Rikara FF: In Between Ideals(Part 7- Page 15) 17.12 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant but do update soon pls!
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Part- Two

Omkara is staring at moon and thinking about his life which takes 360 turn in his life. Now he is married man to the woman whom he hated all his life. The feeling of disgusted about himself to marry his father's mistress and to bring the same woman to his home who is the real reason of his mom's broken marriage. He is going to share his life to the woman who almost took his mom's life. It's not like she is the first woman in his mother's husband life. But she affects the most. It's was never his plan to marry her. Just want some time to search some proof against her and make her part way to the Mr. Oberoi. But found nothing. Yes maybe marrying her was never a solution. Because main reason was is and always will be Mr. Oberoi. Before Svetlana also he has women in his life and after Svetlana also they will be women but he couldn't able to think anything when he saw his mom's condition but now thinking anything won't matter. He can't escape from his unwanted marriage. He sighs to himself when he feels the finger tracing his face. He immediately jerks her hand from his face

"We don't have to pretend in between four walls. You are my wife and I am your husband only for the world. So, please whenever we are alone don't you dare to touch me, I feel disgusted and even suffocated." Omkara says in warning tone. Svetlana feel insulted when he say he feel disgusted. "Why because I am your father's leftover?" She asks with little angry and more hurt tone. She never care who think what about her. She was Mistress of Tej Oberoi and she never feels so insulted even when someone pointed toward her about the same. She never thought she was wrong. She has suffered a lot in her childhood because of Oberio's and wants them to suffer too but when she saw the disgusted in her husband face. Did she actually so low and did she really did mistake to take route of being anyone's mistress? No she was not wrong. What Oberoi did to them is wrong and she just takes revenge from them. She is not weak not at least in front of Oberoi and her husband is also one of them. He is no one to judge her even if he does that won't affect her.

"But now you are trapping Omkara for life time. Even you feel suffocated and disgusted too you have to be with me. I hope you have not forget about the contract" She said we cunning smile which make Omkara even angry toward himself for falling on her trap but now he have to deal with her and he can't be weak in front of her. "Yes Svetlana I have not forgotten about the contract yes I know I have to bear you for life time but I will make sure you will also suffer equally. That contract has same terms and conditions for you too. Yes I am trap but you are also not a free bird. You want your price now you have to pay for ruining my mother's happiness. The person who is standing in front of you is not the same Omkara who was miserable to save his mother's house but the demon is which triggered by you."

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"Gauri, Gauri kaha chali gyi yeh hai ladki. Abhi dukhan se aayi thi abhi gayab. Ek pal ka chain nahi hai isko" Savitri gauri's mom looks for her daughter all around the house when she collides with person. She looks up to see his face as he is taller than her. After seeing his face she immediately joins her hand and lowers her eyes. "Namaste Thakur.. Shab, aap.. yaha?" Her voice is shaken with fear, he smirk with pride. He knows his effect in Village people. He rules everyone's heart with fear and he is proud of that. They won't even dare to see in his face. "Arre Thakur shaib, aap kud ne taklif kyu ki hum kud hi aane wale the hehe" another voice with nervous laugh join them. Savitri look at her BIL. "Deverji aap jante the.. woh savitri tries to form words. "Ha bhabhi pata tha mujhe... aap ek min ruko he turn toward Kali Thakur. "Shaib aap aayena betiye he invites him in." Thakur enter with his men who are carrying sagun(clothes, jewelry, fruit, sweets...) "Intna sab kuch... Savitri look at her SIL with confusion whose eyes twinkle with greed. "Suman, deverji yeh sab kya raha hai? "Arre bhabi apni gauri ke tho kismat khulgyi hai" "Kya matlab?" She has already guessed the thing but she want to conform. "Bhabhi, Thakur shab shaadi karna chate hai apni gauri, bhabhi apni gauri ab raaj kargi. Isko ab kaam karne ki ky jarurt hi nahi." Her SIL said or rather try to convince her. "Par thakur shap tho pahle se hi shaadi suda hai aur gauri unke beti ki umar ki..." "Bhabhi aab bhi kya soch rahi ho, who raja hai aur raja ke kayi raniya tho hoti hi hai na aur humri gauri tho hai hi yesi jho sab ke dil pe raaj kargi"

"Par humko kahi Raaj nahi karna" Gauri says from back. Savitri look at gauri. She knows about Gauri's temper. She won't angry easily but if gets she lost it. "Gauri beta tu aagyi ja tayar hoke aaja thakur shaib tujhe dekhne aaye hai Her uncle says with excitement. "Humne bola Hum yeh shaadi nahi karge" gauri again clear him. "Kya bol rahi hai gauri tu raaj kargi beta, abhi ja aur... he couldn't complete when she went in front of Kali Thakur. "Hum yeh shaadi nahi kar sakte, chale jagye aap yaha se" Gauri's mom, aunt and uncle get nervous. They know what Thakur can do if he gets angry. But he has smile on his face. He went near toward her. "tevar, acha laga humko dekhkar jinti sudar dekhne me ho utni hi tikhi bhi ho, abhi tho yeh shaadi hokar rahegi" he declare. "Humne ne kaha hum shaadi nahi karge, hum who chiriya nahi jisko koyi pinjra me band kar sake" she told him by glaring in his eyes. He gets even more impress with her. "Kimat diye hai, hum ko basuri karna ache se aata hai" he said with glance toward his uncle and aunt. Gauri and her mom gave look toward them. "Koyi bhi kimat gauri kumari sarma ko nahi kharid shakta" she said with anger and more with pain on her that her own uncle and aunt sell her. She knows they don't love her but never knew that they hate her so much that they don't even feel pity. "yeh chiriya tho humre hi pinjra mein aana hai" Thakur left, her uncle and aunt chase him.

Gauri mom reaches near her and hugs her tight. "Hum yeh shaadi nahi karge maa, hum kisi aur ke ghar ke raakh pe apne ghar nahi ban sakte, gauri kabi dusri womaniya nahi bangi." "Chinta mat karo beta kuch nahi hoga, Hum hai na hum yeh shaadi nahi hone denge.Hum dono yaha se kahi dur chale jayge" She assure her.

"Thakur shaib maafi, bachi hai nasamj hai" they touch his feet. "Abe khade ho" He said in commanding voice they stand up. "Khayal rako uska humri hone wali Rani hai, Maja aayaga bada maja aagya, yeh udte chiriya ke pankh ko katke sone ke pinjra mein tapdte hue dekhke" he laugh dangerously, his uncle and aunt also join him with nervous laugh.

This is the second part of the story. Hopefully you all like it. No proof reading so if any mistake happens please point out😊

Edited by Unisha123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey...you're back with the second part..kitna intezaar karwaya..not fair...hope we'll get the next updates soon...I'm just loving this story and it's concept...she never wants to be a second woman in someone's life...but fate has decided something else for her..let's see story kaise turnover leti hain...waiting for RiKara meeting...plz continue soon...
Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Hey...you're back with the second part..kitna intezaar karwaya..not fair...hope we'll get the next updates soon...I'm just loving this story and it's concept...she never wants to be a second woman in someone's life...but fate has decided something else for her..let's see story kaise turnover leti hain...waiting for RiKara meeting...plz continue soon...


Really sorry for the delay bas gauri ki entry scene sochte sochte time lagya😆 I hope acha nikal ke aaya ho😳 Rikara ke first meeting scene sochne ke baat pakka next part😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I am so happy that you updated...
I really loved this concept which is a roller caster ride of the original concept...I am so excited for this yar..
om doesn't want to become like his father end up like him and gauri who doesn't want to become a second women in someone's life also end up like that...I am eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Unisha123


Really sorry for the delay bas gauri ki entry scene sochte sochte time lagya😆I hope acha nikal ke aaya ho😳Rikara ke first meeting scene sochne ke baat pakka next part😉


Yeah..Ri's entry was as dabang as the show..I loved her character..ab toh bas Babies ki milne ka intezaar hain.. 😳 plz try to update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous update
I was waiting eagerly

Omkara showed Svetlana her place
But Svetlana won't back out soon
But Omkara too isn't same

The thing Gauri never wants to be
She will become unknowingly
She doesn't want to build her house
At expense of others happiness
She never wants to be a second women
But how will she end up being

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really interesting plot.. Waiting for the Rikara meeting . let's see How will gauri deal with kali Thakur and omkara with svet. Please update soon.
Eagerly waiting for your update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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We all can't wait for swetlana to get a taste of her own medicine. Great plot!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting concept.
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plz continue soon dear.

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