Rikara SS 'Teri Yaddein' 'Part 10' updated |7 September| - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Fabulous update

Loved how everyone was trying
To get them together
Rudy really is smart
But has lame ideas
But his enthusiasm makes away for all failures

Loved how he said
U stopped too soon
It was so funny

Gauri was remembering the old event
And here is Omkara to relive that moment
But Omkara doesn't remember
He is attracted to her
Doesn't want to be
But can't help it

Now coming to why om has amnesia
Why was he stressed in first place
When he has such a wonderful family
Here everyone is discussing something serious
There Omkara has to handle ved & vyoom

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
Thanks for the PM



Vrinda, thanks for liking it dear
Yeah Rudy is so enthusiastic always which never fails to make me smile
It's complicated inshallah will update tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: perfictionist

hahahaha its funny how om panics with his kids😆

reason for om's anxiety.. suspense building up. nicely done👏



Yeah 😆
Thanks for liking it dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hey i read all 4 parts of your ss. And believe me it is very intersting..i enjoyed each and everything

Love rikara love whole family the way they try to help
Especially rudyy..he is very funny han...
You mentioned above about group scenes.. i family scenes but kabhi kabhi i really want to see rikara scenes seprately.. plz try to write some seperate scenes of rikara..their convo
Thanks for the pm
Update soon



Thanks for liking it dear 😳 I pm'd u my first or second part but u haven't replied or reviewed. No worries now that I checked it and read I'm glad u liked it
Yeah inshallah I will try to write rikara scenes more
Ur welcome
Inshallah will update tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: dazzles

This is a beautiful story.

Waiting for the next chapter
Plz update soon



Thanks dear 😊
Will update tomorrow inshallah
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: pt311288

Oh so reason behind om's memory loss revealed

Continue soon



Yup but who did that its a mystery 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A/N I was scared that today I've to post part 5 and I haven't wrote it yet. Somehow I managed today and typed it within one hour. Sorry for any errors. Please review it through ur likes and comments


Part 5

"It's not the time to think how it happened. We should now focus on what happened and how it can be fixed"

Anika suggested

"Yes anika bhaujai is right"

Gauri agreed

"We need to stay close to him and not stress him. He will get his memory back with time"

"Time.?"

Gauri asked

"Yes. There is no medication for it. He will get back his memories only with time. There is no confirmation. He will have some sessions with doctor at every weekend"

Gauri stood there petrified. Thousands of negative questions occurring in her mind but she was determined to stay strong and support her husband.

"He will recall all his events. Just have faith in shankarji"

Anika consoled worried gauri.

"I have to make a call"

Shivaay left and slowly everyone left.

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"I seriously think this isn't a good idea"

"Come on Chulbul Bhabhi you don't have to do anything just talk with O that's it"

"Are you sure about this.?"

"Yes I am now go goo..and don't forget the things I teached you to do"

Gauri's self proclaimed intelligent brother-in-law pushed her inside the kitchen while she was just helpless to do argue anymore.

She stood in kitchen with finger on the rim of glass circling and that's when om entered paused for second looking at her.

He wasn't expecting her here. Thought she was was busy with her girl gang.

She spotted him staring at her and she quickly grabbed the glass sipping water.

Om sauntered in kitchen, searching for vessel for tea, while she noticed his every move from corner of her eyes.

"What are you searching for.?"

Gauri asked placing her glass down on platform.

"Saucepan"

Treading towards cupboard, she took out a saucepan and placed it on stove, turning the gas on

"If you need tea. You could just have told me"

"How did you know that"

"I just know"

She raised her eyebrows with I-know-everything look na soured some water and added one tablespoon of tea powder.

Om just stood there not knowing what to do

"Have you complete your sculpture yet.?"

Gauri asked

"No there are still few portions.."

She started swaying her head right to left, flipping her hair in process. He stared at her bewildered.

Some of her hair strands stuck on her lips and she stopped doing doing, trying to blew her hair out and used her fingers to remove it.

She glanced at him embarrassed and tilted her head down making herself busy preparing tea.

After adding some milk and sugar. She grabbed a container filled with glucose biscuits and took few out breaking them, dropping in.

"What are you doing.?"

Om asked puzzled

"Adding some glucose biscuits"

She replied casually while he was staring bemused.

"You add glucose biscuit in my tea"

She nodded

"Are you serious. Who does that"

"Me"

She replied confidently

"But why.?"

"It's a long story but in short you like to drink it like this"

After mixing it properly she poured it down in his mug and offered him to drink

"I'm not a kid to force me drink nutritious things by mixing it in my favorites"

She shrugged

"For your kind information I do wat healthy stuff"

She again shrugged

"Unlike you"

He finally said provoking her, irritated by her ignorant attitude

"What do you mean by that"

She got provoked as expected

"I don't let me count.. Paani puri, chat, samosas, sweets"

She glared at him slapping the mug down on platform while he casually continued grabbing the mug and taking a sip.

"And not to forget your favoritism for bareily wale sharma Ji's stall and stubbornness to only have his and not any others"

She stared at him amazed and he had the same expression after tasting tea.

"How did you know that.?"

"Know what.?"

He took another sip, relishing sweet pleasure of tea savouring his taste buds

"About my favorites"

His lower lip curled with thoughtful expression on his face.

"I just knew it"

Om answered truthfully. It just came in his mind and he said, not bothered to think because he was too busy in savouring the taste.

Flashing sweet smile he left with is mug leaving her alone, standing there confused.

"It worked didn't it.? He was smiling"

Gauri glanced at Rudy who was smirking. She left annoyed with a 'humph'

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"Why aren't you guys letting me go.?"

Gauri asked exasperated

"It's not like that gauri"

"Then why are not letting me go bhaujai.?"

Shivika looked at each other

"Om drinks fresh juice and I have to give it to him"

"No I will do that or I will tell khanna to it"

Anika hurriedly grabbed tray from her hands passing it to other servant

"I have been noticing since morning. You guys aren't letting me meet omkara"

"It's not like that. Actually shivaay needs some help right shivaay"

"Me.?"

Shivaay asked confused while anika glared

"Yes me. Uhmm.. gauri I.."

Gauri stared patiently

"I don't know how to make Kheer"

"What.!"

Gauri stared shocked

"Repeat dialogue"

Anika chuckled

"What's going on.?"

Gauri asked folding her hands glaring at shivika

'Where the hell is gauri.? Why is she not coming here'

Om paced back and fro in room trying his best to pacify whining vyoom

He was hell irritated. She hasn't even came up for once. Not even to check up on him. 'What's wrong with her.?'

Vyoom was getting irritated because he was hungry but om couldn't understand because he was stressed about gauri

He didn't knew when he got so used to her, so attached to her. She used to take care of everything and now it's looking like nothing is right and it's only been 5 hours since he saw her

He was slowly realizing how her emptiness is effecting him

Om was getting restless

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Rudy stood infront of mirror, styling his already styled hair and he shook his head right to left, admiring himself.

Still not satisfied with his hairstyle he opened the drawer for gel and spotted few strips of sleeping drugs, he closed it with a snap, quivering.

He sat down on his bed trembling with fear and guilt.


"Again movies.? This must be some chick flicks too"

Rudra said irritated at his wife and bhabhI

"What is that.?"

"That's sleeping pills"

"Why is she having this 2 rs thing"

"Because she couldn't sleep at night due to stress of her lost daughter so doctor prescribed her those"

He sat their listening their discussion.


Beads of sweat formed on his forehead. He was tensed.
Edited by sumaiya10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Thank you for the PM, I was checking for the update and read it even before your PM😆😆😆. Pls update soon, I am a bot confused on the last part, what is Rudy talking abour?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Om restless
Rudra fearing
Shivaay the guru
Anika follower
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey somu🤗
Awesome update dear..i loved it
Agaain rudy plan something and it work.. omkara remember that she loves sharma ji's stall food from bareilly.. she made tea for him and woh bhi with gulucoz biscuits..omkara was so confused han...even restless bcoz gauri did not came back to their room.and what about last part??..why rudy so tensed? He fearing.. anyways overall i enjoyed it...thanks for the pm
Update soon
Edited by rikara94 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ok now rudra knows something about those pills...
Waiting more

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