ShivIka OS - A Powerful Hold [ On Track ]11/5/17 - Page 2

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

Absolutely amazing. Loved your depiction of his feelings!

So sweet of you:-)

Thank you ...

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Beautiful one Harshu ❤️

Such a short one, yet it had such deep feels, such a great impact ❤️

Absolutely heartwarming and heartbreaking the last line was🥺

A great insight into their bond, what they share, what they mean to each other.

Duh, I can't even imagine what not reading your
stuff regularly would be like

P.S. How could so many beat me today😆

Thank you so much Krishi :-) :-)
I am glad you had a nice read.

I started with a thought of writing a drabble but then it exceeded a hundred words so had to name as a OS. I was just listening to the song and this came in mind.

Thank you! I just write and post but whenever someone points out what they liked in particular, like a scene or dialogues ... then I sit back and realize 'oh it came out well'.

I repeat, You are a Sweetheart.

Haha you came online a bit later after I posted I guess:-)
Be you first one or last one, you are always on top for me ...

Much love
-Harshada

exactly what the show didn't give us, thanks for this piece

Originally posted by: smileyallora

Hi harshada😊

we meet again😊 hope u remember me😊first of all sorry dude every time i start reading your FFs some way or other am interupted by my circumstances hence couldn't express how much i loved those⭐️

Whatta flow of emotions here👏 as an amateur writer (3parts in 3 days😆 give it a try if u feel like reading#sry if it sounds like self propaganda😆) i surely feel i must refer your stories as tutorials⭐️

Love u and your stories loads😊 keep writing dear loads to come from ur potential i hope😊

Originally posted by: mineforever

Wow.
It was just fantastic.
Shivaay's emotions were so beautifully articulated.
I wish they would have shown it in the show.
Loved the last line. "He doesn't want to live without her"❤️

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hello there,

Do let me know your name if you don't mind so that I can address you properly😊

Thank you very much.

I am honored to know you had a nice read and think this made up a bit for the rushed track in the show.

Love

-Harshada

Hi Harshada.I am Ayesha. 😊

Originally posted by: mineforever

Hi Harshada.I am Ayesha. 😊

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Ayesha, a very, very lovely name❤️

Thank u. 😊

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Hey Smiley🤗

And its pleasure seeing you again😳 Of course I remember you. Why and how can I forget you? You are a friend/reader and I cannot forget either of them❤️

Its perfectly fine Smiley. Personal life is demanding and I can understand it the best.

The fact that you took out time amidst that to read, itself means a lot.

Thank you so much dear😳 I am all happy hearing you liked this piece.

Yes, yes I saw you have posted something with the title 'jealousy' right? Oh surely, I'll read the soonest I can. Do not worry about self promotion😆 Its not any wrong thing anyway😉 Afterall We all write and post here, to get some feedbacks, right?😊

@bold above, now I can laugh on that. Seriously. My stories to refer as tutorials?😆 I do not write that good Smiley.

Love and hugs back🤗

Thank you for this lovely comment.

Much Love

-Harshada

Amazing Harshu dear