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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-3

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After one month.

"Gauri beta, kidar hai tu?" Her maa call her from her room. "Ha, maa" she shout from kitchen. Her mother come to kitchen. "Abhi tak dukaan nahi gyi?" "Maa ja rahe hai bas khana bana rahe the." She told her with smile and quickly turn off the gas and turn toward dishes and open the water tab. "Gauri tu yeh sab kyu kar rahi hai? Mein hu na me kardugi. Tu kya kya kargi chod yeh sab" she hold her hand and took the cup from her hand. "Maa de mujhe teri tabiyat yese hi thik nahi hai." "Mein bikul thik hu bacha tu dukaan ja chal bol rahi thi na aaj kuch order aane wala hai kaam jyaada hogya." "Chalo thik hai me chalti hu, kahana tayar hai time se ka lene and dabaayi time se le na. yese tho me tujhe time me phone kardugi but tub hi yaad rakhna, and yese bhi woh din ke baat hum chacha chachi par bikul bhi Baroosa nahi kar sakte." "Gauri hum abhi bhi yeh gaon chod kar ja sakte hai" "Nahi maa hum kamjoor nahi hai jho apne muskil se bhaage. Yeh humra ghar hai. Hum nahi chate ke hamre kaaran tu apne ghar aur bauji ke yaado se dur ho" She said with moist eyes. "Gauri tu aur hum jaha hohe ghar wohi hoga aur teri bauji ke yaade ghar me nahi humre dil me hai." She said while lovely touch her hands. "Maa abhi dar ho raha hai hum chalte hai. Who Kumarji aane wale hogye." She pick her bag and leave quickly. In her mind "Hum jaante hai maa, yeh gar kiya ahemiyat (importance) hai tere zindigi me, Hum kabi tujhse yahase alag nahi hone denge." She existed.

Other side gauri' s chacha call kali Thakur, " Thakur saab yeh ladki tootne wali nahi hai, ek mahina hogya hai. Humne kya kuch nahi kiya isko toodne ke liye, gaon walo ke iske berood(against) kardiya. Ghar me pani aur bijuli band kardiya par yeh hai ki tase se mas nahi ho rahi." He complete in disappoint tone. Kali pick the glass of alcohol and cares it. "Abhi humne toodna suru hi kaha kiya hai. Yeh tho bacho wali khel khel rahe the taki woh chode chode khel jeet kar kush hoti rahe. Uski muskurat bahut pyaari hai" He smile coldly. "khel tho abhi suru hoga shrama. Humri chiriya humri pijade me kud aaygi" He cut the call and dail another number. "Hello Mr.Oberoi, Hum ko woh zaamin chahiye than a hum woh zamin bechne ke liye taaryar hai... "Par shaat hai zaamin ki booli humri hogi and sauda kal hi hoga ... "Ha thik hai rakhte hai intzaar rahega aap ka" he cut the call and gulp whole grass. "Ab dekhte hai bulbul kene nahi aati humre pass." He laugh loudly.

On the other hand in Oberoi mansion. Tej starts to maintain distance from the family. He rarely join family dinner and no one even bother about him. Anika is handling whole family responsibilities as house elder bahu . Shivaay is handing business along with Rudra and Omkara. Yup both his brother join business to lessen his burden. But what a use they never had any time for each other. Strange , right? The obros are no longer spend time together. Omkara is made wall for himself he never let anyone to go through it. Now he love to spend time in office rather than home and reason everyone knows... Everything has change now. Shivaay is busy with business and family as Anika is pregnant. She needs him more now, He misses his both brothers but they distance themselves from him. and Rudra wasn't same after that incident. He also change himself. He became mature. It not that tej and Jaanvi relation never effect him. But that time there was his brother with him who protects him. There were his parents. His big brother Shivaay was his father and his O was like his mother. He miss his brothers but can he blame them for this. No. never. But he couldn't help but remember his best friends who used to listen his problem even if they found them silly but still listen. His Shivaay bhaiya was the first person where he used to go and asks for his demand. His O who he used to put the blame of his naughtiness and who used to correct him when he makes any mistake in kahawat. So, he can't be always be baby and look for his brothers right? He needs to be mature and handle his problem by himself. He need to be a man and take responsibilities. His big brother needs to be with his favorite bhabhi right now .Rudra and Soumya came closer to this time period. She already left for Austria for higher studies but they always in touch with phone calls and internet. They again became best friends. Now, He shares everything with her.

Svetlana became the uncrowned queen. She has everything money power and the title of being Mrs.Oberoi but Is she happy. No, she is not because she don't have the love and affection which every girl wants from her husband and his family. Her husband loves to spend time in office then home. He is fulfilling her every demand but what she really want from him. She never gets. She should be happy finally oberoi's are broken. Nothing same but she is not reason unknown to her. She felt pain whenever he push her from him. They are prefect couple for world but in real they are worst then Stanger. But she is stronger than this.

Omkara is not same now he became Omkara Singh Oberoi. Who can go any extend to get what he wants. The artist dead already this OSO is the business who love to play with people's mind. The soul of oberoi now plays with people's emotion. He don't care what people feels. He gets what he wants. He has build the wall for himself to protect himself from pain. He distance himself from his family as he don't want to hurt them. They are everything to him. He felt lonely without his brother but he can't go back to his old self as he died long back.

Omkara enter to the hall of mansion where he saw his Anika bhabi and Shivaay are discussing something but it seems like they are fighting. They saw him and smile He went near them and raised his eyebrow toward them in order to ask what happen. "Look na Om, your brother became impossible, He don't even let me move. I am just pregnant not that I have broke my leg. I need some excises this will be good for baby" She companied to her dever cum best friend. "Om, she is doing household work and doctor told her to rest" Shivaay also told his point. "Shivaay, She is right she need to do some excise" Shivaay makes face to see his brother na bhabhi's chamcha. "But please only walk. No work at all we have servant to work. You don't need to work everything by yourself He added and shivaay gave his big smile. "Om tu aaj intn jaaldi kese? Shivaay couldn't hold his query. " Actually shivaay that land which I want to buy for the hotel finally that land lord is ready to sell. So I was going their today for the deal. Om explain to him. "But om today only you didn't told me. If you have told me before I would have back your bag and other thing Anika said with panic voice when she realize he is going today but she has not ready anything. "Bhabhi relax you need not to worry, aaj hi call kiya usne and he wants to deal that tomorrow only, And bas 2 din ka baat hai, I will back soon, I pack my bag and ravi will help me for packing. Aap bas rest karo" He said and leave for the room. "Shivaay she turn with pout to complain to her husband about her dever but shivaay just smile. "Let's go to walk He hold her hand."

In his room, Svetlana who is talking to her mom cut the call when she saw him entering the room with Ravi. "Ravi pack my back for two days nothing more or nothing less. He commands him and went to the bathroom for him fresh on up. Om is going somewhere and as usual he didn't find it necessary to told her about it and she don't care about it either. She sat on bed and starts to play game on her mobile. Om came out from the room. Gets ready till that time Ravi finish his packing. He pick his bag and car key and without looking toward her

Precap: Rikara Meet😳

Edited by Unisha123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Double post 😳
Edited by Unisha123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Loved the update continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG..!! Intezaar khatam hua..finally you're here with update..aur woh bhi do do...seems like RiKarians pe sab bohot meherbaan ho rahe hain..loved this update...Gauri isn't broken yet..but Kali is there with his evil plans..Omkara is changed beyond any description..let's see how they meet and what the story unfold...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

OMG OMG OMG..!! Intezaar khatam hua..finally you're here with update..aur woh bhi do do...seems like RiKarians pe sab bohot meherbaan ho rahe hain..loved this update...Gauri isn't broken yet..but Kali is there with his evil plans..Omkara is changed beyond any description..let's see how they meet and what the story unfold...



lol do nahi ek hi hai. sorry for making you wait but kuch likhne ka man hi nahi ho raha tha. but abhi I promise ke yeh week hi next part aayga.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Loved the update continue soon.



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Awesome update
KT is trapping Gauri
Her mother is ready to leave
But she doesn't want to
She will neverescape
She will face her problems

Omkara has become OSO
Hope Gauri is able to melt him
Heneeds her

Waiting eagerly to read more
About their first meet
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update yar...
Totally loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Unisha123



lol do nahi ek hi hai. sorry for making you wait but kuch likhne ka man hi nahi ho raha tha. but abhi I promise ke yeh week hi next part aayga.

Aww...when I saw double post I thought we'll get another update today only...but it's okay..chapter 3 was worth waiting...hope you'll continue this ASAP...I'm really looking forward to this...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Nice update soon
U take so much time ki I forget plot of story

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