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MAHIRA KHAN

@Mrs.KimTaeHyung

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Awesome Chappy !!! Appy!!!

Beatifully written!!!

Why was Neel's thumb cut???

Love the way you Portrayed the emotion!!!

Waiting for next chappy!!!

PS - you are saved this time!!!

And I'm tired of commenting seriously!!

Being serious is soo difficult!!!😆

Your Chappy is like Vanilla ice-cream ...

And I love Vanilla alot!!!😳

Edited by Mahira_khan - 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

awesome Loved it

when we want to find mistakes in someone we will only see that...he already made a opinion about gauri that she is a characterless girl...and he wants to prove his point

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sush

@sushups

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Res

Seriously I m hating it

Not ur story but IF what is wrong I had unreserved this post but if dies somehow I just noticed it is still unreserved

Coming back to ur story.. I can't complain as u have given a big update this time🤗

But yeh dil maange more😆

I m loving this story... Everything about the story so damm good waiting for the next part eagerly😳

Edited by sushups - 8 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Hi Appy 😊

And I'm in love❤️ This is seriously going great and I loved the imagery it invokes. You're doing great with this going back and forth thing, it's kind of fresh and entertaining. Keeps the interest and also develops the story.

I've watched the original series to which Teri Payal ki, song belongs to, it was one of the very first serials I've watched and I loved it. Especially that song, it has so many deep emotions involved and the music is just wow...but reading it in a backdrop of RiKara is a unique experience.

Hope you'll continue soon!

Lots of love,

Sakura

Edited by Sakura24 - 8 years ago

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Mahira_khan
Awesome Chappy !!! Appy!!!

Beatifully written!!!

Why was Neel's thumb cut???

Love the way you Portrayed the emotion!!!

Waiting for next chappy!!!

PS - you are saved this time!!!
And I'm tired of commenting seriously!!
Being serious is soo difficult!!!😆

Your Chappy is like Vanilla ice-cream ...
And I love Vanilla alot!!!😳

@bold: comes in upcoming chappy's 😉

I am glad that u r liking it!!

Lol!! U r one person who cn never b serious 😛

P.S. how come connection b/w chappy and vanilaa? 😕

Stay tuned!!!😊

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it
when we want to find mistakes in someone we will only see that...he already made a opinion about gauri that she is a characterless girl...and he wants to prove his point

exactly; i wanted to use a line but dunno whether i will "kala chashma laga ke dekho toh puri duniya kaali nazar ti hai" Same thng happening with him.

Stay tuned to know if his kala chashma is taken off or not!! 😊

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: sushups
Res

Waiting! 😳

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: .SNOWWHITE.
beautiful appy

Glad u like dit!! Stay tuned!! 😊

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appynehra

@appynehra

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi Appy 😊
And I'm in love❤️ This is seriously going great and I loved the imagery it invokes. You're doing great with this going back and forth thing, it's kind of fresh and entertaining. Keeps the interest and also develops the story.

I've watched the original series to which Teri Payal ki, song belongs to, it was one of the very first serials I've watched and I loved it. Especially that song, it has so many deep emotions involved and the music is just wow...but reading it in a backdrop of RiKara is a unique experience.
Hope you'll continue soon!

Lots of love,
Sakura

An SLB inspiration is supposed to do that- be in love! If u say this, i would feel I did some justice to it at least! Coming to flashback part- that was an attempt sort of, from my side, I was curious if I could write that way 😛

That ws even my first- that serial and somehw a few days ago; when I came across that song, I felt like using it for this!

next update would be next week!!! Stay tuned !! 😊