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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Hey bhag waan humme sapne jaisa lag raha thha aur yeh toh sachme sapna thha ... Om ji sapne ko haqeeqat mein badalne ki pahal kijiye ๐Ÿ˜ฒ jaldi!!! ShivRu ne Aadarsh Bhaaiyyo ka farz nibhaate hue sagaai ki teyyari kardi ... Aur aap kya Horlicks peete bachhe ho ... Jo aapne sagaai karli! U screwed up bad OSO ... The worst part even ishana loves him ... Gauri ka dil dukhake kuwe mein kudne wala kaam kiya hai ... Aur ishana se commitment karke khaai ke andar kudne wala jaldi damage repair Karo ...

I liked Gauri in this part all irritated and possessive seeing Om and Ishana ๐Ÿ˜† .. Om stupidity ki tumne ... Gauri se baat kar leni chaahiye thi tumhe ๐Ÿ˜• ab jab tumhe bawaal khada kar hi diya ... Bhukto !!! God I can't bear Gauri crying ... She is so attached to him ... Bataya bhi nahi ... Invite bhi nahi kiya! Om gadbad ghotala gondogol ho gaya tumse ... Sambhaalo ab ... Gauri Ghaas bhi nahi daalegi tumhe ๐Ÿ˜† I would love to see the office on fore now ๐Ÿคฃ ... U know this story gives me vibes about how jodiyaan upar wala banata hai ... Iss case mein Mad Kara ke liye Crazy Ri ... The way she feels for him and all her self talk about how irresistible he becomes is something all the people in love experience often ... Me being one of them ... There is a soulful connection between these two ...
More than anything else I am waiting for Ishana and Gauri face off ... One of them is going to plan to kill the other ... Omkara boore phase ho ... U will understand the complicated female psychology now ๐Ÿ˜†

om ji toh hai hi buddhu ...bohot jldi unde ri ka jalwa dekhne ko milega ...ri cheez kya hai ..sagai kar li ...explInation bhi zaroori hai ab to... Office mein dhamal hoga i swear on thst part ...face off yess mayebe in the later chapters ...Om ne glti ki hai toh phasna to zarooori hai ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Tellywoodaddict

hey sorry mat bolo ...i am really not angry mein mabhi angry thi hi nahi tum par ...Even i was little bit desperate u see ๐Ÿคฃ...you know how annoying i am only you have seen it ..and thank you for so much commenting ...means a lot

๐Ÿ˜† baba re ... Main darr gayi thhi ๐Ÿ˜† chalo koi baat nahi ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Okay so we begin with how she was preparing for her presentation and then even succeeded in making it good ... On trusts her so much ... Achhi baat Omji aapko sarwagun sampana Mrs. OSO Milne waali hai ... Itni caring hai, itni sweet hai ... Itni cute hai ... Aur kaam mein maahir dhanya ho Gaye aap ๐Ÿ˜‰ ... But the way they were hesitant to talk to each other ... Baap re kitna soch rahe thhe ... Lucknowi kissa ho gaya yeh ... Pehle aap pehle aap ke chakkar mein gaadi nikal jaaegi ๐Ÿ˜† I love such Ri and Kara ... Kitne relatable ... The ultimate pehla pehla pyaar feeling ... Hichkichahat, Ghabraahat ... Thartharahat ... Sansanahat ... Everything ... They are so much in love ... Ishq buri bala Hui huzoor ... Naa kuch bolne kaa ... Naa much sunne kaa hua kusoor ... Dono deewane paagal huwe jaa rahe hai ... Par shaayad woh khud iss baat se anjaan hai ke shanakrji k prem damru unpe meherbaan hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ

PS - I am continuing to comment ... Yeah ek part ke liya thha

trust hai issliye tih itna mazboot jor hai ...Pehla pyaar hai ..thori to hichichahat banti hai boss and they are so mich into each other bit unaware its gonna be fun how things come to place
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

God How do they fight in the name of Kabir and Ishana ... Both of them JAL bhun ke koyla ๐Ÿ˜† Maine kaha thha naa chirraiya KO ... OSO KO resist Karna mushkil hi nahi ... Naa mumkin hai ๐Ÿ˜‰ it is crystal clear that both of them have become very important for each other ๐Ÿ˜ณ party mein kitne hot and happening lag rahe hinge saath mein upar se dance ... Mashallah merit tauba ... Aakhein Taras jaaengi ... Lekin aisa RiKara screenplay nahi Milne wala ... It felt so exciting ... All of their kheecha taani and zabardasti ... How sensually romantic and the ultimate moment was he teasing her neck ... Ufff pasine chhoot Gaye โ˜บ๏ธ pata chal gaya ... Gauri ka apne jazbaaton par bohot mashhakat ke bad kaabu hua thha ... Haaye Romantic Kara ๐Ÿ‘ phir finally their confession scene ... My heart was in my mouth knowing that they confessed their feelings in the place where they had first met shanti spot ... The way they conversed and confessed was magic ๐Ÿ˜ณ I love Gauri for her frankness also ... Tum bade desperate ho Gaye the! And Om is a gem ... Time waste kiye binaa seedha shaadi ki baat ... I love their comfort level ๐Ÿ˜ƒ tall and small ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ... It seemed like a fairytale to see both of them so happy in each others arms

okay to start with i love tgis thing called jealousy frustation due to the other getting close to someone else than you ..and .any more things ...Dezperate toh ho gaye tge janab ...ab kya kiya jaye ...Yaar frankness toh hai ...hi ...par jo bhi the drwam sequence was best till noe
Ps- i am sucha ajeeb ajeeb person tariffing my own works ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Knowing how naively blunt she is ... Koi chaaku churi nahi Om ke liye Ri ka teer-e-nazar hi kaafi hai ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ... I will die of anticipating about how she is going to make his halwa ... Ghiske Ragadke Kutke ๐Ÿ˜† ... Ufff ... Explain kya karega woh ??? Bhai ne bola sagaai hai toh karli ... I am sure she is going to come back with ... Agar aapke bhai bolenge kuwe mein mood jaao toh kya mood jaaoge ๐Ÿคฃ ... Dhishkeeoon Dhishkeeoon kar degi Ri apne boss KO ๐Ÿ˜† ... Raja beta Om KO rajaao jaisa hi Royal ignore Milne wala hai ๐Ÿ˜Ž ... Agar ishana romantic hone gayi toh ... ๐Ÿ˜† baba re ... Satyanash karne pe tula hai ... Update soon Trish ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I agree that the dream sequence was the best ๐Ÿ˜ณ and nothing is ajeed in tareefing your work ... You own it and you deserve it ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

I agree that the dream sequence was the best ๐Ÿ˜ณ and nothing is ajeed in tareefing your work ... You own it and you deserve it ๐Ÿค—

thank you ..and heck your pm and buddy too ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Chapter 8
I don't know how will I even face gauri..I don't know how she feels about me but I love her..par jab woh puchegi ki ...Meine sagaai kyun ki ? What will be my answer ..just because I can't see my family getting hurt ...ishu my best friend who has never got happiness in life ...seemed happy for the very first time ..or I who was still confused about my feelings ended up doing this.I said Shivay he screwed everything up..but wasn't it me who really screwed everything up ?

Whatever it is I owe her an answer even if she doesn't want one ..
I owe her everything ..
I don't care even if she doesn't listen to me or speak up ... today I will say what I want to say ..

And I need to know what she thinks about me even if it's just friendship.

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When I entered the office everyone started congratulating me giving me gifts and flowers but where was she I couldn't find her.

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It's high time ...it's my time to enter.

"Congratulation Sir" I handed him flowers.

"Never thought would offer you flowers that to for such an occasion..I am so happy for you sir ."

"Gauri what are you saying ?"

"Sir apne hume bulaya to dur bataya bhi nahi .. sorry we are just employee's right friends ...but sir ek chutti to banti Hai ..."

"Haan tum sab Ghar ja sakte ho ..it's a holiday "

"Thank you so much sir ...ap kitne acche Hai ..sab ke bare mein kitna sochte Hai nahi "

"Sir ap please apne cabin mein jayiye ..waha apke liye surprise Hai .. specifically from my side "

"Gauri what is this ...why are you acting so sarcastic "
"Sir chaliye nah "

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*In the cabin *

I closed the door

"What's your promblem gauri why are you doing this to me ?"

"Sir ..what did i do to you "

"Aur yeah sir bulana band Karo "

"Sir kyun nahi ...ap mere boss Hai aur mein apki employee "

"Gauri tum Meri dost ho "

"Sir dost bolkar dost shabd ki badnami mat kijiyega"

"What are you saying...stop it for god sake..aur meine Kiya Kya Hai ..jisse Hari dosti par effect pare "

"Exactly sir apne Kiya Kya Hai ..sirf engagement hi to ki Hai ..jisse app dost bolte ho use bulana to dur batana bhi think nahi samjha ..apne Kuch nahi Kiya Hai "

"Gauri look at my eyes " I held her arms
"Sir let me go .. "

"I am not leaving you until"

"Until ..you still think there is some until left for us..."

"Gauri don't do this to me "

"App Kuch Bui kare to it's okay and I can't even say what I feel ..Kal mein sari raat ro Rahi thi apko pharak parta Hai ..nahi ...mujhe apke sagai ke bare mein kaisa lagega ..sicha apne nahi ..apko pharak parta Hai nahi ...mein office chorkar ja Rahi Hun apko pharak parta Hai nahi..."
"Mujhe pharak parta Hai ..and what's this ki tum office chorkar ja Rahi ho "

"Oh sorry sir khushi ke mare toh mein apko apka Surprise Dena bhul Gyi apke liye mein shayad Sirf ek employee hu...but mere liye to app mere dost Hai .."
"What's this "
"Open it and see it yourself "
"Resignation letter ...what non sense is this "

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He just tore it ..

"Mujhe laga hi Tha yeh lijiye "

He tore it again

I gave him again

"He pushed me to the nearest wall and sealed me with his arms

"Why don't you understand ki tum mujhe jitne baar yeh dogi mein utni baar use phar dunga "

"Sir mujhe Jana Hai ..Meri shadi ki age ho Gyi Hai you know .. Even I wanna get married .."

"What ? Have you lost it or something ? Shadi ..what crap are you speaking "

"Sir Jane dijiye mujhe ...mujhe Kam Hai .."

"I need to all my pending works SIR"

He just stepped a few steps back ..

"Tumhe shadi karni Hai ..chorkar Jana Hai.. resignation Dena Hai ..fine but either saal Baad "he smirked
"Ek saal "


"Shayad tumne para nahi tha sign Karne se pehle document mein Saaf saaf likha Hai ki tum yeh office chorkar nahi ja sakti "

"Aur mein Jana chahu to ?"

"You can happily do that ...u just have to pay 1 crore for that "

"1 crore?"

"Yes"he smirked again

"Bohot der se pyaar se bol Raha hu. ...but tumhe Sunna nahi Hai .. right ...tumhe to employee banne ka shok Hai ..cool I am happy with it "

" So I Omkara Singh Oberoi your 'boss' order you ki ajse tum Oberoi Mansion mein rahogi ..aur Meri shadi ki sari taiyari tum hi karogi ... everything ..kyunki tumhe to shadi karni Hai ..toh you will get to see how it all works okay "
"Par "


"No par Miss Sharma I m your boss ..and you have to listen to me and by the way for your kind information my engagement was a surprise for me but I promise you yeh shadi ki sari taiyariya mein khud dekhunga so you better be perfect "

"Fine "

"Good now you should leave ...and agle 1 ghante mein tum Oberoi Mansion dhikni CHAHIYE..I guess I am clear "
"Yes"

"Sir nahi bola tumne "

"Yes sir "

"Good please leave"



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Muddaton mein Mohhabat ki Manzilon mein Rakha kya Hai ...

Agar dil deke ... Dil mein dard naa ho ... Toh ishq ki khoobsurat saza kya hai ..



Gauri I swear I didn't wanted things to end up this way but you forced me ..aur ab tumhe mere pass rakhne ke liye mujhe yeh karna hi parega ...I Am Sorry

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Om tumhe aisa nahi karna CHAHIYE Tha
Edited by Tellywoodaddict - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Kya bat hai trish
Kafi sir sir sir ho rahi hai gauri ki traf se ๐Ÿคฃ
And mujhe lga hi tha ke gauri as a gift resignation letter hi degi๐Ÿ˜‰ and she also want to marry haha shadi ki age ho gyi hai
And use yeh nahi pta tha ke om is om๐Ÿ˜†
Bechara convince hi nahi kr pa rha tha and now he want gauri OM mein rhe or sare arraangemnts kre
Ab ayega maza takkar ki ishqbazi ho gi
Ek dusre ke sath ek hi ghar mein oh god m very excited
From om's pov:-
Hum is kadar tum par mar mitenge
Tum jaha dekhoge tumhe hum hi dikhenge
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh no...kamaal hai...
How Will they sort out everything

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