Rikara SS 'Teri Yaddein' 'Part 10' updated |7 September|

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome.. Just loved it especially the garden scene.

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Ladygirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Wonderful plot different concept. Pls keep it up

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Genie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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This update was lovely too...

There is a definite undercurrent of confusion and pain but somehow, the way you write things, only the happy parts remain in my mind. Loved Rudy in this update... he was sooo sweet to his chulbul bhabhi!

I loved that Vyom is a mamma's boy and will only quite down for her... and he took first blood!, scratching poor Omki.

Omkara's confusion at the connection he feels for Gauri is quite endearing and more than a bit frustrating for us cuz he doesn't really want to deal with it yet.

Would love to see more of the kiddos... Can't wait for more awesomeness from you!

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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey Dina, emotions & cuteness blended together.Loved the cute family of Om.

& Please do pm ur updates, OI might miss them

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maivelli

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Posted: 8 years ago

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would love to see bonding of om and his sons
wonderful update loved it😊

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome update

Family was trying to bring them together

Rudy always does something

Omkara's heart knows gauri

He can feel her presence

He knows.she comes to check on him

He even took care of his kids

Vyoom knows what his father is upto

He will not let it happen🤣

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

Thanks for the PM

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Loveena

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Posted: 8 years ago

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This so cute and feelings so sad for Gauri. She can't be with her own husband!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Loving how the story is progressing.

Loving how, Gauri by hiding her love, it is becoming more evident to Omkara... and loving how he is craving for her😳...

Vyoom too smart... I guess, he either got Gauri's or Shivaay's intelligence🤣

Hun... pls do post an index on the first page or update ur title with the page number.. coz it was a little difficult finding the part 2😳

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Sumaiya_Scrible

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: NESRIA
😉 nice update
waiting for the next part

Thanks dear
Inshallah will update soon

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Sumaiya_Scrible

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: sara1990
Entire Family are with Gauri. I really love their bonding. Vyoom is mummy' boy. I guess Om didnt take quite well. The dining table and kampat scene is great. Guess Om is attracted to Gauri. Who can resist our Cute and Dabangg Gauri. Please show Rikara and the kiddo's scene. That is really cute to watch Om trying to pacify Vvyom but he is unsuccessful and mummy has to step in. Guess it could have hurt Om's Ego and he could jealous as Ved is pappa's boy.

I too love how they bond together. I'm glad u liked those scenes. Yup I will make sure to type those scenes coz I too love them. yeah he is jealous of his own little munchkin 😆 indeed mamma's boy

Thanks for liking it dear 😊

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