Maelstrom - One Shot [Current Track] - Page 3

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update harshu 🤗

you beautifully portrayed the emotions going through Shivaay's mind beautifully 👏

The guilt of missunderstanding her...the pain of hurting her...the disappointment for not supporting her...everything was just perfect 👍🏼

Its like going a journey through his heart...all the questions which haunting him ...you portrayed every questions that had in his heart...He knows wat is the questions and it's answers but wat he doesn't know is why? he doesn't realized that he loves her..his innerconcious knows the answer but he dnt want to accept it...the part i liked the most is the conversation where it's saying that we always blame God but the truth is he had given us many chances...

its our fault that we doesn't utilise it properly...

I loved this update...❤️

Originally posted by: Mystery1234

Its a RES again

Actually i have my exam on 18 june...so busy nowadays

i am sorry for the delays in my comments

Will reply as soon as i get some time

hope u understand

i remember i have too much to UNRES ...😊

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

I am so sorry for missing a lot of your stories and updates... I was on a vacation 😆

This one was beautiful in a different way. The emotions, the thoughts were deep. The man helping Shivaay, all throughout the conversation I was smiling as well as suspicious. His guilt, his feels... Lovely ❤️ How do you write when you haven't even seen the thing? That too so amazingly ❤️

I enjoyed this little piece thoroughly :D

Originally posted by: moon99

That was absolutely beautiful di! ❤️

The pain of hurting her and regret was seriously illustrated in a very different way, you know kind of building up the intensity as you went along! 👏

Now as far as the old man is concerned, I will have to read it again, I literally just woke up and am still half asleep 😆

But seriously is was perfect as always! ⭐️ ⭐️

Always waiting for more! 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the P.M! 😛

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

And here comes my Lassi with her ever so inspiring take❤️

Thank you so very much Anni. Coming from a brilliant writer like you, it means a lot😳 This was actually so spiritual, having so depth that it needs one to submit fully while reading in order to understand this to bits. This is more about unsaid than said. Very few actually got what this was about, actually you are the only one to be precise, I think who understood this. 🤗

Exactly. The entire song is beautiful but those three lines fascinated me so I used only them but otherwise, I love the song. What a beautiful way to summarize what I have written Anni. Beautiful👏 Thank you so much.

Lots of love and hugs

-Harshada

Originally posted by: _Aliza_

A pleasure to read this! Had a very calming effect on me after all the mess that's happening in the show.