Was It Because I Am Your Responsibility? - OS [On Track] Check Pg 12

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: annikaa
RES..!
Can Afford single shots in chaos..!😆

*********

UnRes

"Because I Love You..."

Wow...!
I love faluda😆
N this was so faludaaish..!!
N emotional also..!
Brilliant piece!!!⭐️

I m a fan of ur narration.

P.S
I still love the narration of the story OS Bouquet the first shot!!😳

Unressed.😆

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rana.mina

@rana.mina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

wowww that was perfect
Thank u for sending me pm
and yeesss i love ur work bcz the way u explain everything is just awsome

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: annikaa
RES..!
Can Afford single shots in chaos..!😆

*********

UnRes

"Because I Love You..."

Wow...!
I love faluda😆
N this was so faludaaish..!!
N emotional also..!
Brilliant piece!!!⭐️

I m a fan of ur narration.

P.S
I still love the narration of the story OS Bouquet the first shot!!😳

Thank you so much Anni 😳
I am glad you liked it...

That's so faludalious of you 😆

Really Anni?? You seriously made my day:-)

Yes 'Night To Remember' ... I still remember your comment on it.:-) :-)

Thanks a ton Anni

Loads of love
- Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: rana.mina
wowww that was perfect
Thank u for sending me pm
and yeesss i love ur work bcz the way u explain everything is just awsome

How sweet of you.
Thank you so much for the kind words.

I am glad you liked it...

Love

-Harshada

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Beautiful as akways Harshada 😳 loved it ❤️

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: jarir2010
beautiful

Thank you😊

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: dimpled.smile
Beautiful as akways Harshada 😳 loved it ❤️

Thank you so much dear:-) :-)

Glad you enjoyed reading!!

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Anu [ I hope I can call you that:-) ]

Please, dont rush.

Unres if and when time permits.

Loads of love
- Harshada

Hey Harshu! Dear you can call me anything you like😳 and really sorry for being late😛

My life is a complete mess nowadays Itna kaam rehta hai na ki kya bataonBut anyways I won't tell much as you know this will continue the whole life😆

Now coming to the update it was as usual fabulous 👏👏 It was so piognant and full of emotions.Was really giving me an emotional feel😆 but the last part took my heart away😳

"Was it because I was your responsibility?"

"Because I love you.."----- Love this part!❤️ It was heart whelming and the last dialogue was chery on top of the cake! It suit so perfectly at that spot!

Do wite more Dear.

Love you,

Anya😳

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

She chose shivaay over herself...yeah

That's anikaa...selfless love for shivaay...

And last dialogue of shivaay maar hi diya yaar...

I love all shayaries and love this os...I know I know I'm too late to comment but kya karu main late latif hu beastie...Pata nahi kyu ek ajeeb si khushi milti hai jab bhi tumhari stories padhati hu...hey main yaad to hun naa tumhe...???

This once for my darling harshu...

Mere bagair mukammal hai...daastaa teri...,

Tere bagair mukammal main ho nahi sakti...!!!

(Mukammal means unblemished)