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Shraddha Dikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Read all chapters in one go...

So simple yet awesomely Beautiful...

I love all ur stories...

Do continue...m

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Hey trish..

Thanku for dedicating this part to me and poorva..❤️

Very lovely update dear

Itna fast forward kyu bhai

But anyways it is very intersting

Day by day it becoming more interesting

After party they reached at shanti spot where they met first time and i loved that they confess their feelings there...😊

Hmmm but aage kya hone wala hai🤪

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit
Read all chapters in one go...
So simple yet awesomely Beautiful...
I love all ur stories...
Do continue...m

thank ypu so much you liked all my stories what else can make me feel better

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Trish Maine padha 🤗 subah subah neend naa poori hone kaa gham mita diya tumne ... Abhi I need to rush aaraam se do chapters ke comments likhti hu ... Aur tumhare story sent idea lekar Maine bhi ek office romance likhne kaa sovha hai 😳

mujhe bahut khushi Hai ...Okay now you don't need to comment ..Baad mein definitely karna I love hearing you and Tum Kya like Rahi ho definitely send me the link ...I know you will write far better than me. ..Go Girl .😊

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: rikara94
Hey trish..
Thanku for dedicating this part to me and poorva..❤️
Very lovely update dear
Itna fast forward kyu bhai
But anyways it is very intersting
Day by day it becoming more interesting
After party they reached at shanti spot where they met first time and i loved that they confess their feelings there...😊
Hmmm but aage kya hone wala hai🤪

your most welcome ...thank you for appreciating ..fast forward ko mein soch Rahi Hun slow motion mein turn Kar dun ...Kya sochti ho ?

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Tellywoodaddict
your most welcome ...thank you for appreciating ..fast forward ko mein soch Rahi Hun slow motion mein turn Kar dun ...Kya sochti ho ?

Itna fast agar kar hi diya toh i think aage twist and turns aane

chahiye

Sab kuch happy happy thoda na chlata jayega😉

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Tellywoodaddict

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Chapter 7

"Om uth ...O utho " ShivRu tried waking up their lovly sleeping beauty

"I Love you ..."

"Om we know you love us "

"Us?..Gau"

He opened his eyes ...

"Tum dono yaha Kya Kar rahe ho ? "

"Tujhe utha rahe Hai "

"Aur apne hume neend mein bbhi I Love you kaha ..one moment "

"Woh tumhare liye nahi Tha."

"To kiske liye Tha O "

[Shiiittt]

"I mean haa tum dono ke liye hi Tha ...I need to leave I have an important meeting ..bye guys .."

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"Isse kya ho gaya bhayiyaa?"

"Pyaar ..."

"Kya o ko pyar ho gaya...Mere O ko pyar ho gaya yaay.."

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*In Om's Cabin*

"Yeh kaisa sapna dekha meine ..I love gauri we were dancing ..what was I doing I kissed her ..."

"Apne kisso kiss Kiya ..mujhe bola bhi nahi "

"Kisi ko nahi ..Ru ...tu yaha Kya Kar raha Hai ..."

"Kuch nahi bhaiyaa ne ajj party rakha Hai ..ap timely aa Jana "

"Party kyun .."

"Woh exactly mujhe bhi nahi pata ...koi announcement karni Hai shayad "

"Okay ..I'll be there "

"Bye...By the way meine sun Liya apne kiss Kiya" saying this he ran away ..

Yeah mujhe Kya ho Raha Hai ...I am in love with Gauri ... Shit...par..I don't know ...

Aur upar se woh mujhe Kal se ignore Kar Rahi Hai ...

Mujhe usse baat karni CHAHIYE

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As I went out I saw as usual she was busy chattering ..Like how can someone talk so much but gauri is gauri

Khule ankho se dekha woh Haseen khwaab Hai tu

Dil mein jo utaar Jaye woh Haseen Raat Hai tu .

"Kya Mr.Shayar ..bare romantic ho Gaye ho app Mere ate hi it romantic shayari bolne laga tu "

"Ishuuu"I hugged her tight

"Kab ayi tu aur kyun "

"Kyun mein apne best friend seilne bhi nahi a Sakti "

"Nahi aisi baat nahi Hai "

"Arey pagal I was joking ..Shivay ne bulaya Hai ..some announcement "

"Okay ..tu Chall mere cabin mein baat karte Hai "

"Aur ek baat tum mujhe pagal mat bulana "

"Kyun tu toh Hai hi pagal "

"Nahi mujhe Koi pagal nahi bula sakta sivaye"

"Sivaye..? "

"Kuch nahi ..tu bol how's your dance classes "

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Ishu ko dekhte hi hug Kar liya woh bhi pure office ke samne ...yaha mein inse baat nahi Kar Rahi Hai is pagal ko Kuch samajh nahi aa raha ...aur use to pehle see hi woh ishu pagal bolti Hai ..mein kyun bolu phir ... Idiot stupid Hai .. meine Socha Tha mein baat karungi par jab use Koi pharak hi nahi parta ..why should I "

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*In Oberoi Mansion*

"Yaar itna andhera kyun ..Hain"

"I know right.. party thi na "

Suddenly the lights went on and the hooting began ...

Shivay spoke ..

"So the guest of honour has arrived...Omkara and Ishana "

We both looked at each other

"Yeh sab Kya Hai Shivay "

"To let's just not keep anymore suspense my brother is getting impatient...so meine app sab ko yaha bulaya Hai ...ajj in dono ki sagai Hai. "

"What ?!"

"You guys know how om is he never expresses his feelings but meine air bakiyoon ne bhi yeh notice Kiya Hai ...ajj Kal yeh bohot khush rehne laga Hai yaha Tak dreams mein I love you bolne laga Hai ..."

"Aur bhaiya kiss bhi karte Hai ...sapne mein "

"Just excuse me guys "

"I guess. Sharma Gaya Hai shayad ..go Ishana ...apne to be pati ko bulao "

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*In his room*

Yeh tune Kya Kar Diya Shivay ...tune mujhse ek baar pucha bhi nahi...

"Ommm"she came running and hugged me

"I am sorry Ishana"

"You don't have to be sorry tumne Jo mujhe khushi do Hai ajj ...mein to tumse pyaar Karti thi par kehne se darti thi...par tum bhi mujhse ..mein tumhe keh nahi Sakti mein kitni khush ho ...chalo.ab sab niche intezaar Kar rahe Hai hamara .."

"Par ishu mujhe tumse Kuch kehna Hai ..."

"Ab to saari zindagi sath rehna Hai Chalo ..."

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*In the party *

Chalo our couple has arrived jaldi se inki sagai complete karva dete Hai ...nahi toh phirse Sharma ke bhaag Jayega ...come exchange your rings ...

Ishana made me wear the ring ...

"O pehna bhi do Baad mein sharmana"

Arey inse pehnaya nahi Jayega let me help you

"Nahi nahi mein pehnata hu.."

"Yeh hui na baat " ab jab sagai ho hi gayi Hai to dance to banti Hai

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Chalo tv mein hi Kuch dekh leti Hun ...yeh ..kharoos kyum tv mein a Raha Hai Ishana bhi Hai ...live bhi Hai ...

Oh to issliye ajj ishu ayi thi ajj inki sagai Hai ..oh kitne khush lag rahe Hai ...par mein kyun ro Rahi Hun ...mujhe to khush hona CHAHIYE ..mere..mere friend ki sagai Hai ...mujhe bulaya nahi toh Kya hua ..kaha bhi nahi ...nahi chahte honge shayad

...Hun to mein ek employee hi Na ..

O Abhi dance bhi Kar rahe Hai

..mujhe Sona chaiye .(I switched off the tv and went to bed)

Tu it to kyun Rahi Hai ...so ja Kal office Jana Hai boss ko congratulate karna Hai ...

[She kept on crying hard ]

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Chale om she gave me her hand ..

"Gauri tum yaha"

Ek Din ..Ek Din Teri Raahon

Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein

Aungaa Khojaunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaunga

Ek Din ..Ek Din Teri Raahon

Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein

Aungaa Khojaunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaunga

Yeh Dil To Na Keh Yeh Baatein

Dil To Na Keh Saka

Yeh Dil To Na Keh Yeh Baatein

Dil To Na Keh Saka

"Om tum ache dancer ho Gaye ho aur romantic bhi .."

"Ishana tum yaha "

"Mein nahi hungi to Kon hoga ... you are dancing with me "

"Dancing with you?!"

"Mujhe room mein Jana Hai ...IAM tired I need to sleep can you please handle the guests ..I am really sorry .."

"No it's okay om ..I can understand ..go sleep "

"Thanks Ishana "

"Tu kaha ja Raha Hai om ..tu okh sh to Hai na.."

"Shivay you screwed everything up "

"Arey Kya hua bolke to jaa "

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Hmmm twist and turns😉

Kya yar dream sequence mein sab ko aisa feel krwa jaise sach mein love confession tha😛

Hhaha we know o u love us😆

And jealouse gauri ishanaa se😉

Shivaye ko om se poochna chahiye tha before planning engagement

And om...engagement krli...

Bechari gauri crying without knowing the reason..she is in love with him

Very lovely update dear

Jalldi se sort out kro behna

Update jldi

Edited by rikara94 - 8 years ago

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

😭

Gauri KO rulaya 😭😭😭

Omkara 🥱 kyon kyon kyon sagaai kyon ki tumne 😲 bhaang kha li hai ... Pagla Gaye ho? Dimaag kharaab hai ... 😡

I loved this update a looottt ... There was a different dimension of emotions ... U know Trish I so strongly feel ke yeh character Jo hai ... More than Gauri its your own self ... I really liked the jealous Ri ... And also some one who is ignoring him ... It is very true ke boys itne stupid hote hai ke girls anticipation ke chakkar mein marr hi jaati hai ... Om oh my Mata karli tumne ... Ab raita kaise same to ge ... Gauri KO kaise manaaoge ... Woh tumse baat bhi nahi karne waali ... Itna Jo poetic bante phirte ho woh kya sirf samaaj seva ke liye ... Janhit mein jaari hone ke badle apni love story par dhyaan do jatadhari hippie ... I am so excited to see ab Gauri Om ka kya haal karti hai 😆

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
😭
Gauri KO rulaya 😭😭😭
Omkara 🥱 kyon kyon kyon sagaai kyon ki tumne 😲 bhaang kha li hai ... Pagla Gaye ho? Dimaag kharaab hai ... 😡
I loved this update a looottt ... There was a different dimension of emotions ... U know Trish I so strongly feel ke yeh character Jo hai ... More than Gauri its your own self ... I really liked the jealous Ri ... And also some one who is ignoring him ... It is very true ke boys itne stupid hote hai ke girls anticipation ke chakkar mein marr hi jaati hai ... Om oh my Mata karli tumne ... Ab raita kaise same to ge ... Gauri KO kaise manaaoge ... Woh tumse baat bhi nahi karne waali ... Itna Jo poetic bante phirte ho woh kya sirf samaaj seva ke liye ... Janhit mein jaari hone ke badle apni love story par dhyaan do jatadhari hippie ... I am so excited to see ab Gauri Om ka kya haal karti hai 😆

hahah oh mata chup hoja

Itna gussa sehat ke liye hanikark hai

Itni frustration kyu nikal rhi hai

Lgta hai college mein jagda kr ke ayi hai😉

Hippi ne rayta failaya hai toh smete ga bhi wahi

Cool behna