||Channa Mereya|| - Shivika Series last part Uptd Aug 16@Pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Nimik

Chhaya meri behen🤗

kaisi hai tu?
after a long time ya
loved this one
teri kahaaniyan na dil ko khush kar deti hai
so different, so amazing
please jaldi update karna
waiting very impatiently

Hii Shikha Di❤️
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I am totally fine.
How are you?
yes it's long time..
Thank you Di for this beautiful review..
Sure😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Hii everyone, Sorry for being late in updating. Here is the next update. This is based on Anika, Om and Rudra. Hope all of you will like it.

No proof read Kindly ignore mistakes and typos😳.
Happy Reading
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Dil ki sandookon mein mere acche kaam rakhna

Chitthi taaron mein bhi mera tu salam rakhna

Anika cried in their room until there were no tears left in her eyes. She then went to washroom and washed her face and strengthens herself for what was coming...

She comes out of washroom and called Om and Rudra to come there in 'their' room she cut the call and with that she goes into flashback

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"Bhabhi aap kuchh chhupa rahi ho? Humein bhi nahin bataogi" asked Om entering into the room where Anika was, with Rudra.

Anika came there after her drama of taking property papers from Khanna and then Shivaay asking about those papers but somehow he didn't reacted in the way in which she wants. Shivaay didn't lose himself and didn't say anything in the way she wants. And this plan of her was again a failure. A call came and Shivaay left from there. After him, everyone else left from there leaving her there and she came here, in this room, far away from everyone but She was wrong someone not someone, two people were watching her every movement, her every action and reaction, the way she took brake when she was speaking nonsense in her language. They came there after her and found her crying silently standing near the glass window which was allowing a great view of outside. She was facing outside, looking the view of Oberoi Gardens, thousands of flower there, of every color making the view as of some fantasy and then the weather which was just perfect making everything beautiful. She was lost in herself when Om and Rudra came there and stand there with her in silence. They watched her tears flowing from her eyes they want to stop them, wipe them away from her eyes but they thought to give her some time. They were standing there with her, looking at the view she was looking. She didn't notice them because she was lost in herself...

After sometime, Om said "Bhabhi Kitna achha hain na yeh view... "

startling her and bringing her back from her world.

"Huh.." and as a reflex after seeing them there, she instantly wiped her tears.

"Bhabhi kitna achha hain na yeh view" he again repeated and she gets lost in the view in front of her. She always loved nature. She feels calm, solace, away from the daily hustle bustle of Mumbai City, in nature.

"Haan Om bahut achha hain kitna sukoon milta hain unhe dekhne par hi... I will go there for evening walk today"

"Sure hum bhi aap ke saath chalenge" said OmRu in unison and she just smiled in response. There was again silence. Rudra want to break it but Om denied and signed him to wait and Rudra, always ready to do anything for his superwoman, agreed and stayed silent.

"Bhabhi aap uss gulab ko dekh rahin hain" asked Om breaking the silence in the room, looking in front of him, the flower, white rose, which she was looking at.

"Haan kitna khoobsurat hain na and they are my favorite" she replied with a child like enthusiasm. She just didn't know what she was saying, what she was doing? She was lost somewhere else in her world but replying to them... For some moments she just forgot everything, the drama she pulled now...

"Aapko pata hain kitni saari similarities hain aapke aur uske beech mein" said Om his eyes full of admiration and love for his bhabhi.

"Similarities... Om tum bhi na Kahan main aur kahan yeh aur vaise bhi yeh sab sirf kehne wali baatein hain" she replied to him denying whatever he said or was going to say

Om just smiled and hummed in response. He knew this was coming

"Bhabhi kabhi kabhar ye baatein sach bhi hoti hain just look at you... aap ne aaj jo kuchh bhi kiya kya vo kaanton par chalne se kam tha kya, kya usse karne mein aapko dard nahin hua, chubhan mehsoos nahin hue" asked Om getting close to the point for which they were here.

"Maine aaj jo kuchh bhi kiya uske baad bhi tum donon yahan par ho mujhse baat kar rahein ho kyun" she asked them, getting back in her sense after the question of Om.

She knew 'The Om' was back and if she didn't get away from them as soon as possible then everything will be out of her hands. The Omkara Singh Oberoi, boyfriend of truth as Rudra says, who was and is her best friend and knows her very well. She knew if she stands there for a minute more than these two cute and adorable brothers of her will make her confess everything.

"Kyunki hum apni bhabhi ko achhi tarah se jante hain... aur uss waqt app humari bhabhi nahin kisi ki bahu jyada thi I mean aap samajh rahin hain na, aap agent Rudy ki bhabhi hain aap nahin samjhoge toh kaun samjhega... aur humari bhabhi kisi ki bahu hone se pehle humari dost, humari superwoman, humari angel hain..." replied Rudra smilingly.

"matlab kya hain tumhara Rudra" she asked with hint of annoyingness which she was finding hard to carry on. Om was looking at her face, reading her like an open book, with a smile on his face.

"aap ko ab tak nahin pata chala..." Said Rudra, with a sad smile. She never talked with him like this.

"Nahin" she said

"Vo jo abhi apne bahar kaha tha na vo sab chhoti maa kehti hain...toh bas humein laga ki uss waqt unki bahu..." he explained their point of view when Anika's face and her features changed with two words 'chhoti maa'.

"Nahin Rudra aisa kuchh bhi nahin hain" she replied looking down at the floor, her tone changed.

"Bhabhi aapko kya lagta hain ki humein pata nahin chalta ki aap kab in character and out of character hoti ho... Aap meri bhabhi se pehle meri di hain, meri superwoman, great wall of the great wall..." Rudra said in a voice full of admiration. Truly he love her, admire her. She was not only his bhabhi, she was his partner in crime, his superwoman and angel of his 'Shivaay Bhaiyaa'. Both of them share a bond which cannot be explained...

"Rudra aisa kuchh bhi nahin hain maine jo kuchh bhi kaha vo sab kuchh sach tha..."

"Hum jaante hain Bhabhi aapne jo kuchh bhi bahar kaha vo sab kuchh sach tha aur hum yeh baat jante bhi hain aur mante bhi hain... Shivaay is the one who works hard for this empire and it belongs to him. Par jo kuchh aapne kaha vo aapne khud nahin kaha kisi majboori mein kaha..."

"kaisi majboori Om maine kisi majboori mein nahin kaha maine vahi kaha jo kuchh mujhe sahi laga"

"Aapko pata hain mein Mr. Oberoi se nafrat kyun karta hoon aur uska sabse bada reason hain ki vo hum bhaiyoon ko alag karna chahte hain, Shivaay Omkara aur Rudra ko alag... Par vo iss baat ko humesha bhool jate hain ki duniya ki koi bhi takat hum teenoon ko alag nahin kar sakti hain, vo mujhe Oberoi Industries ka CEO banana chahte hain... kyun sirf isliye ki mein Shivaay se aage nikal jaaon aur yahin haal chhoti maa ka bhi hain vo chahti hain ki Shivaay Oberoi Industries ka CEO bane, vo bhi hum teeno ko alag karna chahti hain...

Aaj jo kuchh bhi aapne kaha yahin chhoti Maa kehti hain aur yahin Mr. Oberoi bhi kehte hain...

Aapko pata hain mein apni mom se bahut se bhi jyada pyaar karta hoon... uski sabse badi vajah yeh hain ki vo hum teeno ko pyaar karti hain, Vo ShivOmRu se pyaar karti hain aur humse jyada Shivaay se, She admires him, she adores him, she loves him...

Mom and Dadi both knows that no matter what we three will always be together, there is no one and nothing that can separate us, we are three parts of same story, As Dadi says Rudra is the 'dil', Shivaay is the 'dimaag' and I, I am the 'soul'. And a person lives only when all of these three are together. Same is with us. We are alive only and only when we three are together...

But may be due to our bad luck Mr. Oberoi and Chhoti Maa never understand this thing and they always want separation of this house and we three have promised Dadi that no matter what happens we will never separate from each other."

He takes a brake and looked at her who was looking at the floor but he can sense the emotional turmoil with in her. He knew she was feeling guilty within herself a thing which he never wants her to feel but he decides to continue may be it will make her say truth because what she said outside, neither their mind nor their heart can accept that and he continues

"Maine abhi aapse kaha ki aap ek gulab ki tarah hain... maine sach kaha

Kyunki Gulab ka ek phool kitne saare kaanton ke beech mein se nikalta hain usi tarah aapne bhi apni zindagi mein bahut kuchh saha hain, bahut kuchh bardasht kiya hain, kitne kaanton mein se nikli ho... aur phir bhi aap dil se itni khoobsurat ho bilkul gulab ki tarah... Gulab jaha par bhi hota hain vo uss jagah par apni khushboo bikher deta hain usi tarah aap jahan bhi hoti ho apni khusboo har jagah bikher deti ho... kaanton ke beech mein hota hain gulab, kitna soft, delicate usi tarah se aap ho..."

"aisa kuchh bhi nahin hain Om" she speak in the last when she cannot control anymore. She was feeling guilty, angry at herself how can she just do something like this.

"aisa hi hain bhabhi"

"Nahin Om"

"Theek hain toh phir kaisa hain aap hi bata dijiye" Rudra asked

"Insaan ke asli rang tabhi saamne aata hain Rudra jab usse khud ko dikhane ka mouka mile... aur mujhe aaj mila" replied she, not looking at them. They just want her to say the truth only truth and there she was just not saying anything. They knew she can never do anything like this but here she was degrading herself in their eyes. Rudra was losing patience because he can listen anything but not anything against his Bhabhi even if that was from her. He loves her way too much.

"Bhabhi kyun kiya aapne ye sab, hum jaante hain iske peeche koi badi vajah hain"

"Maine jo kuchh bhi bahar kaha vo sab kuchh sach tha Omkara aur Rudra"

"Aur aapko lagta hain ki aap kuchh bhi kehengi hum maan lenge, aap kuchh bhi karengi hum maan lenge... aapne kyun kiya yeh sab... aapko kya lagta hain ki iss sab se Bhaiyaa ko koi farak padega... Nahin a big NO kyunki vo apko jaante hain, shayad aap itna khud ko nahin jaanti lekin vo jaante hain... aapko kya lagta hain vo aapke iss behavior ko nahin pehchaan payenge... toh aap galat hain..." said Rudra tears brimming in his eyes.

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After there continues attempts to know things, Anika in between let out the real thing that she have done all this intentionally. OmRu head snapped towards her while she closed her mouth with her hands and turned towards other side. She started to go when Om stopped her and asked her firmly about what all is going on? And with this the last thread of control gets lost and she cried in his arms. He hugged her and let her cry in his arms. After sometime when her crying reduced and tears were dried, Om made her sit down on sofa placed in room and with Rudra kneel down in front of her. Both of them hold her both hands and Rudra asked her lovingly

"Bhabhi humse share kijiye kya hua hain"

And Anika told them everything about Pinky's blackmail and Nayantara and Prinku's marriage too. Their body language was changing and Anika was feeling it because both of them were holding her hands. Their bodies were getting stiffen, anger and rage clearly visible from their body form...

When she finished telling them, tears were running down from her eyes while OmRu were angry beyond limit. They just want to struggle their Chhoti Maa for doing this.

After knowing about the thing with which Pinky was blackmailing their Bhabhi, Rudra wants to tell about all this to Shivaay the same moment when Anika stopped him. Om was just going to confront Pinky when she stopped him too and pleaded to them to not tell anything about this to Shivaay. She made them pledge on her and they were helpless. She asked them to support her and they denied.

"Om Rudra I need your help. Cannot you do this for me?

And they agreed when there was no option left with them.

"Aap ko kya lagta hain ki Shivaay ko yeh sach kabhi pata nahin chalega... Sach kabhi bhi chhupta nahin hain vo saamne aa hi jata hain chahe insaan kuchh bhi karle... aur ye sach bhi ek din saamne aayega aur uss din...

Uss din aapko pata chalga ki aapne kitni badi galti karne ja rahin ho.. abhi bhi waqt hain bhabhi

Aur iss baat ka kya sabot hain ki Chhoti Maa sach keh rahin hain... Jo aurat itna sab kuchh kar sakti hain itna niche gir sakti hain kya vo jhoot nahin bol sakti?? "asked Om, his eyes were red with anger. His chhoti maa has done all this. She is the one who allowed Prinku and Ranveer's marriage for this.

"Nahin Om vo sach keh rahin hain... tumhe yaad hain jab vo duplicate aaya tha bilkul Shivaay ki tarah ka, sab kuchh toh same hi tha sirf aankhon ko chhod kar, Sachhai saamne aane ke baad mein uske ghar gayi thi usse ye poochhne ke liye ki usne ye sab kyun kiya, kis ke kehne par kiya par tab vo bach nikla aur mujhe uske ghar mein dawai ki wahin bottle mili jo Shivaay ke pass hain unki heart condition ke liye. Mujhe laga shayad ye sirf coincidence hoga par baad mein jab usne Shivaay ki jaan bachayi toh mujhe laga ki dono ke beech kuchh toh hain varna vo insaan jo yahan par Shivaay ban kar aaya tha usne kabhi bhi kisi ko hurt nahin kiya... Tumhe yaad hain Rudra jab tum Shivaay ko yahan par lekar aaye the toh unki shirt par khoon tha, maine check kiya par Shivaay ko chot nahin lagi thi jisse khoon nikale vo khoon Shivaay ka nahin tha.. vo Mahi ka tha... toh maine DNA test karvaya aur jo result the vo... Ye tha ki vo dono bhai hain..."

"aisa kaise ho sakta hain bhabhi..."

"Nahin Om yahin sach hain... Mahi aur Shivaay bhai hain"

"Bhabhi aapko ye baat pata thi aur aapne humein nahin bataya...Kyun"

"Mujhe samajh mein hi nahin aaya ki main kya karun Om aur phir jab Pinky aunty ne ye kaha ki Shivaay unka beta nahin hain... ki unki maa Kamini hain toh main kaise ye baat batati... agar Shivaay ko pata chala toh vo toot jayenge... Tumhe pata hain na ki Naam Khoon Khandan unke liye kitna maayne rakhta hain vo nahin seh payenge yeh sach... aur main apne Shivaay ko toot te hue nahin dekh sakti hoon.. Pinky aunty ne mujhse kaha ki agar main yahan se Shivaay ki zindagi se door chale jaati hoon toh vo isse Shivaay ko kabhi nahin batayengi aur agar main nahin gayi toh vo Shivaay ko yeh sach bata dengi... "and Rudra interrupted her

"Toh unhe batane dijiyega na hum bhi dekhte hain kaise karti hain vo ye sab... aur aap aur hum dono hain na unhe sambhalne ke liye, unke liye. Toh unhe jo karna hain unhe karne de"

" Nahin Rudra main ye nahin hone de sakti hoon... mein unhe toot te hue nahin dekh sakti hoon...

Unki tadi unka vajood sab kuchh toh iss naam se hain aur main sirf apne liye unhe iss sabse kaise door kar sakti hoon..."

"par aap unse dur ja sakti hain" asked Om

"agar baat Shivaay ki hain toh main unke liye kuchh bhi kar sakti hoon" she replied with a smile in between her tears.

"tum dono ko meri kasam hain ki tum dono Shivaay ko kuchh bhi nahin bataoge, unka khyaal rakhoge kyunki jo main karoongi usse unka bharosa tootega aur unhe dard hoga, unhe saath ki jaroorat hogi aur sirf tum dono hi toh ho jo unka saath de sakte hain unke bhai... tum donon unka saath doge chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye... tum dono sambhaloge unhe vada karo mujhse"

"Pinky Promise Bhabhi hum bhaiyaa ka poora khyaal rakhnge aur aapke vapas aane..."

"Rudra aisa kabhi nahin hoga

"aur haan unhe lagta hain ki unki bimari unse aur unki tadi ki vajah se unke paas nahin aayegi toh please tum unki madicines ka dhyaan rakhna"

"Ji Bhabhi"

"Pinky Promoise"

"Pinky Promise" and they do pinky promise.

She hugged both of them and they cried their hearts out.

"Rudra Om tum dono toh yaad karoge na mujhe please mujhe bhool mat jaana"

"Bhabhi ye kaisi baat kar rahin hain aap... Hum aapko kaise bhool sakte hain..."

"Nahin Rudra bas agar kabhi bhi aisa hua toh main Shivaay se apne rishte ki aakhiri kadi bhi..." and Om stopped her by putting his hands on her mouth and nodded in a no.

"Aisa kabhi bhi nahin hoga... aapka aur Shivaay ka rishta kabhi bhi nahin tootega"

"Om..." And the helplessness in her voice made their heart bleed and they hugged her.

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There was knock on the door, bringing Anika back into the world. She wiped her tears which were due to the memories of her with her two cute brothers, who came into her life and made a special part of their own in her heart.

"Bhabhi..." called Rudra from outside.

"Haan Rudra bas abhi aayi... "and she opened the door. OmRu entered there and look at the room. It was having no traces of her, nothing which belongs to her. They, then, looked at her. She was looking like someone has stabbed her and has taken her most precious thing away from her.

"Bhabhi you ready..." asked Rudra.

His eyes were filled with unshed tears. They were just coming from Dadi's room where Shivaay was talking with her and they left from there after Anika's call. He was so much happy, they have never seen him so happy in their whole life and it was because of her. She was the reason of his happiness and today she was just going to leave him. His happiness was going to leave him today...

"Haan Rudra I am ready" she replied

"Bhabhi aap yaad toh karoge na humein, bhoologe toh nahin" he had lost the hope after looking at his brother, who was so much happy, he was enjoying himself with her, he was being Shivaay with her and here she, she was going to kill that Shivaay, may be for forever. He knows a heart can take anything but cannot take the betrayal from his lover and she was his heart and love both.

"Rudra Om tum dono toh mujhe yaad rakhoge na. Uss din maine jo kuchh bhi kaha uske liye main tum dono se maafi maangti hoon mujhe maaf kar do aur Shivaay ka khayal rakhna..unke photos aur ho sake the video call par unhe sirf ek baar dikha dena, har din..." and she hugged them for support. They hold her and hugged her back. After some minutes she comes out of their hold.

"Chale.." she asked them.

"Haan" replied Rudra while Om didn't say anything.

"O..." Rudra called him.

"Bhabhi I am waiting for the day when you will regret this decision, this day. Yeh sachhai Shivaay ke saamne ek na ek din aani hi hain aur uss din usse humari nahin aapki jaroorat hogi, sirf aapki aur aap yahan par honge hi nahin..."

"Ye sach kabhi bhi saamne nahin aayega Om"

"Aayega jaroor aayega aur jis din aayega uss din koi bhi isse rok nahin payega.. aap bhi nahin"

"Om aisa kabhi bhi nahin hoga"

"Bhabhi aisa hi hoga aur aap khud aaogi Shivaay ke pass..."

"and I am waiting for that day"

and with this he left from there. After him Rudra left too leaving Anika there alone. Om was angry on himself because he cannot do anything...

His brother's heart is going to break in thousand pieces and he ...

He cannot even stop that.

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Do hit like button and comment if you liked it.

Next update will be after getting the response I want.

Note: As I am not watching Ishqbaaaz since quiet a long time so don' know how everything happened. I have read only written updates.

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Edited by NarbhiForever.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
awesome update yar...
loved it...
wat ever it is i can't never say that Annika is 100% right...shivaay would have breakdown but if Annika was with him them he would have handled it...
like that shivaay also did wrong...he should have trusted her...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Nearly the same thing happened in IB
Please expose Pinky.
I hate her now from core of my heart.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

loved it...
wat ever it is i can't never say that Annika is 100% right...shivaay would have breakdown but if Annika was with him them he would have handled it...
like that shivaay also did wrong...he should have trusted her...

Thanks dear😊
I am not watching IB but I am reading updates... and by that I just don't feel that I should watch it.
I am just not able to connect with them. Lost that connection long time ago...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile

Nearly the same thing happened in IB

Please expose Pinky.
I hate her now from core of my heart.

Hii Daisy It's same as IB dear.
Actually I am not watching IB so don't know what Anika said and what OmRu said? (I meant this dear.)
Pinky exposition don't know it will be here or not but it's there in We Belong Together.
I am sure each and everyone hates her.
Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: water9786

Hii Daisy It's same as IB dear.
Actually I am not watching IB so don't know what Anika said and what OmRu said? (I meant this dear.)
Pinky exposition don't know it will be here or not but it's there in We Belong Together.
I am sure each and everyone hates her.

It's been like ages that you updated the story.
Please update it soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
I love reading about AniOmRu moments and this was just perfect!Beautifully written Chhaya.So emotional and yet so..hopeful,I would say.Great job love.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Awesome lovely...chummeshwari...loads of love hugs nd kisses fr u dear Sissy... It was magical. Especially the prt in italics...I was spell bound
Now u have also MASTERED THE ART OF STICKING UR AUDIENCES TO THEIR CHAIRS .EAGERLY WAITING TO KNOW WHT WILL HAPPEN NXT.
Wish I colud ever meet u gal...u r a shona doll chhayu
Tq fr pm
Update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
wow even i am waiting for this day..

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