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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

KT is trapping Gauri
Her mother is ready to leave
But she doesn't want to
She will neverescape
She will face her problems

Omkara has become OSO
Hope Gauri is able to melt him
Heneeds her

Waiting eagerly to read more
About their first meet
Update soon


Thank you🤗
Will update soon 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: maivelli

Nice update soon

U take so much time ki I forget plot of story


Really sorry, I became lazy, 😛 But will promise ke aage se yesa nahi hoga😳 Please yeh time ke liye ek aur baar first chapter firse read karolo for the plot 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

Totally loved it


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Part- Four

Gauri is working in her shop as she get the big order . She need to finished in 3 days. When she gets the call from her chacha. She didn't pick the call 2 times but when again it starts ringing. She pick up. "Hello, kya baat hai?" She asks in a annoyed voice. She has no time to deal with their nonsense. "Gauri tere maa..." He stop in between. "Kya hua meri maa ko?" she ask in hurry. "tere ka accident hogya hai" He told her in panic voice. "Kya!! Yese kese accident hogya, Maa ko mene ghar me rehene ke liye bola tha" her eyes filled with tear. She is stock and devastate at the same time. "kya hai maa abhi, hospital leke gaye ho na?" She ask him in hurry. She is panic but hold herself for her maa. "ha, gauri humne hospital me dhakhila(admit) kardiya hai, tu jaldi aaja" He told her. "Ha hum aarahe hai tab tak maa ka kayal rakhna" she said and cut the call. She close her shop and run toward hospital.

Her chacha call Kali Thakur "Ha thakur saab woh aarahi hai" He said with smile. Kali Thakur smile "Achi baat hai, uski maa abhi mari tho nahi hai na? Who marni nahi chhaiye, badi kaam aane wali hai" He said with smirk. "Nahi thakur saab mari tho na hai par halat bahut karaab hai" Kali thakur laugh coldly, "Halat karaab hoga utni jaldi bulbul humre pass hogi" "Thakur saab humri baksish taryar rakna, aaj tho kaam hogi jana chahiye." He said with playful cackle. "Ek baar bulbul ko mile tho do, Kali thakur ka waada hai sone se bardege tujhe." "Acha Thakur saab hum phone rakhte hai, gauri aarahi hai." He said in hurry.

"Chachaji! maa kaha hai, kese hai? Uska accident kese hua? who ghar se bahar kyu hayi?" She bombed him with questions. "Gauri, yeh sab hum ko nahi pata, hum ko bas kisne baatya ke uska accident hogya hai." She catch his coller and pull him toward "Tum jhoot bol rahe ho, mujhe pata hai yeh sab tum logo ka saazis hai. Agar mere maa ko kuch hogya na tho tum ko hum zinda nahi chodge" She said with rang filled eyes, her eyes is blood red due to crying and anger which make him cold shiver. her chachi come and tries to make him free from her hold. "Chod inko, tujhe tho humra sukhiya aayda karna chahiye, hum nahi hote tho teri maa sadak ke kisi kinare mari padi hoti" She is still trying to make her leave his collar.

"Ji, kon hai patient ke shaat?" Nurse ask them, Listening her voice she immediately left his coller and reach her. "ha.. hum hai.. unki beti" she stutter but hold herself. "Ji, unka blood bahut bahegya hai and humne blood bank me contract kiya tha blood le liye but unke pass patient ke blood group ka stock nahi hai, aap unki beti hai tho aap ka and unka blood group same hoga na?" She ask hopefully. Before Gauri says something her chachi interpret her, "Are sister.. khoon tho ek tab hota na jab sagi beti hoti, yeh aanat thi bhaiya babhi ne asham se udakar laye the." Gauri close her eyes to clam herself. She knows they wants to hurt her. But this is not the time to cry, she need to do something. "aap chinta mat kijiye sister hum intzam karte hai khoon ka, bas humri maa ko kuch nahi hona chhaiye." She assure her. "Thik hai jaadi karna aaj shaam tak blood mil jana chahiye," she warn her and gauri nod her head in acceptance. "Abh kya kargi gauri, kahase layagi khoon? Tujhe pata hai thakur saab ka koon aur bhabhi ka khoon ek hi hai. tu thakur saab ke pass ja abhi wohi teri madat karge" Her chachi told her in hurry. Her chacha press her hand and nod her no. "Hume pata hai tum log ka karne ki koshish kar rahe ho." she said with in angry tone "hum apne maa ko kuch hone nahi dege" she said with determination on her voice. "Ka gauri, kon madat karga tera, gaon wale tho karne se rahe pata hai na? her chacha mock her. "Humri madat shakerji karge" she said with belief on her voice. "Ha, shakharji kud aayge tere maa ko khoon den eke liye" they mock her. She turn and leave she need to find the doner she hasn't the time to waste on these joker. She call every person from the villager but not even one person is ready to help her. She starts to loose her faith she close her eyes "Sankharji please humri madat kardije" she again try to call remaining people. She got the idea. She ask for the blood in SNS. She should try another option too so she left the hospital.

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Om enter to the kali Thakur house, Kali's servant lead him toward his room when he saw one woman doing pooja. He ignores and begins to walk but when he heard someone called her janvi Thakuryin. He remembers his mother, who is in hospital till now. She walks toward him and asks his hand for parasad. He stops believing in god but when she offer he couldn't say no to her. He gave his hand for parsad. After that incident he stop caring about other feelings but she makes him remember his mom. She gave and smile. Kali servant call him and he follow him.

"Aye oberoi saab aap ka hi intazar tha" "Mr. Thakur, mujhe bhi yeh deal ka bahut time se intazar tha" "Ha, pahle bechna nahi chatha tha par abh mujhe yeh zaamin bechani hai" "Good decision Mr. Thakur. I am glad you finally ready to sell your land, aap apni land ki kimat boliye" Kali smile.

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"Gauri is asking each and everyone for help but no one is ready, Village people are fearing kali. They don't want to get in trouble. She need to complete her order too, She need money to play her mother's hospital bill. She feels helpless. She doesn't know what to do to save her mother. She is thinking to go to kali thakur. She loves her mother and can do anything for her mother. He close her eyes and prey to her shankarji, "Hey shankarji, Humri mahat kije, koyi rasta dekhiye," her phone rang, she gets the call from the hospital. She pick u in hurry, "Hello, hum intazam kar rahe hai khoon ka bas kuch time lagega, please maa ko kuch nahi hona chahiye" ..."Ka, hum abhi aarahe hai bas." She cut the call and left for the hospital.

"Ji, Hum aage, who kaha hai , jinohe humri maa ko khoon diya." "Ji abhi abhi bahar gye hai aap tooda late hogyi, bol rahe the aap ne socal networking site par blood ke liye pocha tha. " "Ji ha" Hum maa ko dekhke aate hai" she walk off from there. "humre unko sukhiya khena tha, woh humre jivan me shakarji ka ashirbad banker aaye hai. Hum unse mil tho nahi paaye par hum shakarji se prathna karge ki unki jivan khushio se bhar jaye." She smiles.

"Ha Rudy, mene blood donate kardiya hai" Om said while working in his laptop. "Thank you O, aap ne mere ek baar kahene par kardiya." "Shut up Rudra tujhe hua kya hai, har baat me thank you kyu bolraha hai?" Om ask in irritate voice. Rudra has changed a lot. He used to order them around with his demand. He never shy and show his full right on them as he believes he has full right on his brother and they are bounded to full fill his demands. But lately, he stop demand anything from his brothers. He became mature and starts to handle everything by himself which irritate Shivkara. They didn't feeling good to see their baby brother grown up so fast. They should be proud parents but no they are not happy they are frustrated that their brother is not looking for them at night, He didn't share his problem with them."Nahi O it just that you went their for your work and I send you to denote the blood. You must be busy but she need blood really soon and I couldn't went their so fast, otherwise I wouldn't have told you." Rudra explain himself. "Ru, why are you giving explanation, you know things between us never going to change you can always demand me anything, and I am always free for you" Omkara said in clam tone. It was true that Omkara distance himself from everyone even from his brothers but he never thought that his little brother take it other wise. He can be change for everyone but not for his little bro. His mobile ring in other number, "Ek min Rudra, He saw his employee call him, "Rudra I will talk little later, I have some work to do." Without Rudra's reply he cut the call. "No, O you became really busy for your little bro" he smile sadly.

"You, can't even handle small work?" Omkara blast his employee. "Sorry sir but that girl is not ready to move, everyone was ready to leave but because of that girl everyone starts to protest." He informed Omkara. "You can't handle them than why even I am giving you salary?" He close his eyes to clam himself. "Who is the girl?" He ask him and he point out a girl who is sitting ahead of bulldozer. He go near her. "Excuse me, can you please get up" He ask politely. "Ji, aap kon?" "Main yeh land ka new owner hu and aap mere worker ko kaam karne nahi de rahi hai"

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Hope you all like it😊

Edited by Unisha123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Finally they met
Though they could have met in hospital
But Shankar ji has planned something else for them

Rudy has changed
All because of Svetlana
He thinks he has no right on his brothers
Hope Gauri changes that

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Finally they met

Though they could have met in hospital
But Shankar ji has planned something else for them

Rudy has changed
All because of Svetlana
He thinks he has no right on his brothers
Hope Gauri changes that

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon



Will update next week😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Finally rikara meet...
so it's om who had given blood to gauri's mother...
but they didn't met in the hospital...
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yaay..!! Finally RiKara met...Gauri's Shankar ji won't never let her lose...proved again...continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Finally rikara meet...

so it's om who had given blood to gauri's mother...
but they didn't met in the hospital...
waiting for the next update


Yup, I thought to give them little tasan😉 abhi gauri ko pata chal jata blood dene wala om hai tho maaja na aata na😛 Will post soon😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Yaay..!! Finally RiKara met...Gauri's Shankar ji won't never let her lose...proved again...continue soon..


ShankarJi ki favorite birdie hai, How can he let her lose😛

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