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Originally posted by: smrithy14
awesome
it much different from all stories on rikara
waiting for next part
The 2nd Shot was Outstanding...👏👍🏼
Gauri's belief in her Shankarji is strong like Jodha's faith in Shri Krishna...😊😊
Om was always irked with Gauri...always misunderstands her...what more, now he is blaming her for spoiling poetry for him...😒
Appy, I didn't understand whom you referred in this line "And today her lover had lost his thumb; just because she was wooing him in the most obnoxious way that could ever be."---- 'Her' is Gauri of course, but who is her lover who lost his thumb due to Gauri's wooing!!? And why was Gauri ever woo anyone when she loves Om!!?? Please clear the confusion if it's not any kind of twist you are planning through this line...😛😉
All Oberois along with Rajmata Sahib & Mandira Devi were enjoying Rana & Neel's drunk dance...even Rudra joined in at the ending...😉😃
Gauri was dancing with Rana & Neel...she danced pointing at Om & actually meant her words for him 😳😊 , but he mistook it again thinking she meant it for Neel 🤢😔
Om behaved rudely with Gauri...he thought Gauri loves Neel...so was his reaction only out of hate for Gauri or was it somewhere linked to jealousy?? 😉😛
NeeRi (Neel + Gauri) bonding is excellent...totally liking their bond...😃😊
("Bhaiya, mujhe lagta hai ki bhabhi aapse bahut pyaar karti hai"
"How dare you call her that???"
"Om, relax. Rudra; she is not our sister-in law till Om says."
"yeh ladki bahut smart hai Shivaay"
"Om, tu stress mat le. Till she doesn't affect you, ignore her.")----- Loved how Rudy sided with his bhabhi...🤗 Shivaay will always be the best brother, giving Om the option to decide whether Gauri should be there in their family or not...he doesn't want to impose just bcoz his brother is married...Shivaay understands Om a lot like Gauri does...😊😃 Hopefully, when Gauri will be included then ShivRi & GaRu teams will be treat for us just like AniKara & AniRu...😉😃
Gauri made her lover loose a finger for money!!!😲😕 I guess this is something you are going to show this incident in flashback, right Appy???
("O, ek baat kahu?"
"Bol"
"Hume kisi pe believe krne se pehle time lena chahiye, ye sach hai par iska matlab ye bhi nahi ki hume decide kar lena chahiye ki wo galat hai")----- Rudy talked like a matured boy...he is fanning the small fire in Om for Gauri so that it burns bright...😛😉
Continue soon...😃😃
Originally posted by: Roselind
The 2nd Shot was Outstanding...👏👍🏼
Gauri's belief in her Shankarji is strong like Jodha's faith in Shri Krishna...😊😊
Om was always irked with Gauri...always misunderstands her...what more, now he is blaming her for spoiling poetry for him...😒
Appy, I didn't understand whom you referred in this line "And today her lover had lost his thumb; just because she was wooing him in the most obnoxious way that could ever be."---- 'Her' is Gauri of course, but who is her lover who lost his thumb due to Gauri's wooing!!? And why was Gauri ever woo anyone when she loves Om!!?? Please clear the confusion if it's not any kind of twist you are planning through this line...😛😉
All Oberois along with Rajmata Sahib & Mandira Devi were enjoying Rana & Neel's drunk dance...even Rudra joined in at the ending...😉😃
Gauri was dancing with Rana & Neel...she danced pointing at Om & actually meant her words for him 😳😊 , but he mistook it again thinking she meant it for Neel 🤢😔
Om behaved rudely with Gauri...he thought Gauri loves Neel...so was his reaction only out of hate for Gauri or was it somewhere linked to jealousy?? 😉😛
NeeRi (Neel + Gauri) bonding is excellent...totally liking their bond...😃😊("Bhaiya, mujhe lagta hai ki bhabhi aapse bahut pyaar karti hai"
"How dare you call her that???"
"Om, relax. Rudra; she is not our sister-in law till Om says."
"yeh ladki bahut smart hai Shivaay"
"Om, tu stress mat le. Till she doesn't affect you, ignore her.")----- Loved how Rudy sided with his bhabhi...🤗 Shivaay will always be the best brother, giving Om the option to decide whether Gauri should be there in their family or not...he doesn't want to impose just bcoz his brother is married...Shivaay understands Om a lot like Gauri does...😊😃 Hopefully, when Gauri will be included then ShivRi & GaRu teams will be treat for us just like AniKara & AniRu...😉😃
Gauri made her lover loose a finger for money!!!😲😕 I guess this is something you are going to show this incident in flashback, right Appy???
("O, ek baat kahu?"
"Bol"
"Hume kisi pe believe krne se pehle time lena chahiye, ye sach hai par iska matlab ye bhi nahi ki hume decide kar lena chahiye ki wo galat hai")----- Rudy talked like a matured boy...he is fanning the small fire in Om for Gauri so that it burns bright...😛😉
Continue soon...😃😃
Originally posted by: sara1990
please update soon
Originally posted by: appynehra
So, are u motivationg me or demotivating me to wrote good chappy? 😛I am glad that u r liking it!!!P.S. u shoud have change hapy also to chappy wen u changed Gul to gun! I thot u ll drop gul ka boomb on me 😛😆Stay tuned! 😆
Originally posted by: Mahira_khan
I am doing none!!!Just findind a way to shoot you with my Gun of Gul!!!😆
Shot-4
Helloo guys!
So I am back with an update; featuring two small VMs done by me! They are my first tries so of course not that perfect; I just intended to do it for the SS. This is one of the stories; updating which makes me the most nervous- as it's one of my craziest imaginations! A lot of dialogues from SLB movies and some things taken from Paulo Coehlo (there are many places; hence, I haven't mentioned all of them, sometimes, my version of them, sometimes as they are). Also, the song in between is from an old serial that used to come so if you want you can just see its video on youtube; the link for which I've added.The VM making ate my head off; so a bow down to all VM makers here. And you know, what you have to do- leave your feedback as always!! Just to make clear; the VM is Om's dream- which is a flashback of what had happened just after 1st shot ended- that is in the holi celebrations!
Om's dream (first day in Jaisalmer, a flashback just after the first shot completed
the VM: https://vimeo.com/212719442
And he woke up with a start rubbing the sweat off his forehead. Omkaara had seen her again; he had just dreamt of their first meeting that day in the palace; when Rudra had convinced him to come to the holi party and Rudra had made him drink some bhang. She was there; watching and enjoying the holi celebrations. Co-incidentally; it was only them who had still not been put colours on. He had glared her; wondering whether she was for real or not. And before he knew, she had rammed into him and he held her, once again.
Flashback (the first day in Jaisalmer)
Shivaay: Om? You okay?
The moment he turned to Shivaay, She had ran away from there. Omkaara thought of it as hallucination and went off.
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*FB continued
(Another side, in the gardens where holi is being played)
"Pranam Ranisa, holi ki subkamnayein"
(Greetings to the queen, and wish you a happy holi)
"Arre Neel, tu kab aya re chora? Thare ko b subkamnayein"
(Neel, when did you come?Wishes for hoi to you too)
"Gaane-bajane ki taiyaari krke aya hai na. Aj kuch acha sunaiyo, bambai se mehman aye hai"
(Have you prepared for singing and dancing? Play something nice today, there are guests from Mumbai)
"Jee Ranisa,Gauri kathe hai?"
(Yes, Rani ji. Where is Gauri?"
Her name sent a chill through his spine. So, he was not hallucinating. She had been there. It was her who he had seen. But how come here? Anyway, he was getting annoyed of waiting to meet the princess to lock the deal. It was too much for him.
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*FB contd.
Neel saw her from the back.
"Aye chiraiya, kathe bhaag ri hai tu?"
(Hey girl, where are you running?)
She was standing with her back towards him.
"Tu je mhari bhasa kab se bolna seekh gayo"
(Since when did you start speaking my language?)
"Ab jo rajkumari sa bolengi, wo hi toh parja ne bolno parego. Neeche naach-gaana suru hone wala hai. Tu kathe jave hai?"
(The subjects have to speak whatever the princess speaks. The music and dance is going to begin downstairs. Where are you going?)
"Jo main gau aur thari payal na khanke, ye koni ho sake, rajkumari sa"
(That I sing and you don't dance, doesn't happen, Rajkumari sa)
"Iss bahane hi sahi Neel, tum gaoge toh!"
The Oberois had been told that there was a small jashn (party) after the holi and just before Gangaur.
And then the dance started,
"The music piece" (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XphBjxuws1I)
And here he was, Neel with his dafli. Rajmata gave a stern look in the direction of the stairs from where the sound of payal came from. And there descended, Princess Gauri Kumari... Bhati making deliberate noise from her payal and looking hopeful at her best friend Neel.
"The payal sound just before mukhda"
As four kalbeliya girls surrounded her she came, with her hands on the sides of her waist with a sly smile on her lips.
"Teri payal ki chan chan chanan, jiyara liye jaaye
O teri kangan ki khan khan khanan, jiyara liye jaaye"
He sang looking at her, as if he sang for her to dance. As she moved her hands to the height of her head and jingled her bangles, h moved his dafli just next to her hand.
It seemed as if she danced for him and he sang for her.
"Paon mein bijliya, hai qayamat chudiya
Nachna tera hoke magan, jiyara liye jaaye"
He bent with his dafli next to her feet swaying with a slight jump. He touched his forehead looking at her smiling face on the word chudiya. She circled around him revolving with her flowing lehanga making her look beautiful as he played dafli and sang kneeling on one leg.
"Ho teri payal ki chan chan chanan, jiyara liy jaaye"
They both smiled at each other as the song ended.
Om looked at her. She had been so perfect in this, charming people with swaying bodies and smiling lips- lying to them as and when convenient. Perhaps, this was the man who was her lover and perhaps, like his brother's fiance Tia, she also wanted to earn some money; as she might have already done with Kali Thakur. However, one thing he didn't miss was the red vermilion on her forehead. He wondered if he was her next target.
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*Present
Omkaara sipped from the coffee that the servant had probably put while he had slept. He smiled bitterly at the concept of love.
"Badtameez, besharm aur khudgarz hota hai
Pyaar toh aisa hi hota hai"
He had seen both of them dance the first day and he had seen both of them dance yesterday night. Their eyes reflected pain; pain of separation from a loved one- but they were together- then, why? Moreover, she confused him- the way she talked about Neel and her husband; like the first day:
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Flashback (1st day)
The audience watching the programme clapped; fascinated by Neel-gauri's performance. Her dance on his music was nothing new to them; yet, it brought a new charm always.
"Le chora; thari mehnat ka paisa"
(Take boy, the money for your hardwork)
Rajmata always made sure to remind Neel of his caste and his position. She had always despised his closeness to Gauri; especially, after their growing old as people made their own interpretations which had gone worse after gauri returned from Bareilly.
"Toh mhare ko b dijiye, mhari mehnat ka paisa"
(Then give me also, the money for my hardwork)
Her nostrils flared as her grand-daughter cum the princess came forward to rescue her friend's respect.
No doubt that this was his job- entertaining people. But, whenever he had done this in the Jaisalmer Palace, it was more as a part of a celebration with his best friend rather than earning money and which had never been taken by the general populace lightly. A friendship between a boy and a girl; a low caste and a high caste- didn't make much sense to them as it didn't to the Rajmata. They had almost given up now- explaining anything to anyone.
Some random lady: "Lo! Aa gyi radha, apne krisna ko bachane. Maaf krna Rajmata, choti munh badi baat karu; kahi aisa toh nahi ki thaari chori ka jatadhari; ye banjara ho aur je sab thaari chori apne parem ne chupane ke liye kar ri ho"
(Here, Radha comes to save her Krishna. Sorry Rajmata, being a small person I say this: what if this musician is who your daughter calls jatadhari and that your daughter is doing all this to hide her love)
Rajamata's eyes turned bloodshot red and she clenched her fists at hearing this. No-one! Up until now, no one had ever had the audacity to point their finger towards the royal family. And today because of her grand-daughter, someone had questioned the royalty!
"Chota munh hai toh kyu bol ri hai kakisa? Ab agar bol diya hai toh jawab de hi dete hai. Bachaya toh Krisna ne Sudama ko tha kakisa, baaki aap aur apki soch!"
(If you are a small person, then why speak, Kakisa. But if you have spoken, I'll answer you. It was Krishna who had saved Sudama; rest you and your thinking)
The lady left the palace considering their reverence to the royal family followed by an angry Rajmata.
Neel: "Kabhi kabhi lgta hai, thaare se saadi kar lu toh humari aadhi paresania dur ho jati"
(Sometimes, I feel like, if I marry you, half of our problems would be solved)
"Toh kar le; mai bhi toh kab se soch rahi hun; dudho nahao puto phalo"
(So do it, I have been thinking for so long: chants a blessing given on weddings)
"Bhul paegi apne jatadhaari ko?"
"Bhul paega, apni banjaran ko?"
And Neel and Gauri laughed loudly; as to hopeless romantics, as if they were together in their own journeys to love supporting each other.
Their laughing stopped only when Ranisa had come to take her to the Oberois. They had momentarily got lost in each other's eyes as Omkaara and Gauri were introduced but she ofcourse, had put up a nice faade of acting as if she met him for the first time.
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*Present
He took another sip. He noticed how she had manipulated the fingers pointed towards her. They had to be right. All the pieces fit into the puzzle perfectly. A poor lover, her taking away money from Kali Thakur in pretence of a marriage, the whole village knowing of their affair and she manipulating it with words-How much similarity did she share with Tia and Svetlana! But she transcended their capabilities- upheld her name in all pretence!
He saw her while passing through his room.
"I must say, Gauri, you are the best of the lot of your kinds. But pray, tell me why do all this?"
"Isq ke liye."
"Aur apne 'ishq' ke liye; sabko barbad kar dogi tum?"
He emphasised the word ishq; the word which seemed almost empty to him now- as he saw people using others in its name to their own benefits or to the benefits of the chosen ones.
"Isq kisi ko barbad nahi krta, Omkaara ji. Isq toh bas insaan ko pura kar deta hai. Na paaya jaa sakta hai na khoya, kyuki isq toh sagar ki tarah hota hai; jo sirf behta rehta hai."
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84Y6m2YSGHo[/YOUTUBE]
He stood pointing his fingers towards her as she stood in front of him pondering of how worse could one's image be. Her words and the honesty that reflected in them always mesmerized him doubting his own judgement of her; for a few moments they looked as f they were trying to understand each other.
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"Us ki koi khabar mili kya?"
Neel looked down as his best friend questioned him.
"Thaari aur mhaari kismet mein sirf ek antar hai rajkumaarisa; jisse tum pyar kart oho wo paas hokar bhi dur hai aur jisse mai parem karu hun wo dur hokar b pass"
(There's just a small difference in our luck- the one who you love is close to you yet far and the one I do, is far yet close)
Neel held her hand as he spoke- he didn't want to hurt her. Yet, he wanted her to realise that her love for a person who would never love her back was futile.
Omkaara saw them holding each other's hands and chided himself for doubting his own judgement. Perhaps, she wanted to put up the Kali playact just to marry her lover. Perhaps, she was the best in them. He felt bad for Neel, for a moment. Perhaps, she didn't even love him- Neel, who had not flinched while thumb was being cut off for her. But, he could also be one of them- after all playing with people's emotions seemed to be the new hobby for a lot of people; especially the ones he had recently met.
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Appy
Dear I haven't read this yet but just wanna say the first video is not working... N has been blocked because of STAR plus claim