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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Shikha Singhania

@Nimik

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

This is such a wonderful shot Harshada!!

This indeed made up my mood after today's episode!!

Loved it!!

-Shikha

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rainbowveins

@rainbowveins

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

This was beautifully written!Especially loved the last line.It was so simple,yet overwhelming.Great work

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1070625

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

Totally Loved it Di. Superb and amazing. You always left me speechless😳...

Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

Absolutely amazing. Loved your depiction of his feelings!

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful one Harshu ❤️

Such a short one, yet it had such deep feels, such a great impact ❤️

Absolutely heartwarming and heartbreaking the last line was 🥺

A great insight into their bond, what they share, what they mean to each other.

Duh, I can't even imagine what not reading your stuff regularly would be like

P.S. How could so many beat me today😆

Edited by Black_Maniac - 8 years ago

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Hi harshada😊

we meet again😊 hope u remember me😊first of all sorry dude every time i start reading your FFs some way or other am interupted by my circumstances hence couldn't express how much i loved those⭐️

Whatta flow of emotions here👏 as an amateur writer (3parts in 3 days😆 give it a try if u feel like reading#sry if it sounds like self propaganda😆) i surely feel i must refer your stories as tutorials⭐️

Love u and your stories loads😊 keep writing dear loads to come from ur potential i hope😊

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mineforever

@mineforever

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow.
It was just fantastic.
Shivaay's emotions were so beautifully articulated.
I wish they would have shown it in the show.
Loved the last line. "He doesn't want to live without her"❤️

Edited by mineforever - 8 years ago