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jeenal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Really want to kill pinky...

Kaisi maa hai...

Fwlt bad for anika...

Loved your rendition

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: jeenal20
Really want to kill pinky...
Kaisi maa hai...

Fwlt bad for anika...

Loved your rendition

Me too😳

Thank you ❤️

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: .Aashi.
Lovely read

Thank you Aashi😊

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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Superb... Fantastic nd commendable... ShonA... I loved it
Continue soon...plz make it as a short story

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Sri vidya

@Cheesybabe

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Lots of emotions when I read this n do continue soon . Superb

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S.love1

@S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

This was awesome

Loved it

I wish there was a second part with pinkys o my mata

But non the less you have written this piece beautifully

Clearly shows how helpless they were

Much love!!

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1012277

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

A very beautiful OS, Chhaya.
Shivaay. ❤️
Absolutely loved it. :)

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Wow it was so emotional! I loved reading this, plus Saiyaan is one of my favorite songs - so it felt really nice reading something related to that.

You made them get separated in the exact way that I wanted - I never wanted them to go apart coz of some stupid MU (like they're showing now). I wanted them to get separated owing to their inner conflicts and I wanted them to miss and pine for each other and seek each other out in the end. Here Annika leaves because of Shivaay's inability to express himself and it was so emotional. I loved it!

Edited by _SilverLining_ - 8 years ago

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