||Channa Mereya|| - Shivika Series last part Uptd Aug 16@Pg 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Beautiful

Thanks Gurveen😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
oh god i cannot watch the episode
i cant beleive this happened.

Even I am not watching the show Sumi😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy
Chhaya, u toh made me tear up, this is sooo beautiful!!!! I loved the way u portrayed love and heartbreak, both equally beautiful. The last few lines were really good, i have nothing else but just one word to say sweetie, B.E.A U.T.I.F.U.L❤️

Thank you so much Kripa for this lovely comment.😊

Thanks once again sweetie.❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: itzanya32
Chhaya! ❤️
You have really potrayed the emotions beautifully! Just loved it. And the scene where shivaay puts her hand over his chest and she takes a vow that she will do whatever she can to keep this heart save was so ethereal and beautiful!One of my fave scene in this update.
I really feel pity for Shivaay yaar 😔
He is doing all this and she will do something which will scattered him.She isn't realizing that when she will leave him,staying away from his wife is much more painful than the truth.
Do update it soonish!

p.s. Sorry for being late 😛

Love,
-Anya ❤️

Hii Anya❤️

Thank you sweetheart for such a lovely review. Yeah that scene was my favourite too and that was just last minute change.😳 Glad to know that you loved this update.

Hey don't be sorry yaar it's okay the thing that matters is you are here.

With Loads of Love

-Chhaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

[QUOTE=-Smile_please-]Speechless! It was beautiful

I mean felt so sad for anika

I mean she knew everything would be finished in sometimes and poor girl is relishing each and every moment it was very heart breaking to read that also felt bad for shivay he is dreaming a happily ever after life with his anika unaware of the storm waiting for him

They both don't deserve this but life happens

Seriously chhaya you're an amazing writer I loved reading each bit of it do continue this

So sorry for replying so late actually my net was down since yesterday night

Again mindblowing work

Thank you so much Aanchal for these beautiful words.

Hey don't be sorry sweetie... it's okay.

Thanks once again sweet❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: manaalkhan
Chhaya sweetheart..! Its amazing..!!
Read the both the parts just now.
Just loved loved loved it..😳
Every part, every emotion, every feeling was so beautifully described..😳👏
This phase is really dark & sad ishqbaaz & we IBians are going through..😕
Anyways do continue this series plz..

Thank you Minnie❤️

Happy to know that you loved it sweetheart!!!

Sure😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: AriyaLilyOrchid
Nycc

Thanks dear😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: _crystal_
Superb update

Thanks Diya (if I am not wrong😳)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: SassyQueen
Heya love!
I read both the chapters today ! And hell it is so awesome!
I mean the concept and writing! And not to forget the length of chapters! My god! Kitna bada! How can you type inna sara?😆😕

Anyways , wont apologize for replying late as I have been doing that lot these days 😳
Thank you for the PM and update soon.

love,
Sakshi

Hii Sakshi

Thanks dear😊

and about chapter length