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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: babydevil
Wow! That was so amazing and so very well explored,
Every question and every confusion was what the Actual Shivaay Singh Oberoi would have asked and felt. This Shivaay was the actual Shivaay and not a altered version of what we want to see.
He knew that he has hurt her, he knew that he was guilty for the same and also he knew that he can't let go of her. But what he wasn't know is why?
Because he might have fallen in love but he doesn't know it, his actions are speaking it because that comes out of his heart and soul but when it comes to verbalising he cannot say he loves her because his brain doesn't know this.

So it was such a treat to read, as to how this Shivaay will get to realise what he feels for Annika without the drag of jealousy and separation.

Wow! It was just so pretty and wonderful:)

Warm Love
Diva_Vineet

Hello there!

Thank you so much for this lovely feedback. Ah, I know what you meant there. I usually avoid writing on tracks because firstly I am not watching the show, and secondly the characters and tracks are so messed up that I fail to bring myself to cover up for them, somehow. But then, be it reading spoiler or Shivaay again not trusting Anika made me write this.

I am glad you had a nice read. Thank you.

Cheers

-Harshada

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

A pleasure to read this! Had a very calming effect on me after all the mess that's happening in the show.

Edited by _Aliza_ - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

awesome update harshu 🤗

you beautifully portrayed the emotions going through Shivaay's mind beautifully 👏

The guilt of missunderstanding her...the pain of hurting her...the disappointment for not supporting her...everything was just perfect 👍🏼

Its like going a journey through his heart...all the questions which haunting him ...you portrayed every questions that had in his heart...He knows wat is the questions and it's answers but wat he doesn't know is why? he doesn't realized that he loves her..his innerconcious knows the answer but he dnt want to accept it...the part i liked the most is the conversation where it's saying that we always blame God but the truth is he had given us many chances...

its our fault that we doesn't utilise it properly...

I loved this update...❤️

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KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

It was fabulous Harshada.
Loved the update

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Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Its a RES again

Actually i have my exam on 18 june...so busy nowadays

i am sorry for the delays in my comments

Will reply as soon as i get some time

hope u understand

i remember i have too much to UNRES ...😊

Edited by Mystery1234 - 8 years ago

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Rhea-
Beautiful OS, Harshada. Absolutely loved it. Beautifully written. 👏
Thank you for the PM. :)

Thank you so much Rhea.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Nimik
Beautiful Harshada!!
Just no words for this!!

Shikha, thanks dear
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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: annikaa
Wow This was amazing!!
I love strange things that you connect to.
This was way beyond... Can't say in words...that brilliant!

The last lines said it all..!

"Tu Naa Jaane Yaa...Aas Paas Hai Khuda..!"

Even another line from the song..
"Khud pe daal tu nazar , Haalaton Se haar kar kahan Chala re!"

He left, away from home,
But he dint realise "Aas Paas Hai Khuda"

"Jab hoga andhera dar paayega tu mera uss dar pe phir hogi nai subha..."

He walked away into darkness, ended up reaching the Mandir
And realization dawned...!

One of my favorite songs!

Badi Waali Jhappi!🤗

Beyond Beautiful!

And here comes my Lassi with her ever so inspiring take❤️

Thank you so very much Anni. Coming from a brilliant writer like you, it means a lot😳 This was actually so spiritual, having so depth that it needs one to submit fully while reading in order to understand this to bits. This is more about unsaid than said. Very few actually got what this was about, actually you are the only one to be precise, I think who understood this. 🤗

Exactly. The entire song is beautiful but those three lines fascinated me so I used only them but otherwise, I love the song. What a beautiful way to summarize what I have written Anni. Beautiful👏 Thank you so much.

Lots of love and hugs

-Harshada