||Channa Mereya|| - Shivika Series last part Uptd Aug 16@Pg 15 - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

awesome update dear
loved itt soo much
story was beautifully written and explained
thanks a lot for link sweety

Thank you so much sweetheart❤️
and that was my pleasure Paru😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Great one
Loved it so much
Specially OmRu and anika's bonding!
Please expose that mother india she is literally a pain in head nowadays!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy

TBH, this was really emotional and tad depressing, but a great update nevertheless... Loved it!

Thanks for the pm :)

😳😳
Thank you dear❤️
Happy to know that you liked it!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
You are awesome my friend
Loved all the os
You have beautifully penned each one of them
Great job
Keep writing
Much love !!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: -Smile_please-

Great one

Loved it so much
Specially OmRu and anika's bonding!
Please expose that mother india she is literally a pain in head nowadays!

Thank you so much Aanchal!!!
Glad to know that you loved it dear!!
I love AniOmRu's bonding too... that's so lovely and beautiful!!!
Just love them!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: S.love1

You are awesome my friend

Loved all the os
You have beautifully penned each one of them
Great job
Keep writing
Much love !!!!

Awww Thank you so much dear❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97

#4

Anika wipes the tears after listening to Om. No she have to do this.. she cannot be weak now.

With that she comes out of the room when she bangs into someone. She closes her eyes as a reflex but she knew the touch and person... she knew he will never let her fall down... She opens her eyes to see blue eyes staring back at her with all the love of this world.

She is going to break this man today... she is going to make these eyes lost their charm...

She is the one who is going to do it...
Shivaay makes her stand straight.

"Aaram se bahut jaldi main ho" he smiles and turns her around and then he puts his hand on her eyes making them as blindfold.

"kar kya rahein hain aap?" asks Anika trying to remove his hands from her eyes.

"Shh bas chalo... you believe me na" he asks.

She doesn't respond to his question as guilt overpowers her.

"You believe me??" he again asks

"Haan" she says and stops the tears from her eyes to fell down on his hand with difficulty.

"toh bas mere saath chalo"

And he brings her in the main hall. Whole family comes there and stands while Shivaay with Anika stands in the middle. He slowly removes his hands.

"Aankhen kholo apni Anika" and she opens her eyes... and what she sees left her with nothing... Just with more guilt... she smiles with tears For Him.

"Saari rasamein kar li hain sabse important rasam kaise chhod sakte hain... Maine jo pichhali baar kiya na Anika bahut galat tha. Tumhe blackmail karke maine mujhse shaadi karne ke liye majboor kiya... Uss cheez ka guilt abhi tak mere jahan mein hain he holds her hands in his

"beshak shaadi ek bandhan hain lekin uss bandhan mein bandhne mein kisi insaan ki majboori nahin khushi honi chahiye Anika aur main apni galti sudharna chahta hoon. Tumhare saath usi bandhan mein phir se bandhana chahte hoon. I want you to marry me... bina jabardasti bina kisi majboori ke..."

"Anika Will you marry me? again" asks Shivaay with smile...

Anika don't know what to do?? What to say... she keeps looking at him.

"bolo Anika" he asks again.

"Shivaay..." she starts.

"Haan "

"Shivaay main aapse.."

"Tum mujhse??? Aage bolo Anika" he asks impatiently.

"Shivaay main aapse shaa... shaadi karne ke liye tayyar hoon par uske liye meri kuchh shartein hain... kya vo aapko manjoor hain"

"shartein..." he asks shocked but then smiles and says "Ok mujhe sab kuchh manjoor hain ab batao shaadi karogi mujhse ek baar phir"

"Haan par pehle aapko mujhse promise karna hoga ki job hi main maangoongi vo aapko mujhe dena hoga"

"ok promise kya chahiye hain tumhe" he asks smiling not knowing about the hurricane which is going to hit him soon...

"Shivaay Mujhe iss ghar ka batwaara chahiye hain..."

"What did you just say?" he asks shocked not believing his ears... May be he heard wrong or he is seeing a nightmare..

"Shivaay Mujhe iss ghar ka batwaara chahiye hain. Saari mehnat aap karte hain, saare din raat aap kaam karte hain ek pal ka sukoon nahin rehta hain aapko... Aur baki sab aapki iss baat ka fayda uthate hain... vo aapke kamayein hue paison par aish karte hain... aur jab bhi batwaara hoga sab kuchh teen hisson mein batega na lekin mehnat toh aap jayada kar rahein hain... kaam aap karte hain aur fayda koi aur uthata hain... Mein aapse shaadi tabhi karoongi jab iss ghar ka batwaara hoga"

"Anika is that you speaking all this rubbish?? How can you???" he asks shaking her , anger flowing through his veins...

"This is not rubbish Shivaay. This is truth... Mehnat aap karte hain aur fayda koi aur hi uthata hain. Yahan par log aapki achhai ka fayda uthate hain... aur aap unhe uthane dete hain vo bhi tab jab unka aapse koi khoon ka rishat hi nahin hain" and she says looking at Pinky while he thoughts that she is speaking about OmRu.

"aur aapki biwi hone ke naate mera ye farz hain ki main iss baat ka khyaal rakhoon ki aapke saathkucch galat na ho... aapko aur mujhe humara poora haq mile"

"Anika ye tu kya keh rahin hain puttar?? Batwaara?? Akhir aisa kya ho gaya jo tu batwaara chahti hain..." asks Dadi while OmRu are standing in a corner with their heads down. Shivaay looks at them and it hurt him to see his brothers like that... sad..

"No they cannot be sad... he will never allow that. He will not leave the person who is responsible for their sadness... but today his Anika is the reason.. no it cannot be true. It must be a nightmare... It have to be... His Anika cannot do anything like this... She will never ask for batwaara... He knows her... He knows what family means to her and she will never become ghar tod Anika from kidkitod Anika... Never "

"Dekha Shivaay tune iss ladki ko... abhi toh sirf shaadi ke liye propose kiya shaadi hue bhi nahin aur abhi se hi maange shuru kar di... abhi shaadi hue bhi nahin ki ghar todne ki baat kar di... ab toh yakeen ho hi gaya hoga na tujhe ki tune kisse shaadi ki hain... usse jo tujhe tere bhaiyoon se hi alag karna chahti hain ... Main toh pehle hi kehti thi mummy ji ki ye ladki sahi nahin hain lekin koi meri mane tab na" says Pinky

OmRu and Jhnavi looked at her with disgust. Rudra just want to stop everything and tell his brother that it's all Pinky's doing... she is the one who is the reason of all this... His superwoman is not wrong. It's Pinky...

"Anika kya tum sach mein yahin chahti ho?" he asks her again not believing anything.

"haan Shivaay aakhir main aapki biwi hoon jitna iss ghar par, property par aapka haq hain utna hi mera bhi hain aur phir shaadi ho jaane ke baad hum yahan se door nayi mansion mein rahenge sirf hum dono"

"Please leave from here" he says turning away from Anika.

"What?? Shivaay kyun jaon mein yahan se biwi hoon mein aapki " Anika keeps her hands on his shoulder when he removes her hand. Anika behaves as shocked...

"agar koi mere bhaiyoon par ungli uthaye mujhe hargiz bardasht nahin hain... aur tumne yahin galti ki hain... main kuchh bhi aisa nahin karna chahta jiska mujhe baad mein afsoos ho so I am giving you second chance... Just tell me that what you have said is lie just a lie.. you doesn't mean any of those things... juts say it damn it" he asks her screaming, shaking with anger and fury... His heart doesn't believe it...it doesn't want to... His pain raw... his eyes red and with tears in them... looking in her's.

"Shivaay maine jo kuchh bhi kaha pure hosh main kaha hain aur jo maine kaha hain vo sach hi hain toh aur kya sach bolu mein?... This is the only truth... mujhe batwaara chahiye hain aur phir shaadi ke baad hum dono yahan par nahin rahenge... hum dono yahan se kahin door shift ho jayenge aur haan agar kisi ko aapse milna ho toh vo aapse milne ke liye vahan par aa sakate hain aur aap bhi jab chaho yahan par aa sakte ho..."

"Please get out of my house and my life..." he says calmly showing her door and looking at the floor.

"Shivaay what are you saying?? How can you even say that?? I am your wife... your legal wife. I have rights on you, on the half property of you." I cannot leave like this..."

Shivaay doesn't say anything and goes to his room. He opens cupboard and takes out the keys of locker. He unlocks the door and takes out some papers. He locks that and closes the door. He takes a pen from stand by table and sign on the left side of the paper where his name was written and comes in hall.

"Shivaay aap kahan chale gayein the... shaadi ke muhurat mein deri ho rahin hain... mein packing baad mein kar doongi pehle shaadi kar lete hain aayein"

"Anika take this and now leave from here" he says giving her papers.

"What is this?" she asks completely shocked... she didn't expect this

"You will get what you want. You want half property of mine... I will give you whole. Now leave me and my family alone... these are divorce papers. I have signed on these. You already did and now I have done also. You will get my whole property as alimony after whole processor finishes. My lawyer will give the documents of alimony as soon as process finishes and divorce finalizes. And I hope you will be happy... You are getting what you want... Finally... Now leave"

"Shivaay aise kaise..."

"I said leave"

"Shi..."

"Get Out"

"Sh.."

He holds her wrist and makes her out of the house and closes the door on her face without even looking at her once.

"Shivaay..." says Pinky when he ignores it and leaves for his room. He closes the door and slides down the door...

"Why you have done this Anika?? Why?"

"Was I wrong in thinking that you love me??"

"You were not like this Anika.."

"Is this is the real Anika or the one whom I knew was the

one??"

and he brakes mirror because it makes him remember their moments together. he hurt himself... blood oozing out of his wounds in hand... He destroys chairs, table everything in his room which was in his reach to lessen the burning pain in his chest... but it doesn't less... it keeps increasing and then he falls down in floor unconscious.

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"I am sorry Shivaay... I am really really sorry Shivaay

"Now I will never come again in your life... I will go away from here forever..."

"Shivaay ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena"

"main aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon... bahut se bhi jyada cries Anika and fell down on her knees..."

When she feels a sudden pain in her chest and she also gets unconscious...

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'Achha chalti hoon duaon mein yaad rakhna

Mere zikar ka hontoon pe swad rakhna'

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and this finishes here. Finally I finished something😳

I don't know what I have written and how it turned out to be... Sorry if it was not up to your expectations... I am really sorry for that.

This doesn't have throwing divorce papers at her or her out of the house no illegimate drama and all... Hope you liked it.

Thank you for your support, likes and comments. Please keep it coming...

With Love

-Chhaya

Edited by NarbhiForever.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
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Shona it was so emotional nd painful
It was like a walk down the memory lane
It brought tears in my eyes
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: farinaks

Res

Shona it was so emotional nd painful
It was like a walk down the memory lane
It brought tears in my eyes

I was busy in editing and all you even read it😳
Thank you so much🤗
Sorry for the tears di😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a beautiful update
Very emotional and heartbreaking but written so beautifully
I completely disagree with annikas decision but what's done is done

Loved it completely, couldn't stop my tears
Thanks,
Much love

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