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Nitya14

@Nitya14

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Oh my god👏 What a story👏 What portrayal of emotions of two people👏

It was just amazing, beautiful❤️

Oh the pain, angst was just 😭

Girl, what dialogues you have written. I swear with every dialogue I was holding my breath, with what next... what next🤗

Though there is not much revelation about their relation in first part, but as she called him 'Sir' lastly, I think Shivaay is her boss, is he??

Already loved it and waiting for next part, eagerly. Please dont leave it in middle. Update soon.

-Nitya

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

This is Amazing

Anika is hiding so much within herself

Shivay is able to see through it

Shivay wanna enter her life and wanna keep her happy

But This is the last thing that Anika wants

Awesome

Continue soon

Do pm me if possible😊

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

It's a fabulous work and the way you portrayed their emotions loved it yaar!
Shivaay is irrevocably in love with Anika
But she has things bottled up inside her heart that are too painful.
Shivaay knows she is keeping the facade and wants to break the walls around her.
Whereas she don't want it and is contempt with her life as it is.
Waiting for next update
could you pm me?

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Rohini..

@Rohini..

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

Woah this was intense.

Loved it... completely.

Please update soon.

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1070625

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

Loved it totally..

so intense and beautiful..

Anika doesn't want Shivaay to enter in her life and he wants to ease her pain..

👏

Cannot wait to read more..

Update soon.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing story. Waiting for the next chapter eagerly:)

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

Res.

Will hopefully unres soon. 😳

Finally UNRES! 😃

This is perfect. Its so good. It is so beautifully written. Absolutely loved it.

You cannot leave it hanging there.

Please thodi meherbani kijiye and update soon. 😆😳

Could you please PM me when you update? 😳

PS - I really like the title. <3 Its beautiful. :)

Edited by -Rhea- - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update yar...

even though there was not much relevations in this update but one thing was clear...Annika is in so much pain and she dnt want anyone to interfere in her life...

but shivaay wants to enter in her life and wants to erase her every pain...he loves her but he is not even expecting anything in return...he just wants to keep her happy but Annika doesn't want him to enter her life...

I really loved the way you portrayed this...I really looking forward to read this

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Pragnya Kiran

@CrzyPulviophile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Loved it.
please update soon and PM me.
Intrigued about Anika and what's the relationship between them too

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nitya14
Oh my god👏 What a story👏 What portrayal of emotions of two people👏
It was just amazing, beautiful❤️
Oh the pain, angst was just 😭
Girl, what dialogues you have written. I swear with every dialogue I was holding my breath, with what next... what next🤗
Though there is not much revelation about their relation in first part, but as she called him 'Sir' lastly, I think Shivaay is her boss, is he??
Already loved it and waiting for next part, eagerly. Please dont leave it in middle. Update soon.

-Nitya

Hi Nitya!

Thank you so much for being first one to reply to this. It really means a lot to me.

I am so overwhelmed to see your response. Really glad that you liked it.

Oh thanks again for mentioning my dialogues dear.

Their relation will be revealed in the upcoming parts.

I will continue, for sure.

Thank you!

-Mukta