Rikara FF: In Between Ideals(Part 7- Page 15) 17.12 - Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

It's good Ur jhanvi thakurian helped gauri to escape. Not like DBO wala.



Ya, she help her though she has her own selfish reason But I guess as woman and human that is perfectly right. She is not coward. She is selfish and she did use her selfishness in right direction. I wish show ke Janvi bhi yesa kuch karti, darpok nahi selfish hoti tho sayad humra pura DBO MU me nahi nikal tha😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Thank god you continued :D
So gauri managed to escape
Can't wait to see what Om will say once he knows the whole truth
Hopefully he will believe her
Update soon:D



Of course mujhe continue tho karna hi tha😛
Yup, gauri mange to escape but for how long😈
will update soon😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part Seven

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"Choti Thakuriyan karme me nahi hai" woman shout from the room where Kali capture her. She came here to make Gauri ready for marriage but when she opens the door. She was not there. Everyone assemble in the room after hearing hear shout. Kali also came to room and grab the neck of the guard who was guarding Gauri. "Kaha gyi woh, tumhe jeemewari(responsibility) diya tha humne." Kali's brother hold him and ask him to leave that guard and he did "Ek kaam dhang se nahi kar sakte, kha kha kar shand ho gye ho" He is angry and frustrated. "Kon hai woh gardar jisne usko aajaad kiya?" He again asks in loud voice. "Bhaiya who yeh khidki se bhagi hogi dekhiye yaha rasi bhi ladki hai" Kali's younger brother show him. "Woh muthi bar chori tumhare aakho ke saamne se bag aur tumhe pata bhi nahi chala?""Humne woh ladki chhaiye kisbhi kimat par" he order his brothers and men who nodded and left to locate Gauri.

Janvi Thakuri sighs with satisfaction and relief. She heard Kali's voice who is talking to the phone "Ladki chahiye jinda ya mudra. Usne Kali ke kaied(jail) se baagi hai, usko bhi tho pata chale ke anjaam kya hota hai" He order his brother Now Kali will not marry her. She make her ran way her work is done. Now if she ran away aur get in hand of Kali will not be any problem to her. Her husband remains only her not other girl. She smile when she remembers she did quite good job after making her ran away she break the grass of window and hand the rope there. Now no one will suspect her.

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"What the hell are you doing in my car?" He asks furiously. "Ji woh humko nahi pata tha yeh car aap ki hai, pata hota tho hum kabhi nahi chadte" she answers in scare voice. She looks like a scare kitten. "Jho bhi ho pahle bahar aao" he order she did as asked. "Why are you here? Kal tho tumhare shaadi hai na?" He asks her but she kept her mum, did not speak a word. She can't trust him. He is same like Kali. She is scare what if he calls Kali Thakur and told him about her. No, any she can't take risk. Damn why she can't leave peacefully? Why she land up in his car over all people. What she do now? How to run away from here?

He is waiting for answer but she is not looking down. "I am asking you something, Tum meri car me kya kar rahi thi?" He again questions her. " Ji,... woh... me" she stammer. "Ha, ji... who... tum? kya kar rahi thi? tumhari shaadi ke din? He again asks her. "Ha, hum humri saheli(friend) ko bulane ja rahe the? Humri shaadi hai na tho" She complete her lie with fake smile. Om just rolls his eye. "Ya right shaheli ko bolne ja rahi ho woh bhi yese chori chori choro ke tara? Jhoot bolo tho at least me convince hu wesa tho bolo. Sach sach batao tum mere car ke truck me kya kar rahi ho? Bhag rahi ho? kyu? tumhe yeh shaadi nahi karna? He asks her. She looks toward him with hopeful eyes. "Ok tho I was right tum bhag rahi ho kyu ki tum yeh shaadi nahi karna chati, dusra koyi use ameer ishaan ko fasa liya kya?" He complete and broke her hope yet again. "Jab saara sach pata na ho tho usme apni rai nahi dete." She said in hurt voice. "mujhe koyi dil chabhi (interest) nahi hai tumhere sach janme. Main achi tara se janta hu tum jesse ladki woh ko. Paise ke liye kuch bhi kar sakhti ho, kisi ka bhi ghar barbad kar shakti ho, fir ek se man nahi barta tumhara jab woh insaan ko barbad kardeti ho tho dusre ko fasa leti ho. Tum jesse giri hui ladki kisi ek ke nahi ho sha..." "Bas bahut bol liya aapne aur bahut sun liya hum ne. aap jante kya ho?aap ko pata hai hum kese hai, humre shaat kya hua hai?ya aap jotishi ho, chara dekhe sach jan lete ho? aap jho yeh sab bol rahe ho na ise hume gusse se jyaada daya aarahi hai aap par aur aap ke soch par. Bahut dukhi lagte ho iss liye dusro ko bhi apne kadbe baato ke duk de rahe ho. Kyu, kisi ne dil tooda hai" she turn her face and gave mocking smile " par nahi tood kese shakta hai aap ke pass hai hi nahi" He hold her arm and push her toward car's truck "Tum janti kya ho mere barme? kuch nahi tho kese yeh sab bol shakti ho?"Hum ne bina soche and bina jane apni rai aap ko deti tho intna gussa, tho jho aap kar rahe tho uska kya? She gave answer with equal force. "Aap kisi ke baarme bhi rai bana sakte ho par dusra yeh sab kare tho gussa aata hai aap ko.aap kya jante ho humre barme aur humri majboori ke baarme" "Koyi bhi majboori intni badi nahi hoti ke dusro ke ghar tooda jaye ya kiske khusi ko china jaye" He told her. "Hum chalte kisi ka ghar toodna.. Hum nahi chalte kisi ke khushio ko china. Hum nahi chalte yeh shaadi" finally she clarifies to him. "Kya matalb? tum yeh shaadi nahi karna chati thi?" he asks in confustion. "Ha nahi chalte hai, tabhi woh humre shaat jabrajasti kar rahe the" "Ha tum ne bola aur mene man liya", "Kyu nahi man shakte?gaonwalo ki baat tho ek pal me man gye the" she asks in loud voice. "Kyu ki sab galat nahi ho shakte, agar woh jarbarsti kar rahe the tho tum police ke pass ja sakti thi" he tries to be reasonable "he answer her."Ha, koyi galat nahi ho sakte shivaye humre, hum hi galat hai, agar hum yeh shaadi karna chate tho yese baagte nahi aur konse police ki baat kar rahe hai aap? yaha police ki nahi Kali Thakur ki kanoon chalta hai" Omkara smile mockingly joke acha tha, konsi hindi movie ki kahani hai? "aap ko humri zindgi film ke kahani lagti hai?" She ask angry "Bata tho kahanio ki tara hi rahi ho.mujhe tumhare bakwaas sune me koyi interest nahi hai, tum baago ya Kali se shaadi karo I really don't care bas don't cross my way ever again" he turn and walk toward driver sit and drive way. Gauri wants to ask for help but she can't trust him. He doesn't even trust her. He can tell Kali about her. She needs to leave this place soon. She starts to walk toward village's bus stand.

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Omkara who is driving the car is thinking about her and her word " Bas bahut bol liya aapne aur bahut sun liya hum ne. aap jante kya ho?aap ko pata hai hum kese hai, humre shaat kya hua hai?ya aap jotishi ho, chara dekhe sach jan lete ho? aap jho yeh sab bol rahe ho na ise hume gusse se jyaada daya aarahi hai aap par aur aap ke soch par. Bahut dukhi lagte ho iss liye dusro ko bhi apne kadbe baato ke duk de rahe ho. Kyu, kisi ne dil tooda hai" He speed his car in anger samjti kya hai woh apne aap ko?"Hum ne bina soche and bina jane apni rai aap ko deti tho intna gussa, tho jho aap kar rahe tho uska kya? Did I really judge her wrongly? "Hum chalte kisi ka ghar toodna.. Hum nahi chalte kisi ke khushio ko china. Hum nahi chalte yeh shaadi" Did she really doesn't want that marriage and Kali was forcing her? Om, why are you thinking about her? Leave it. If they are forcing her too than that shouldn't matter to you that's not your business. You complete your work just leave from here. He set his mind and stop his car near daaba to have some food. He orders his food and waiting for his food he saw he heard two people are gossipinghe ignore but when he hears Kali and Gauri from them he couldn't. "Suna hai Kali Thakur ki nayi dhuhan woh Gauri hai na woh baag gyi" "Kya baat kar rahe ho?" Other man asks with shock. "Ha, mera bhai wohi kaam karta hai, who baata raha tha Gauri ko yeh shaadi nahi karni thi par Thakur jarbarjati kar raha tha shaadi ke liye tho who baag gyi." the first one answer. "Badi himat wali lagki hai, Thakur ke chagul se baag gyi" second one praise her, Om who is listen to their talk is in shock, "that mean that what ever she was saying is truth? She is not willingly marrying with Kali Thakur" He though in his mind. "Kahe ki himat? na samj thi ya pagal jho baag gyi agar nahi baag thi tho Rani banke reheti par abhi Thakur ka humkum hai ke usko pakad na hai zinda ya murda" The first one label her innocent and mad. Om became pale after hear them he couldn't take in anyone. He is feeling guilty for not trusting her. He shouldn't leave her their all alone. She couldn't even found any vehicle in that jungle. What if they found her and kill her. No he can't let that happen. He is the reason of all this. Only if he trust her than she would be save here with him but now he don't even now where is she. Is she save or? no no he can't let anything happen to her. He ran toward car and drive back toward the road where he left her all alone. "I really hope Gauri you are fine. I can never forgive myself if anything happen to you" He speed up his car.

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Gauri can't believe they actually found her again. She thought that she will be free bird after sit on bus but they found her even before bus starts. They are taking her to jungle why? They should take her to the havali to Kali but why they are taking her to the meet forest? What are they planning? "Aap hume yaha kyu laye ho?" She asks them but they didn't answer her. "dekhye hume maaf kardiye, Humse galati hogyi, hum yeh shaadi nahi karna chate the." She tries to give explanation. "Chitna na karo abhi tumhe yeh shaadi karne ke koyi jarurt nahi hai" "Ji" Gauri asks in confusion. They stop their jeep and push her. She landed on ground which cause her small cut on forehead. "Woh kya hai na mordo ki shaadi nahi hoti" She gone pale after hearing them. Is they going to kill her? Nahi they can't she has so many dreams to fulfill. She didn't see the life fully. What about her mother how will she survive. She doesn't want to die. Shakarji can't be that cruel to her. "Kali brother asks his man to dig the land for her. Other starts to do as told. "Shakarji please humri maadat kardije. Hum nahi marna chate" she prey to god. She correct mud in her hand, when they came near her she throw that mud in his face, She get time she get up and run. He asks other to ran after her. She is running for her life toward the main road to see if there is anyone who came to save her. They are running after her. When she finally came near to the road she saw the car, she run toward the car but before she reaches the car Kali Man capture her. Shout for help "Bacho, Bacho"

Here Omkara is came back to the very place but couldn't find her. She must left or they found her. No, No be positive she must left, yes" He tries to clam himself. He again starts his car and starts to look for her, "She must leave for Bus stand" He turn his car toward bus stand. He is driving when he heard the voice, "Bacho, Bacho" It's her voice, she is hear, She is in problem I need to save her. He stops his car and follow the voice.

"Hume jane do" Koyi bacho" she is shouting while Kali's man pulling her by her arm and her leg in ground, "Chup kar jitna chayagi utna dardnark maut dege, koyi nahi aane wala tujhe bachne"they warn her. They leave her arm and is in ground like slack. She slowly get up, "Please hume jane do" she join her hands. "Bahut bagaya hai, yese kese jane de". One man gave cut on her arm. She shout in pain, "Bola tha jitna chilayegi utne dard nak maut dege" He again give cut on her waist which makes her land on ground. Nahi yese choti choti chote nahi "Bahut shaqkh hai na tujhe baagne ka sab se pahle iska pair hi kaato" Kali Brother Laugh. One man took out the sword from jeep and walks toward her, she watches him in horror. He raises his sword to cut her leg. She closes her eyes in terror and shouts in her top voice. "Nahiii"

Omkara prevent the sword from cutting Gauri by holding it. Gauri slowly open her eyes when she didn't feel any pain. She saw him her shakarji's angle. Kali's brother asks Omkara what he's doing here, He was already leaving for Mumbai then what the hell is he doing here? Omkara didn't give answer but give him punch in his face by his free hand which makes him fall on ground. Kali's another brother ask him to get lost do not interfere in their personal matter if he doesn't want to lose his life. Omkara raised his eyebrow and answer him "Ek baar mene apne kadam aagye leliya tho piche lena nahi shikha. Me tum logo ko iski jaan lene nahi dunga." Omkara has the sword in his hand, fights Kali's brother and his men. He watches them collapse, they are not in the condition even to get up now. "yeh log insaan ho ya Rashkas" He ask himself in disgust. He looks over Gauri, who is in immense pain. She has many cut on her body. She has tear in her eyes because of fear but still she is trying to holding herself. He rushes back to her and moves to her and keen down to get in her level. He call "Gauri look at me." He touches her shoulder. When she realizes its Omkara, she hugs him, she has faced many problems in her life alone but this is something she never imagines even in her nightmare. She was about losing her life, if Omkara was not come there on time. She raised her face to look at him, her life saver, her protector, her hero. Her shankarji has sent him for her. She grabs his waist even more tightly like her life depends on him. If she leave him for second they will kill her. Omkara understand she is frightened right now and she needs assurance that she is saved and he is here to protect her. He hugs her back. "Gauri tum safe ho, I am here for you. I will protect you. I promise." She gave small smile on his chest but didn't leave him. Om picks her up in his arm and starts to move toward his car. He places her in backseat and makes her lie."I need to do your first aid but before that we need to leave this place they can came here any min. Tum aaram karo abhi, I am hear ok don't worry" he assure her. She nodded. Finally she has someone she really can trust. Who will protect her. He starts his car and leave that place...


Hope you like it😛

Edited by Unisha123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
So he misunderstood her..but when he got to know the truth he wanted to help her...thankfully Omkara was there to save her and he's aware of the truth now...Gauri's Shankar Ji has sent him to save her..can't wait to know what's gonna happen next..I think the actual plot of this story of Omkara falling in love with Gauri inspite of being married with Svetlana is going to start now...it's going to be exciting to read..continue soonish...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

So he misunderstood her..but when he got to know the truth he wanted to help her...thankfully Omkara was there to save her and he's aware of the truth now...Gauri's Shankar Ji has sent him to save her..can't wait to know what's gonna happen next..I think the actual plot of this story of Omkara falling in love with Gauri inspite of being married with Svetlana is going to start now...it's going to be exciting to read..continue soonish...


Thank you😊
Yup, real track will be start soon maybe after one or two chapter😃
Will try to update soon, 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: abhe

Yesss...loved it! Update soon..


Thank you😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for this beautiful update 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yay, the misunderstanding got cleared. Om saved Gauri.👏👏 now gauri already starting to see her shankarji in omkara.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update!!
Thank God all misunderstanding got cleared and he saved her chiraiyaa.
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
LOVED IT❤️
How he misunderstood her, how he doubted himself for not believing her
Then on finding out the truth his eagerness to find her and to keep her safe AMAZINGLY written

Poor Gauri , trying to fight but she was not strong enough, how they cut her with he sword , her scream, the pain and then her Savior Omkara.
Finally someone she believes she can trust.
Loved how she hugged him.

Hopefully Om will always keep her safe 😉

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