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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Sooo painful yet beautiful... Awesome
Update soon
U penned her inner turmoil so well
Hats off to u chhayu
U r growing day by day
U r creating a beautiful world of urs

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

awesome Loved it yar...it was too painful to see this

you portrayed the inner turmoil of Annika beautifully...

see we can blame only fate here because if he had said this before she would have been in cloud nine...

life is giving her everything when it's going to take everything from her...he tooo realized that he is in love and he is too excited for the life he is going to spend with her without knowing that heartbreak is waiting for him...Annika making memories of him was the most painful thing...she is going away from him...

its going to be more painful

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_fati_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Beautiful.
The way you penned down her emotions is so nice. 😭

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rainbowveins

@rainbowveins

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Awesome Chhaya!I love how you manage to portray each scene so beautifully.It's amazing.Waiting for the next :)

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

oh god i cannot watch the episode

i cant beleive this happened.

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Kripa Shankar

@silver_dustXX

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Chayya, u toh made me tear up, this is sooo beautiful!!!! I loved the way u portrayed love and heartbreak, both equally beautiful. The last few lines were really good, i have nothing else but just one word to say sweetie, B.E.A U.T.I.F.U.L❤️

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Chhaya! ❤️
You have really potrayed the emotions beautifully! Just loved it. And the scene where shivaay puts her hand over his chest and she takes a vow that she will do whatever she can to keep this heart save was so ethereal and beautiful!One of my fave scene in this update.
I really feel pity for Shivaay yaar 😔
He is doing all this and she will do something which will scattered him.She isn't realizing that when she will leave him,staying away from his wife is much more painful than the truth.
Do update it soonish!

p.s. Sorry for being late 😛

Love,
-Anya ❤️

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Ananya

@Smiileplease

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Speechless! It was beautiful

I mean felt so sad for anika

I mean she knew everything would be finished in sometimes and poor girl is relishing each and every moment it was very heart breaking to read that also felt bad for shivay he is dreaming a happily ever after life with his anika unaware of the storm waiting for him

They both don't deserve this but life happens

Seriously chhaya you're an amazing writer I loved reading each bit of it do continue this

So sorry for replying so late actually my net was down since yesterday night

Again mindblowing work

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KnowItAllSwot

@KnowItAllSwott

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Chhaya sweetheart..! Its amazing..!!

Read the both the parts just now.

Just loved loved loved it..😳

Every part, every emotion, every feeling was so beautifully described..😳👏

This phase is really dark & sad ishqbaaz & we IBians are going through..😕

Anyways do continue this series plz..

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: farinaks
Sooo painful yet beautiful... Awesome
Update soon
U penned her inner turmoil so well
Hats off to u chhayu
U r growing day by day
U r creating a beautiful world of urs

Thank you so much Farah Di🤗

❤️

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