyone was trying
To get them together
Rudy really is smart
But has lame ideas
But his enthusiasm makes away for all failures

Loved how he said
U stopped too soon
It was so funny

Gauri was remembering the old event
And here is Omkara to relive that moment
But Omkara doesn't remember
He is attracted to her
Doesn't want to be
But can't help it

Now coming to why om has amnesia
Why was he stressed in first place
When he has such a wonderful family
Here everyone is discussing something serious
There Omkara has to handle ved & vyoom

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
hahahaha its funny how om panics with his kids😆
reason for om's anxiety.. suspense building up. nicely done👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Hey i read all 4 parts of your ss. And believe me it is very intersting..i enjoyed each and everything
Love rikara love whole family the way they try to help
Especially rudyy..he is very funny han...
You mentioned above about group scenes.. i family scenes but kabhi kabhi i really want to see rikara scenes seprately.. plz try to write some seperate scenes of rikara..their convo
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
This is a beautiful story.

Waiting for the next chapter
Plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Oh so reason behind om's memory loss revealed
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Let me answer ur question first..group scenes are good..but to be honest I personally don't like anybody to interfere in Rikara life...I mean Rikara is a sensible couple..though Om is having an amnesia, I've faith that both of them are matured enough to recreate the magic of their love again...so if they sort out everything with their own way it'll be great...otherwise I love obros nd obahus...anyways back to Rikara..Ri was recollecting the moments spent with her Kara..their dori scene before amnesia made her teary eyed...Omkara is getting attracted to her..but somewhere in his mind there is picture of the girl he met in Bareilly..so I understand it's difficult for him to accept the attraction for her..I guess it'll take some time to build up their relation with the Kali thakur wali misunderstanding..koyi nehi..I'm ready to wait..as long as they're together I've no complain..it was awesome..but I'm thinking who could drug Omkara...for now I'm totally clueless...but dekhte hain age kya hoga...thanks for the pm..nd really sorry for taking so much time to read nd response...



They are matured and will solve their problems alone because they would obviously think and do what they feel. It's just sometimes obahus and shivru try to solve it in their own way 😆 Rikara no doubt creates magic every time they are together
Yup guessed it all right
Ur welcome thanks for liking it dear 😊 🤗

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