Rikara SS 'Teri Yaddein' 'Part 10' updated |7 September| - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
such a cute 'glucose biskoot' moment bw rikara. they are so organic and natural...
rudy being his adorable best trying to get his bhaiya bhabi closer😆
clever anika and awkward shivay! lol. i want kheer it seems! and i just cannot get enough of panicking daddykara with mamas boy vyoom!👏
loved your update! suspense building up nicely🤓
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahan
finally getting close to why Omkara lost memory
Love how everyone is trying
Making Omkara remember
He knows he remembers
But that's all stored somewhere in his mind

Shivika are trying to make om restless
So that he can see what Gauri means
She is an important part of his life
Without whom he can't function

I was missing the twins
Vyoom must be missing Gauri so much
And troubling omkara unlike Bed

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
So Omkara remember that she loves Sharma ji ki "THELE" ka golgappa...he also drank the Gauri famous "GULUCOZ BISKOOT" wali tea...glad that things are falling into place eventually..jaane anjaane mein hi sahi, he's missing Ri's presence...nd his son Vyoom is tough to handle..the whole update was worth waiting for 1 week..but I couldn't understand the last part..why Rudy is so tensed...?? Will be waiting for the next update...thanks for the pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update yar
Totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
A/N sorry guys couldn't reply to all of your comments inshallah will try to reply them tomorrow. I'm posting this part early and in but hurry. Enjoy and comment your views 😊


Part 6

Soumya stood behind Rudy with guilt across her face, she wiped her tear stained cheeks

"Rudy come bade Baal wale bhaiya is calling gauri Bhabhi"

Rudra who was down on his knees quickly wiped his tears and stood up, strolling out in hurry not sparing a glance at her. Trying to hide his face

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"And then you keep stirring it on slow heat"

Gauri stirred in vessel of white thick mixture, bubbles popping with heat.

Shivaay slowly nodded

"Oh..so..that how you prepare kheer"

Shivaay stammered while anika nodded with a grin. Impressed and commonly excited both.

"It's done

Switching off heat gauri turned around ready to leave

"No wait.."

Shivaay tried to stop, anika rushed blocking gauri's way

"You can't go"

Anika stated honesty

"But why.?"

Gauri asked exasperated

"You didn't say how to.."

Shivaay looked at anika

"How to...garnish"

"What.!"

Shivaay and gauri said in unison

"Yes. Billu ji hain na. He doesn't know how to garnish"

Gauri looked at shivaay with raised eyebrows. He just stared loss of words

"But I thought he knows"

Gauri thoughtfully stared

"Obviously bade bhaiya knows everything"

She comprehend

"No he doesn't know everything but he actually shows that he knows. inko toh bas apni tadi dikhani hai tadi Baaz hai na"

Gauri smiled more like force smiled

"No worries bade bhaiya. I have lot of time I will just go and get some cashews"

She left

"Garnishing.? Seriously Anika"

"What.? Atleast i made up something which she also believed not to forget"

"Tell me once again why we are doing this.?!"

"If they both stay apart they will understand their importance and then we will lock them and they will be hum hai rahi pyaar ke.."

"Okay I get it"

Tugging out her phone from her dupatta gauri dialed om's number but quickly hang up before it could ring feeling insecure and her phone buzzed flashing om

"Hello.?"

"Gauri where the hell are you.? I'm so stressed since morning you haven't even brought my fresh juice leaving me all alone how could you do this. Do you know how much I'm mis..."

Om breathed it out but stopped, hesitated like always.

Omkara Singh Oberoi/believer of love and truth is himself running away from truth and his feelings realizing that "words are always easy to be spoken it's actions which yourself makes it incredible"

"I'm...stuck"

She didn't knew what to say

"What do you mean by stuck. Come up here this instant I need...vyoom needs you "

Unsaid feelings weren't filing their gap of unknown distance

"You are her mom to. You should check up on him"

Om didn't realize that his excuses were mistaken

"Thank you for reminding me that I'm just their mother"

The line cut off

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"O, what's wrong.?"

Rudy along with soumya barged in worried at vyoom's whining

"I don't know he's just crying"

"But why.?"

"How would I know that.!"

Om glared and Rudy took him from om's arms

"Shhh my baby your favorite Chacha is here"

Now vyoom was wailing loudly

"O, he's your son handle him"

Rudy quickly passed him back to om

"I think i should go to gauri

Om worriedly said ready to walk out to his gauri but stopped in tracks due to rumya blocking his way

"No you give him to me. I will handle"

She took vyoom and paced in room trying to pacify him with her lullaby but he wasn't ready to listen, he kept fidgeting

"Why are we doing this again.?"

Soumya whispered while Rudy ignored

"Oh god chulbul Bhabhi could easily calm him in second. Only she can do that"

Rudy stated

"Why do you keep calling her that.? Her name is gauri"

He got tensed with his sudden question

"It's a long story. I will tell you when we will be alone in depth of calmness"

He mimicked Om trying to shrug of his question

"There is no need for a long story. Gauri Bhabhi is chulbul and chulbul is gauri Bhabhi"

Soumya said pacing

"What.?"

Om asked utterly confused

"After you abandoned her in bareily she came here in disguise of a boy for 3 months"

"What.?"

He was stunned at the piece of news while Rudy glared at soumya

"Why is vyoom crying.?"

Gauri's worried voice made rumya hurry out with vyoom comprehending to stop her

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After feeding vyoom and making him sleep , she placed him in crib and somehow managed to sneak out of twins room without anyone noticing.

She carefully opened the door of her room ready to pick ved up and leave. Not bother him anymore. Her heart ached at that thought.

om was sitting on bed with his back faced to her

"Om

Before she could complete om stood up roughly and turned around.

His eyes were colour of red and it was scaring her deeply at his look

"Why.? Why did you lied"

"Iie.?"

She uttered still scared at his fury

"What should I call you. Chulbul or gauri.?"

"Om that.."

"Omkara"

He corrected with venom dripping voice and in no time her cheeks were wet with trials of tears

"ANSWER ME"

He yelled and she shivered at his voice

"That... wa..s..not my in...tention"

She uttered in low voice between her sobs

"THEN WHAT WAS YOUR INTENSION.!"

He roared and she shudder with her palms in tight ball with fingers sinking deep in skin.

"TELL ME"

She took a step bravely raising her hand

"Om.."

"Don't you dare touch me"

He took a step back pointing finger.

Those words in low voice shattered her. She never in her nightmare thought her om would say something like this.

In those few minutes of silence their hearts were pounding.

His words poisoning her while his misconceptions eating him.

"Om whats wrong.?"

Shivaay hurried inside asking with others joining

"Ask her. I can't believe even you fell for her fake sweet talkings.

"She is a cheat"

Om yelled pointing his finger at gauri, still staring at shivaay

"She managed to get in house with her fake disguise."

"Om please"

Shivaay tried to calm him

"No shivaay. Don't pity on her crocodile tears"

Om spoke trying to apprehend shivaay

"I can't believe you could be so vile and vindictive"

Om accused

"STOP IT"

Shivaay grabbed his arm dragging him out with grasping gauri hand with other arm. Treading to his room
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
o god it's getting messed up yar...he is again missunderstanding her...wat will happen now
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Posted: 8 years ago
misunderstanding getting deeper and deeper. I wonder why can't Om think. Always jump into conclusion fast.
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow I knew this moment will came
back to square 1 OMKARA IS BEING OMKARA



i loved this part waiting for the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh no..!! He misunderstood her again...back to where their story started from...I hope the misunderstanding will be cleared soon...can't see her in pain...the turning point was interesting...update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Intresting turning point
Amazing update dear
So again he misunderstood gauri..gosh... why he was not listening her bs conclusion pe pahunch gya...atleast once.. he should give her one chance to clarify this mess..
Oh god what will happen now...sahi hai lock them in room😆
Update soon

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