Hidden in plain sight RiKara ss ft. Shivika Rudra updated pt 4 pg 6

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Hey friends I'm Anya and I woukd like to present this story to you all. I don't know whether it is good but i just wanted to share this with you people.
Here goes!!

All the family members came to know about Gauri when Svetlana was arrested. Buamaa and Jhanvi proudly showed Gauri to others. Dadi was very happy. She told everyone that maybe marriage didn't happen before all but her grahapravesh must hapen in front of everyone, so tomorrow will be Gauri's grahapravesh.
Om first didn't say anything because his emotions were a mess after saving her, because at that time the lines between Gauri and Chulbul was blurred but now he was not feeling happy. He wanted Gauri out of his life but that seems impossible at the moment. He was silently cursing his fate. Gauri didn't know what to feel, on one side Om did not want her in his life and on the other side all the family members were happy seeing her. She decided to speak with Omkara as soon as possible.

After sometime all went to sleep so that they can make arrangements early in the morning next day and only Gauri Om were there. 'Omkara ji ab hum kaa karenge, aapne toh hume sultana ke jaane ke baad humein bhi jaane ke liye kaha, lekin aapke gharwale humare grahapravesh karne mein tulle hain? ' 'Waah kya acting kar rahi ho, tumhare liye toh yeh accha mauka hain, humare paise hadapne mein aasani hogi na? Yehi toh tum chahthi thi' Om said with his usual anger. Gauri got very angry because she just now laid her life on line for him and still he sees her as a cheater. She said with tears in her eyes 'humein yahan rukne ki koi shauk nahi hai, apke Dadi maaji buamaaji sab bohot kush the isiliye meine pucha kya karen kyunki agar hum chale jaayenge toh unhe bohot dukh hoga, warna hum toh jaise contract mein likha hai uss hisaab se jaane hi wali thi.'
Before Om could say anything more scathing Shivay and Anika came there. 'Arre tum dono abhi tak soye nahi kya?' ' Nahi bhaujayi bas jaa hi rahe the'
Anika suddenly had a flashback 'ooo beti ki!!!! '
'Kya hua Anika? ' shivaay asked in concern. 'Woh shivay yeh toh wahi hai jisne mujhse phone mein baat ki.' 'Now i remember ,Rudra and I also spoke with her. 'Aap dono ko yaad hai, mujhe toh laga aap bhul gaye honge.'

'Aise kaise aapko bhul sakte hain Gauri bhabhi, hum har roz thodi naa bulldozer se car thodnewaalon se baat karte hain' Rudra said from behind with his huge grin in place. Om had his first shock when Rudra called Gauri bhabhi and second shock came when he heard bulldozer. 'Tumhe kab pata chala yeh bulldozer ki baat Rudra? ' om asked in annoyance glaring at Gauri. 'Jab bhabhi se pehli baar phone par baat huyi naa tab. Woh mujhe ek poem bhi sunayi thi. Sorry bhabhi mujhe woh yaad nahi but mein phirse padunga aur yaad bhi rakoonga afterall meri choti bhabhi ke liye mein itna toh kar hi sakta hoon.' Gauri was smiling seeing his antics and Shivay didn't know what to think, at lease his Anika broke only his car's glass but yeh toh puri gaadi hi uda daali. He was feeling pity for Om and Anika was very curious to know this story. 'Tumhein kya zarrorat thi inhe batane ki meri gaadi ko bulldozer se thod diya? '

'KYAAA' at once three voices shouted. 'O yeh aapki gaadi ko'
'bullldozer se'
'thehes mehes kar di. Kya khidkithod sorry sorry gaadithod kaam ki hai Gauri tumne!!'
Rudra Shivaay and Anika spoke in shock. Gauri was blushing in embarrassment and said ' ooo humein bohot gussa aa gaya jab inhone humara dhukan apni gaadi se tok diya aur sab kuch thod daala. Isiliye meine bhi woh bulldozer se...' This time everyone was left speechless because no one thought Om was capable of such things. Om was feeling guilty because even though she is a bad woman he should not have done that to her. 'sorry mujhe aise tumhari dhukan ko thodna nahi chahiye...'

Before he could say more Gauri knew this was her only chance to clear everything because in front of his brothers and bhabhi Om will not shout at her and she can say everything to him. 'Aapko pata hai dhukan thodne ke baad kya hua? Humari chachi ne humein KT ko bhej diya tha kyunki ab mein unko paisa nahi de paongi aur usne meri maa ko bandhi banakar rakha tha. Aapne jab dekha tha tab mein vahan ek bandhi thi, pairon mein bediye the, mujhe sirf usse nahi balki uske do bhaiyon ke saath bhi shaadi karne ko majboor kar rahe the aur jab hum wahan se bhaag aaye tabhi aapse takraye aur baaki sab kuch hua. Dubara jab aapne humein dekha tab buamaa uske kabse mein thi agar yakin nahi aa raha hai toh jaakar khud puchiye unse. Mein waisi nahi hun jaise aap soch rahe hain.' She had tears flowing out of her eyes while saying all this and Anika Rudra were also crying. Om was shocked and he didn't know what to do. Shivay came to his rescue 'Anika Gauri ko uske kamre mein leke jaao'. After they left 'om yeh sab kya hai? We thought you both are happy but what is this I'm hearing? Tum use kis type ki ladki samaj rahe ho? Woh kya keh rahi thi? '

At first Om thought she said all this in front of them so that she can gain sympathy but he can't forget the look in her eyes when she was saying all this. Something changed within him and he wanted to give her a chance, it was maybe due to some residue feelings from when she was chulbul or seeing her about to die had created a soft spot he didn't know but all he knew was that he wanted to know the truth. 'Shivay meri madad karo aur pata karo kisi Detective se Gauri Kumari Sharma ke pure life history ke baare mein.' Though he did want to give her a chance, he was not ready to do it without any proof. Saying this he went away. Shivay and Rudra were standing there all confused but then decided to help their brother by finding out if he can gain a true soulmate in Gauri.
PRECAP: Detective reports, Anika-Gauri bonding, Om's repentence, Shivay's doubts. Etc

I'll continue this if you people like it and give me your reviews on this. This is my first fic and tell me how i can improve my writing to make it easier to read.

Love you all,
Anya.

Index
Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 - pg 3
Part 3 - pg 4
Part 4 - pg 6



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Posted: 8 years ago
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please continue with this.. i m liking this..
precap is awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz

please continue with this.. i m liking this..
precap is awesome


Thank you. 😃 So much is going to happen😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it

continue this


Thanks😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
Nice concept
Glad Gauri got chance to.tell him everything
Om otherwise wouldn't have given her a chance

Superb update
Plz continue
And update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Do continue I really liked the way you show how rudra shivaay and anika got to know the bulldozer scene.. Gauri taking the chance told her part was good...
Omkara acknowledging her story for a part time told shivaay to look into this matter...

I really want to know further,...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi . Anaya.
dear yr story is super awsm.
plz do continue soon.
n if u hv time hv a luk on A Blissful life rikara os.
n tell me if i should continue or not.
n update soon
luv
aru.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Wow

Nice concept
Glad Gauri got chance to.tell him everything
Om otherwise wouldn't have given her a chance

Superb update
Plz continue
And update soon


Thanks alot😃 Yes Om would not hear her out if they are alone. Gauri will get lot of support from Anika and Rudy😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Do continue I really liked the way you show how rudra shivaay and anika got to know the bulldozer scene.. Gauri taking the chance told her part was good...

Omkara acknowledging her story for a part time told shivaay to look into this matter...

I really want to know further,...


It means alot coming from you. Thank you so much😊. Will update soon

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