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Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -Rhea-
Res.
Will hopefully unres soon. 😳
Finally UNRES! 😃
This is perfect. Its so good. It is so beautifully written. Absolutely loved it.
You cannot leave it hanging there.
Please thodi meherbani kijiye and update soon. 😆😳
Could you please PM me when you update? 😳
PS - I really like the title. <3 Its beautiful. :)

Thank you so much Rhea😊

Glad you liked it dear.

I am not leaving this story. I will update soon.

Rhea, I am sorry but I do not send PMs

Thanks for mentioning title as well.

-Mukta

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar...
even though there was not much relevations in this update but one thing was clear...Annika is in so much pain and she dnt want anyone to interfere in her life...
but shivaay wants to enter in her life and wants to erase her every pain...he loves her but he is not even expecting anything in return...he just wants to keep her happy but Annika doesn't want him to enter her life...
I really loved the way you portrayed this...I really looking forward to read this

Thank you Ayushi...

Yes, there are not many revelations in first update. They will unravel as the story will progress,

You got it right.

Glad you liked the portrayal dear.

WIll update soon.

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Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile
Loved it.
please update soon and PM me.
Intrigued about Anika and what's the relationship between them too

Thank you.😊

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: pri12
awsomeee...loved it

Thank you.😳

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Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Unres

Loved it.
Right from dialogues to scenes, from emotions to turmoil! Fascinating.

Update soon.

❤️

Thank you so much🤗

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Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: farinaks
So emotional... I was spell bound
Continue asap

So sweet of you.

Thank you so much.

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Aayat23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -Rhea-
Unreserved on page 2. 😃

😳

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jeness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

This Rohit guy has made an everlasting impression on viewer's mind. Why Im saying this because he is being included in almost every writer's fiction.😃. And Im happy to read different takes from so many tallented writers😊.

That 2 minute conversation on screen was enough. That too we don't have any clue if Annika was pretending or it was real. I really hope this Rohit guy exists in real, so that we could see him anytime soon on the show as well.😛

Anyways, coming to the update,

Something huge must have happened in Annika's past, isn't it?😔

Poor girl*sigh*.

But Im glad, Shivaay is there to protect her. He would drag her out of this dark pit.

I like your portrayal of Shivaay. How he never gives up.

He indeed is her 'Knight in Shining Armour'.

Well done😊,

P.S. - Might I know your name Writer?

Edited by jeness - 8 years ago