RiKaraSS-Ishqbazon ki had!(With an SLB twist) Index upd,p1,13/4 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: falala333

This is awesome.. I'm loving the royal twist to the story..
Look forward to the next update


Stay tuned!! Glad u liked it!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sushups

inteha hogayi intezaar ki😭


aane wali hai chapter bas ek do din hi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
The 1st shot is A-W-E-S-O-M-E...👍🏼⭐️

Palace in the midst of desert with women who are filled with love, hope & dream...😃& the cherry on cake is the Marwari language... I am already loving the story, Appy...😊😊
So the scolding part is done by Rajmata Sahib, i guess...😒 & Maharani Mandira devi is defending Gauri like the sweetest supporting mom...🤗
Gauri does have a never-wavering faith on her Shankarji...😊😊
The Oberois are signing a deal with Gauri...well may be because she is a princess...but the best part is RiKara will meet...😃😊
Tej will be Tej...as always a jerk...can't he see the positive side ever...his never-ending complaints...😡🤢
So all Oberois came except ShaNky & Prinku...well good that Pinky didn't come, Tej hi kaafi hai...😉😛
Maharani's sevak, Rana ji gave warm welcome to the Oberois...😊
Rudra's antics...the way he said "No no I am Rudra Oberoi, not Rudra Sa", I cracked up...😆😆
Rudra ko nhi lata Om toh tension hi tension hota, ab wo hai toh pagalpan add karke entertainment ko badhawa dega...😉😆
Om & his sadness...😭...thnkxxx to Rudy he got ready to watch the celebration of Holi in the Palace...😃😊
Hope RiKara meets soon & the misunderstandings between them get cleared...

Continue soon...😃😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Appy!!!!

Gun is loaded!!! Get ready to die...

You didn't update the next part!!!

Is Asap meaning After new days???
I thought that asap means fast...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Mahira_khan

Appy!!!!


Gun is loaded!!! Get ready to die...

You didn't update the next part!!!

Is Asap meaning After new days???
I thought that asap means fast...



Shoot!!!!! I run!!!!

Update coming tonight or tommorow!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Hellooo guys!!!!
Thank you so much for keeping patience with me and deeply sorry to hae kept you all waiting for such a long time.

So, in this SS- what I am going to do is this: this chapter contains the mid of the story. And then from here, it will keep going in flashbacks and coming to the present. Let me know if it gets way too confusing for you- I'll try to make it right. Enjoy!

Also, for the new cast, please do check out page 2. No space so couldn't put it up in the title.

Shot 2

Both opened their eyes in their respective rooms near the window.

She remembered the conversation between he dadi, Rajmata Dhankor and her mother, Rani Mandira devi just before she had seen him. She smiled looking at the moon thinking how her belief in Shankarji had served her right.

He remembered the events that ensued from setting his foot in her home state to just before meeting her. He felt disgusted by her today. A woman had initially set herself ablaze because for her thirst for money. And today her lover had lost his thumb; just because she was wooing him in the most obnoxious way that could ever be. To top it all, her references to Meera and her ishq quotes- this female was spoiling poetry for him forever.

He came out as he saw Rana and neel; half drunk and dancing. Who could have thought that such things could happen in a royal set up.

Shishe Se Shisha Takraaye: Rana

Shishe Se Shisha Takraaye Jo Bhi Ho Anjaam:Rana

Oh Dekho Kaise:Rana

Shishe Se Shisha Takraaye Jo Bhi Ho Anjaam:Rana

Oh Dekho Kaise Chalak Chalak Chal:Rana

Chalak Chalak Chal Chalak Chalak Chal Chalkaye Re:Rana

Chalak Chalak Chal Chalak Chalak Chal Chalkaye Re:Rana

Jangh Pakawaj Tashe Baaje Chalke Jab Yeh Jaam:Neel

Oh Dehko Kaise:Neel

Oh Dehko Kaise Dham Dham Dham Dhamkaye Re: Neel

Dham Dham Dham Dham Dham Dham Dhamkaye Re: Neel

Shishe Se Shisha Takraaye: Neel and Rana

Neel and Rana each had a bottle in their hands and they were very visibly drunk with the bottle swaying their hands. The big courtyard right in the middle of the palace was filled by them drinking and dancing along with few other sevaks joining. He noticed Rajmata Dhankor and Rani Mandira devi enjoying it from their balconies as he was. His brothers, parents and Dadi had also come out to look at the commotion happening outside.

Yeh Madira Haan Yeh Madira: Neel

Yeh Madira To Le Aati Hai Yaadon Ki Barsaat: Neel

Chalak Chalak Ke Chalti Jaaye Dil Ko Yeh Madira: Rana

Haan Yeh Madira Hoton Se Utre To Bole Dil Ki Baat: Neel

Neel threw the alcohol in all the directions. But the way he appeared at that moment was very different from what he had imagined both of them to be- gold diggers. He appeared as a man pining for his love.

Garaj Garaj Ke Dil Mein Garje Ghum Ke Yeh Badra: Rana

Dil Tak Jaise Yeh Pahonchi Aayi Aayi Aayi Uski Yaad: Neel

Uski Ek Jhalak Uski Ek Jhalak Mil Jaaye Itni Hai Fariyad: Neel

Itni Hai Fariyad Itni Hai Fariyad: neel

At the last second line, Neel went towards Gauri, looking at him smilingly from the corner of the courtyard showing her a one wth his hand as he pined for his love. And he opened his hands wide, holding the end of his dhoti in one hand, as if making a request to god.

Naache Meera Jogan Banke Oh Mere Ghanshyaam

Dekho Dekho Dekho : Rana

Naache Meera Jogan Banke Oh Mere Ghanshyaam

Oh Dekho Kaise : Rana

And she entered the paradise, swaying holding the lehanga with both her hands, revolving around Rana and Neel with Rana pointing her out as Meera

Zhank Zhank Zhan Zhank Zhank Zhan Zhananan Zhananan

Paayal Baaje Re : Chorus

Zhank Zhank Zhan Zhank Zhank Zhan Zhananan Zhananan

Paayal Baaje Re: Chorus

He looks at her swaying waist and shoulder; he wondered how a person responsible for a death could be so happy in her own world. Perhaps, that is why some people are called to be shameless.

Pyaar Mein Tere Dil Yeh Chaahe Ho Jaaye Badnaam

She takes the bottle high in her hand, and breaks it singing in the direction of Omkara, and in which Neel is also standing.

Oh Dekho Kaise Oh Dekho Oh Dekho

Dekho Dekho Dekho Dekho Kaise

Rana and Neel show awe making Gauri smile at their antics yet again.

Dhirk Dhirk Dil Dhirk Dhirk Dil Dhirktha Jaaye Re

Dhirk Dhirk Dil Dhirk Dhirk Dil Dhirktha Jaaye Re

Dhamk Dhamk Dham Dhamk Dhamk Dham Dhamk Dhamk Dham Jaaye Re

She puts the bottle in between and the three compete as to who is going to get the bottle. Finally Gauri wins it. She sways the bottle in her hand with the rhythm in which their (Rana and Neel) heads also move with the bottle.

Chalak Chalak Chal Dhamk Dhamk Dham Khank Khank Khank

Dhadk Dhadk Dhadk Dil Zhank Zhank Zhan Thrik Thirk Thrlk Jaaye Re

Gauri and Neel put their heads touching each other and sway with the music. He only feels more disgusting to see them and frows when he notices his brother having joined Rana

Shishe Se Shisha Takraaye

Shishe Se Shisha Takraaye

The other Oberois find their act cute. Slowly, as the dance finishes, they all go to their respective rooms. Her act was too much for him now. He goes to the courtyard, where now, only Neel and Gauri happen to remain.

"I must say,bahut khoob hai tum dono ki Jodi"

"Kyun na ho Omkaara sa. Humare bachpan ka dost hai yeh"

"Pyaar kisi aur se, aur natak kisi aur ke sath"

Neel got startled at listening to Omkaara's tone. Was he her jatadhari- the person Gauri had got married to in Bareily?

"Agar tumhe lagta hai, ki kal job hi hua aur jo tum kar rahi ho, usse tumhe Oberoi bahu banne ka mauka milega toh tum galat soch rahi ho"

Neel got angry at the way Omkaara held her hand, however, being from a lower caste, he decided not to create more troubles for his best friend who had loved him as his sister would.

"Samajh gye; dhyan mein rakhenge"

"Good for you"

He walked off giving both of them a look which contained warning for them.

"Gauri... Gauri, ye hai na tera jatadhari?"

"Ab bta, tujhse zyada acha dikhta hai ya nahi"

"Sach Gauri, aise aadmi ke liy baawri hui padi hai tu?"

(really Gauri, are you mad for such a person?)

"Wo humare liye aisa sochte hai phir bhi hume har baar bachane pahuch jaate hai. Kya zarurat thi Omkaara ko, Humse saadi karne ki? Ache insaan hai wo, bas halaat ke age majboor hai"

(He thinks that way for me, yet he saves me. What was the need for himt o maary me? He is a good person, just a victim of circumstances)

"Aur pakhandi bhi. Sach ka jaap krne walo, saari duniya se jhoot bol ra hai"

(And a hypocrite. He worships truth yet he lies to the world)

"aadarswadi insaan aksar pakhandi laage hai haalat ki wajah se. Jo kaha jar aha hai who sunna chahiye na ki jo keh raha hai usse kyuki ziindagi sabko dhokha deti hai; har vyakti, har bhavna aur har aadars ki pariksa leti hai"

(Idealistic people often look like hypocrites because of their circumstances. Listen to the words, not the one who says for life deceives the most; it tests every person, every emotion and every ideal.)

"Arri bawri, main jisse isq karu, wo bhi mhare se utno hi isq krti hai par thaara toh..."

(Arre, mad girl, the one who I love atleast loves me back but your story...)

"Wo bhi humse isaq krne lga hai, dekha na tune? Unki aankhon mei dekhta toh samaj jata. Jisne hamesa jhoot dekha ho, usse sach pe biswas krne mein ho. Jitna jyada unhe samajte hai utna hi zyada unke isaq mei pad jaate hai"

(Didn't you see that he also loves me? You should have seen his eyes. The one who has seen only lies, for him to believe in the truth would be difficult. As much as I understand him, I fall in love with him.)

"bas thaare liye ye hi prarthna karunga, ki thaara biswas sahi saabit ho hamesha"

(I'll just pray that your belief is always proven true)

He came to his room and threw the file on his stool. Svetlana had always annoyed him with all her antics to come close to his father and she had tried the same even on him but this girl feigned innocence so perfectly- had Riddhima Ishana and Svetlana not been in his life, he would have fallen for her long back. But now that he was a changed man, it wouldn't be easy to play with him for her.

"Bhaiya, mujhe lagta hai ki bhabhi aapse bahut pyaar karti hai"

"How dare you call her that???"

"Om, relax. Rudra; she is not our sister-in law till Om says."

"yeh ladki bahut smart hai Shivaay"

"Om, tu stress mat le. Till she doesn't affect you, ignore her."

Omkaara closed his eyes and clenched his fist. He wished it was so easy to let go; so easy to ignore what she portrayed as her love for her jatadhari- which he knew she referred to him. The whole world had known they were married; the whole world knew her husband had rejected her- they just didn't know that he was her husband. He felt bad for her mother who had always supported her. Something in him told him that her love for him was true; but she was a poor princess who needed money to maintain their reputation and for that losing a finger.. tch tch... making her lover losing a finger would not have been a big task.

"O, ek baat kahu?"

"Bol"

"Hume kisi pe believe krne se pehle time lena chahiye, ye sach hai par iska matlab ye bhi nahi ki hume decide kar lena chahiye ki wo galat hai"

Rudra was kindling the doubt that Om already had in mind relating to Gauri. He got annoyed at the fact that these things were so confusing- to interpret a person's actions and more so, their intentions. Anyways, for him the most important work had been done. He would soon attend the celebrations for third/fourth day of gangaur and take a leave soon then closing the chapter of this girl forever.

P.S.you all know what you gotta do !! And please do comment if you wanted a pm and I've missed anyone Sorry for the same. 😉

Cheers!

Appy

Edited by appynehra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Res me first yay😃... Finally you updated... Thanks a ton
Edited by ....Anabella... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Roselind

The 1st shot is A-W-E-S-O-M-E...👍🏼⭐️

Palace in the midst of desert with women who are filled with love, hope & dream...😃& the cherry on cake is the Marwari language... I am already loving the story, Appy...😊😊
So the scolding part is done by Rajmata Sahib, i guess...😒 & Maharani Mandira devi is defending Gauri like the sweetest supporting mom...🤗
Gauri does have a never-wavering faith on her Shankarji...😊😊
The Oberois are signing a deal with Gauri...well may be because she is a princess...but the best part is RiKara will meet...😃😊
Tej will be Tej...as always a jerk...can't he see the positive side ever...his never-ending complaints...😡🤢
So all Oberois came except ShaNky & Prinku...well good that Pinky didn't come, Tej hi kaafi hai...😉😛
Maharani's sevak, Rana ji gave warm welcome to the Oberois...😊
Rudra's antics...the way he said "No no I am Rudra Oberoi, not Rudra Sa", I cracked up...😆😆
Rudra ko nhi lata Om toh tension hi tension hota, ab wo hai toh pagalpan add karke entertainment ko badhawa dega...😉😆
Om & his sadness...😭...thnkxxx to Rudy he got ready to watch the celebration of Holi in the Palace...😃😊
Hope RiKara meets soon & the misunderstandings between them get cleared...

Continue soon...😃😊


I am so glad u are liking it.
haha!! well well for the misundertandings part you have to wait a bit... 😉
Stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

Res me first yay😃... Finally you updated... Thanks a ton


haha! yea! thanks for keeping patience!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Awsum update!!!
Hope Om sees past his misunderstandings abt Gauri...
N know the real her...
Continue soon
Thnx for pm

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