Am I in Love?-RiKara SS Complete - Update Pg17(03/05) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
hello ginnie

my name is priyanka alias pt thats what my college buddy used to call me,
😛 i wil read the chapter latter on then will give u feedback
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2 sorry didn't get when you updated...

So omkara opened up his dilemma it's really surprising the person who is so full of deep love feeling shayari can't understand his feeling.. love the way Shivaay described and told him to be sort out or don mess the things...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3

It was amazing and cute too...

Omkara realized what his brother wanted to say and he felt weird not able to see the other side...

He wanted to talk to Shivaay bit end up in am awkward position update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
😊okie so self introspection is going on Omkara's mind

contemplating things in his mind cool!
hopefully he gets to know .😆

nice update but thodi choti h 😭

I wanted more i m famished for ur stories on rikara
keep writing more with same pace
and ha u ended the part on oops moment
😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it yar
finally Om understand the situation of Shivaay and Rudra when he will say shayari...
poor om...never thought that love hits him hard like this...his conception about love was entirely different but now he gets to know about the real love
poor guy in excitement went to shivaay room where full romance is going on
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Thank you so much for the amazing comments and all the love!

For now, I am going to be replying to all your comments and love in the form of a single giant reply post... so bear with me till I get a little more leeway in the number of posts per day.

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Genie 🤗 ... loving your RiKara.. Omkara pointedly.. 😆 .. such a cutie he is.. super glad that he's got a reality check.. it's hilarious.. n the mills n boon stuff is replaced with this confusion where he knows not what's hit him 😆 .. n him barging into Shivaya room.. hadd kar Di bande ne.. hehe.. chalo let's see how this goes.. can't wait for RiKara meeting now.. :)

You simply concentrating on RiKara leaving everything behind is such an awesome idea but on second thoughts you are doing just fine even now.. 😆 .. can't wait for this adorable Omkara to realise he's in love..

Thanks for this


Super glad you loved my Omkara... He is a cutie isn't he? And the poor cinnamon roll is confused and frustrated with himself... Well I'm happy you liked the reality check cuz he's gonna get a lot more of those in the next couple of chapters...

Originally posted by: DamseLInActioN

I have always wanted to read something like this :D,

seems like it's not going to be easy for him to project his feelings, he's a mess right now.
Loved what happened at the end ;)
So going to wait for your update!


Thanks DIA! I'm glad you got to read what you wanted to... Omkara is a bit of a beautiful mess atm and it's gonna get a little messier before things become clear to him... So hop on and enjoy the ride!

Originally posted by: pt311288

hello ginnie

my name is priyanka alias pt thats what my college buddy used to call me,
Tongue i wil read the chapter latter on then will give u feedback


Originally posted by: pt311288

😊okie so self introspection is going on Omkara's mind

contemplating things in his mind cool!
hopefully he gets to know .😆

nice update but thodi choti h 😭

I wanted more i m famished for ur stories on rikara
keep writing more with same pace
and ha u ended the part on oops moment
😆


Hi Priyanka! Does anyone call you Prinku? Or Prinku Pehelwan? LOL

I know this update was tiny but like I said in my postscript, I stop where the story tells me to stop... Hopefully the next update will make up for the lack of length in the amount of action!

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Chapter 2 sorry didn't get when you updated...

So omkara opened up his dilemma it's really surprising the person who is so full of deep love feeling shayari can't understand his feeling.. love the way Shivaay described and told him to be sort out or don mess the things...


Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Chapter 3

It was amazing and cute too...

Omkara realized what his brother wanted to say and he felt weird not able to see the other side...

He wanted to talk to Shivaay bit end up in am awkward position update soon


No worries... I'm glad you got to read both chapters and liked them enough to comment on both!

Omkara not understanding what he was feeling, even though he is well versed in shayari and is in touch with both his and others' emotions, germinated from the idea that his conception of romantic love was very different from what he was actually feeling.

Most people who have romantic and idealistic notions of love, find they are uncomfortable when the real thing hits. It's almost always uncomfortable, intense and a lot messier on the emotions. Also, considering the way both his brothers dealt with their situations, he was able to be removed from the chaos of emotions and see a clearer picture. It's safe to say that before Anika and Soumya respectively, Shivaay and Rudra had no notion of that once-in-a-lifetime sort of LOVE.

Shivaay thought he would be able to live in a lifelong business deal, but that was before he felt the real thing and afterwards, no one but Anika would do. Rudra too, was a serial dater before Sumo. He went through a lot of confusion and frustration and he's still dealing with his emotions about Sumo, Gul and team having dropped the ball badly on that. I just wanted to explore the idea of Omkara facing such a dilemma himself...

p.s. : could anyone give me a brief rundown on the hows and whys of PMing? This is my first time on the site and I would appreciate a tutorial... also that would make it easier for you guys to know when a new chapter is up!

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it yar

finally Om understand the situation of Shivaay and Rudra when he will say shayari...
poor om...never thought that love hits him hard like this...his conception about love was entirely different but now he gets to know about the real love
poor guy in excitement went to shivaay room where full romance is going on


Ha ha... I know the shayari thing and ShivRu's reaction to it has been dealt with in IB but it's been such a long time since Om has spouted any that I was tempted... also, dude's gotta understand that he needs to simplify things in life. Thanks for your awesome comment.. stay tuned for next update with ShivIkaKara...
Edited by writergenie17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Alright! So stoked by the love and encouragement you guys have showered me with, that I am updating the next chapter now...

Enjoy!
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Chapter 4

Shivaay and Anika had been deep in a romantic moment, their arms around each other, foreheads touching and staring deep into each other's eyes.

"Sorry... sorry. Main baad mein aata hoon."

He was about to walk out the door when he felt a hand at his shoulder. Turning, he saw Anika looking at him with almost motherly concern.

"Andar aao Om... Shivaay aur main tumhare aur Rudra ke liye humesha available hain" she said in a welcoming tone even as the blush of embarrassment started to recede from her face

"I'm really sorry for interrupting you guys... woh main..."

"Don't worry about it Om... Anika aur main, we're husband and wife... abhi sirf pause button dabaya hai, humare paas to poori life padi hai romance karne ke liye. Tu bataa... what's up?"

And Shivaay laughed at his wife's pretty blush returning as she hit him on the shoulder repeatedly for being so besharam in front of his own brother, muttering 'baagad billa', 'tadibaaz' and 'ek glass paani' under her breath.

"Wo... I just... I wanted to talk to you about something you said back in my room"

"Haan... bolo"

"Just to be clear... you think ki ye jo bhi feelings ke saath main lad raha hoon, it's because main Gauri se pyaar karta hoon?"

Shivaay and Anika looked at each other and turned to Om, nodding in unison

"Yes... hum dono ko lagta hai ki tum Gauri se pyaar karte ho... Aur ye jo bhi pareshani tumhe ho rahi hai it's because you haven't dealt with the fact ki tum usse pyaar karte ho. You have to accept that you love her and that you'll love her for the rest of your lives. Jab tum yeh accept kar loge, to tumhari saari emotional issues bhaag jaayengi"

"Kaise?"

"What do you mean kaise'?"

"I mean how do you know that I love her? Ki ye pyaar hi hai? Poori life wala pyaar? Forever after and all that..."

Before Shivaay could say anything, Anika stopped him

"Om... ek baat bolo. Main tumse kuch sawaal poochoon to jawab doge?"

At his nod, she continued

"Agar tumne kisi anjaan ladki ko museebat mein dekha... wo kaali Thakur ki tarah koi use uthaake le jaa raha ho... to kaisa feel karoge?"

Om was wrong-footed by the question and blinked at Anika for fifteen seconds before trying to answer her

"Obviously use bachaane ki koshish karoonga. No one deserves to even be near a monster like that!"

"Maine nahin poocha ki tum kya karoge... wo to mujhe pata hai ki tumhare bas mein jo bhi hoga tum us ladki ko bachaane ki koshish mein zaroor karoge. Tum teenon bhai yahi karoge aur main ye achi tarah jaanti hoon"

"I think... mujhe uski chinta hogi. I will feel worried for her, for her safety... like any normal human being I guess."

"Acha... agar wo ladki main ya Soumya hoti to?"

Now the answer came even before she finished the question

"To mujhe pehle inta dar lagta ki main paagal ho jaata. I can't lose either of you... we can't lose you. Tum dono hum OBros ki life mein nahin hoti to hum sab toot jaate. Seconds later, I would be so angry that I would probably... no, definitely kill whoever tried to hurt you"

Anika's eyes were wet by the time Om finished... she quietly squeezed his hand in gratitude and affection while Shivaay looked away, trying to blink back his own emotions. He'd been rattled by the thought of Anika in danger and Om's answer had kindled his emotions a little too easily.

"Ab ek last question... agar wo ladki Gauri hoti to?"

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Ooh... Ended on a cliffhanger of high emotion... What's gonna happen next?

Comment and tell me what you think will happen in the next chapter... I'm curious to know...

Also, as always any and all feedback is highly appreciated. I love hearing from you guys, its like the best part of my day!

Edited by writergenie17 - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
res
and i cant wait to read it😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
😭 u ended on cliffhanger not done

beautiful update I wish om to realize his love for gauri soon

thnq dear for such regular updates 😃


no one calls me prinku 😭 ha some of my friend n family call me priya


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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Cliffhanger T.T
*shoots you with potatoes *

Annika is such a good influence on Shivaay,she has changed him for good :D and damn him for saying that pause button thing xD shameless!

The whole ShivKara-Annika conversation made me smile,it was really good!! We need something like that in the show too.Things are starting to get interesting,can't wait to see where it goes from here.It's safe to say I am hooked ;)

OK come on and put up another chapter,hurry up! xD


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