Rikara SS 'Teri Yaddein' 'Part 10' updated |7 September| - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: book.worm

Loving how the story is progressing.


Loving how, Gauri by hiding her love, it is becoming more evident to Omkara... and loving how he is craving for her😳...

Vyoom too smart... I guess, he either got Gauri's or Shivaay's intelligence🤣

Hun... pls do post an index on the first page or update ur title with the page number.. coz it was a little difficult finding the part 2😳



Kuku.. 🤗 thanks for commenting. I'm sooo glad u liked it 😳

Yup they share unsaid understanding of love and care. After all they are bonded

He got gauri's intelligence. Remember her khidki tod ideas about getting rid of swety 😆

Yeah I thought about that now that u have mentioned I have done it already 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A/N okay so first I wanna tell you guys that after posting part 2 I thought about what if hey baby track comes and obros have to take care of a baby. I literally thought that and now it's happening. I was surprised and happy both. This track even has a plus point. We can imagine om with kids without any problem lol. Coming back to the story i thought this part right after posting part 2 at night but couldn't write as I was sleepy and in morning I was busy but somehow I managed. One more thing I did a blunder mistake that I wrote bhavya instead of soumya in hurry. So it's Rudy with soumya. This part is long enjoy reading

Part 3

She caressed his back walking while he nuzzled sleepily.

He must be enjoying that. If I would have known this would be the consequences I would never leave Rudy so loose.

Vyoom was slowly dozing off. I glanced back at her face.

"..want"

She looked at me with soothing expression and I jiggled my head.

"What did you just said.?"

I asked

"I said if you want you can go and sleep"

"No.. no it's fine I could take a walk. But if you want me to leave then I.."

"No"

She hurriedly replied before I could complete my sentence I smiled at her cuteness.

Her eyes were now stick to ground.

I shoved my hands in my track pockets walking leisurely.

"You are really good at this.. all this"

I waved my hand gesturing vyoom but her eyes were still on ground.

"Time always teaches you everything"

'That should have been my line'. She is chirpy from outside and loving from inside. Something which I haven't thought about her before.

"Even my whole family loves you"

I smiled at how she managed to gel up in my family so easily, it was so magical. The way everyone loves her like, she was always needed here but was just late to come.

I glanced back at her face for a reply but her body stiffened and I realized what I said.

"Our family"

Her face was serious, with eyes still on ground as if hiding her emotions getting scared that with one look it will be revealed.

"Everybody loves you gauri"

I stated and she smiled. Finally.

"I'm lucky. I feel so lucky to be surrounded by such people. Anika bhaujai who is like my sister. Bade bhaiya who doesn't show his feelings but always cares for me about what I need and what I don't. Rudy bhaiya could fight whole world for me. Even in the toughest situations he doesn't fail to make me smile. Soumya fills the bill of my strict sister who always tells me what to do and what not to do. She even doesn't let me have my favorite gol gappa's once in a week because she thinks it's not good for health. Bade bhaiya always supports her in that"

She pouted while I chuckled.

"Even Dadi maa everyone are like my own family"

"This is your family too gauri"

She looked up, now her brown orbs were staring at mine.

"Thank you for filling my life with love and care which only my maa gave me. Thank you letting me know what a family love truly means"

We stood there in silence. Her words made my heart swell and I felt a unknown feeling of happiness and satisfaction at her smile.

Her angelic face glowed in moonlight with her smile making it more beautiful and vyoom in her arms. The visual was like a dream coming true.

"Gauri. I.."

Droplets of water dropped down with thundering sound of clouds. She quickly clutched to vyoom and hurried inside.

I stared at her retreating figure, slowly disappearing in darkness inside.

I threaded my fingers in hair, closing my eyes, feeling the drops of water and her words sinking deep in creating havoc of unknown emotions.

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I stepped out closing the door behind with scuffing my hair with towel.

"Omkara, please put these clothes on them I have already changed their diapers I have to go and prepare for breakfast"

I stopped scuffing and looked at her and babies lied on my bed in diapers and short pants. I glanced back at her and she looked at me expectantly in hurry waiting for my answer.

"There are servants here to do the work"

"Yes but I have to look after them and also you like to drink fresh juice right.?"

I nodded.

"But it's just shirt. You can put it on and leave"

I tried to reason.

"Yes it's just a shirt"

She hurried out replying with a sorry expression.

"But gauri.."

She left and I stood there.

"It's ok om it's just a shirt"

Placing the towel on chair I walked to bed. There was a small blue color tshirt with a red car drew on front

I picked it and saw ved giggling at me, waving his both hands in speed.

I threaded the shirt in short.

"Why does the hole of this shirt is so small. How is this suppose to go through the baby's small delicate head."

Looking down at ved with a frown not knowing what to do. He was looking at his hands waving them both in full speed and now his legs kicking in air.

I sat on bed bending down with my hands in hole of shirt. Trying to stretch the hole with my hands.

The hole stretched but a ripple sound came and I stopped. I stared at the small line of tore cloth at the side of hole.

I gulped.

"Fhat the wuck"

I guess I used a tad bit more force. quickly getting up i searched for another Tshirt but it wasn't in room.

it's must've kept in kids room. I sneaked out and grabbed the first shirt I saw, hiding the tore one in somewhere deep inside the pile of clothes in small cupboard.

I came back and sat. I can't keep them naked for so long, should hurry otherwise they would catch cold

With a deep breath I slowly raised his head and quickly slid it down carefully.

Ved scrunched his nose, pouting and sneezed.

Worried I quickly pulled the shirt down without sliding his hands out of shirt.

I grabbed one side of the sleeve. The hole was really small. I don't know how gauri does this. I put my three fingers inside the sleeve and pulled his hand out and repeated the same with other one.

Smiling a breath of relief and felt like doing a happy dance and my happiness was short lived as I glanced at vyoom.

I gulped scared and touched my nose. He played with his toy and glanced at me chuckling at my expression.

Quickly changing my expression into a serious one and grabbed another tshirt laid beside him.

Gently i raised his head but he started shaking his head left right.

"Vyoom. Stay still"

He wasn't listening and shook his head slipping away from my hold. His head laid back on bed and he giggled looking at toy flicking it in his hand.

Again i tried and raised his head firmly and slipped through the hole ignoring his whine and attempts.

Pulling the shirt down, propping my three fingers inside one sleeve, I tried to grab his hand which was clutched to the toy and he tried to shook it inside the shirt.

I couldn't pull the toy out along with his hand. Not to forget the hole is small.

Grabbing the toy with other hand. I tried to pull away but his grasp was tight and he wasn't ready to leave.

I snatched it away and he started wailing. Worriedly I tried to grab his hand with my fingers but he moved his hand away wailing.

He was stubborn and I was his dad. I grabbed his hand putting my fingers as much as I can inside the sleeve. I pulled out his hand and repeated the same with other one.

I got up relieved but his wailing made worried. I sat down to pick him.

"What happen. Is everything alright.? Breakfast is ready"

Gauri came for rescue and picked vyoom. As usual he became silent as if he never cried.

"Cry baby Oberoi part two."

I murmured.

"What.?"

"Nothing"

"Why is his shirt backside front and front backside"

She asked and I realized my mistake. He was wearing it backside front.

"And why is ved wearing diff.."

"Will meet you at breakfast"

I hurried out not letting her complete. Embarrassed.

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After breakfast shivaay came with his phone glued to ear as always.

"Mama"

Came a voice of small girl. I looked at the door.

A small girl of about 3 years old came running. She was wearing a frock with two ponytails.

'Another kid'

I stared at gauri petrified while she smiled sweetly at the kid.

The girl leaped into Anika bahbhi's arms and I let out breath, I didn't realized I was holding.

I noticed the girl. She had anika's skin tone with lips and face. Her eyes were grey like shivaay's

She was a replica of shivika.

"This is my daughter anishka"

Shivaay said looking at me.

"You are telling me this now"

"Yes because I didn't wanted to stress you more since three days"

"Exactly. There were whole three days and you didn't tell me. It wasn't a news to be stressed about"

I stated annoyed.

"I'm sorry om. I just wanted you to meet her in person"

"Anishka come and meet your Chachu"

He instructed her and she came running in my arms. I smiled at her. Her hands were on my neck and she hugged me and I hugged her back.

"I can't believe I'm chachu"

"Your happiness is short lived o. I'm her favourite"

Rudy piped in grabbing ani away from my hold and clutching her happily.

"Right ani"

She shook her head in a no and I chuckled.

"Omg ani. That means I'm your only favourite"

He flunged away with her, holding her tight.

While shivaay and I smiled.

Maa and mr Oberoi came

"I hope she hasn't troubled you badi maa"

"It's okay shivaay don't worry. She is sweet and sober just like you"

Shivaay smiled

"Om are you fine. Shivaay told me what happened and I was worried because I wasn't here with you"

"I'm fine maa. Where did you went.?"

"Me and tej went to Bangkok. Tej had some business meeting there and I decided to go along with him and took anishka with us as both shivaay and anika needed a break"

Shivaay smiled sheepishly

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Om played with ved sitting at the end of couch enjoying Ved's giggles at his funny faces while on the other side gauri was feeding vyoom with milk bottle and he was sucking happily in her arms.

Six pair of eyes stared at the couple

"Shivaay. You are seeing what I'm seeing"

"Yes"

"We should do something"

"O is looking dangerous in those expressions"

"Why would you do something. I have to do something"

"What do you mean by I"

Anika glanced at shivaay who was busy in his phone.

"How many time should I tell you to leave the SSO on the entrance of OM and become my Billu ji when you are with family"

Shivaay smiled and inched close to anika

"My billu ji"

He repeated and she blushed

*ahem, ahem*

Shivika straightened

"She is talking about bade Baal wale bhaiya and gauri bhabhi"

"Oh"

"I think we should lock them in room"

"Why does 84.2% people in India come up with same idea which doesn't work"

"No it does somu"

"I have a khidki tod idea. What we will do is.."

She shut her mouth and led her raised hands down on lap.

"What are you guys talking about.?"

Om asked while gauri nodded and stared at them with knitted eyebrows.

"Nothing"

"You were talking about some idea"

"Yes. Idea about you bot.."

Shivaay stretched his hand and swatted Rudy's head.

While Rikara stared in more confusion.

"Ow"

He glared at shivaay and realized what he was saying

"I mean idea about bhaiya's exercise"

"Exercise.?"

Om asked

"Exercise.?"

Shivaay repeated

"Yes that's what I was telling, idea about loosing wait or gaining weight"

Om just stared baffled

"Yes so bhaiya you should take protein shake"

"Why are you so obsessed with protein shake. I guess you are missing it"

"No it's here with me sumo"

He took out his sipper from his left side and took a sip of it.

Om ignored them

"Gauri I think ved is also hungry"

"I will just put vyoom in crib and come back with another bottle"

She got up and left carefully not waking vyoom up from his sleep and after few minutes came back with a bottle from kitchen.

"How did you know that he is hungry"

"Because he was sucking his thumb"

She looked surprised and kneeled down.

"Before feeding we have to check the milk first"

He nodded and she grabbed his hand, flipped it back. He quickly adjusted ved on his lap making him sit and his hand supporting his back.

She tilted the bottle and dropped one drop of milk on the back of his hand

"How is it.?"

Gauri asked and om stared confused at her question

"Is it cold or warm.?"

"Warm"

He replied

"Okay then you have taste it like this"

Her lips touched the back of his hands

He could feel her sucking the drop with tip of her tongue touching his skin.

He inhaled sharp at feel of her soft lips touching, sucking his skin making his heart thump fast and warm feeling spreading through his entire body.

She left his hand and looked at him

"I'm sorry. Actually I have the habit of rechecking the milk every time though it's not necessary"

He gaze at her, adoring her blabbering and just then she bit her lower lip nervously and he felt like kissing her just right there senseless

"I think we should lock them in room with babies"

Please do like and comment, sharing your review. Suggestions, recorrections, criticism are more than welcome. Please like and comment I would be glad to read and reply them. Next part will be a little serious type
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
awesome Loved it yar...
om's expression was too funny yar when he saw shivika's kid...he thought that he had another kid too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Itna lamba update..!! It was like bonus for us..loved it...thanks for the pm dear...nd plz do continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
It was really funny when was struggling to change the kiddos clothes and when Shivaay's daughter was calling mamma and Om thought another baby. Please update soon. This is so good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Thanks for the PM, it is getting difficult to track updates in the combined forum😃. Another great update keep it up. Next one is serious😲 no problem as long as Rikara are together and solving the issues. Pls update soon.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
OMG
It was awesome
It was so easy to imagine Omkara with kids
Loved how Gauri left him the task
He even tore one shirt
Hid it & got new one like a thief
Even made vyoom wear the shirt opposite
He needs some time
All this was so cute

Well ved looks more mild
Omkara can handle him easily
Vyoom is only handled by Gauri
Man Omkara is gonna have tough time

By looking at Anshika
Omkara got confused
He has one more daughter
The way he looked at Gauri after seeing her
He thought her to be their🤣

But shivika came to rescue
Love how whole family is planning to bring them close
Well locking them in a room is good idea
But with babies
I am waiting eagerly for that

Wonder why omkara has amnesia
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey sumaiyya bae.. Thanks for pm.
I'm actually loving this,even though it was painful beginning...
It's so cozy to see rikara with family, but it still hurts to me that he cannot remember his lovely past with Ri.
loved his thinking as he met Anshika...
He really admire Ri for taking care of his children perfectly & poor Om cannot make his child wear his dress...

Looking forward to the plan of oberoi family lock them in & the day when he's gonna remember his 2 whole years.

& Expecting a flashback from Ri during their married life, like how he proposed her, their happiness to know when she was pregnant, their lovely moments etc. when she sees Om doing something that he used to do in those times( just a suggestion buddy)

Keep going & take care.
Love u lotzzz ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
LOL such a cute update...
WOW Shivika have a kid?😲that was such an unexpected surprise...
How are Rumya dynamics?
Tej and Jhanvi seems to have reconciled, I guess due to RiKara
Om and his struggle in putting clothes for his kids... he shud have taken Rudra's help, as Rudra is an expert in wearing his own clothes🤣🤣
Loving how Gauri is teaching Om about babies... Gauri has become an expert in these years, wonder how she was when she was a new mom, was she or Om the expert then?
Om is physically getting attracted to Gauri... Seems like, at times he is forgetting that he has amnesia🤣
Waiting to see how the family is going to play cupid.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Om is learning to be a good father this is such a sweet gesture
Lovely part plz update next part soon

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