RiKaraSS-Ishqbazon ki had!(With an SLB twist) Index upd,p1,13/4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome

Wow!!!

Thank God no swetalana... So we are going to have a royal affair.. Over here... Interesting... Continue soon

Hello guys,

And here I am with the first shot of this SS. Some references have also been taken form paulo Coehlo (very few though). Also let me know if some dialogues are not understandable. Hope you enjoy reading. Keen on knowing your feedback!

Shot-1

It was a perfect ancient palace where old kings would have stayed; in the middle of the desert which looked unending as was her love for him- her husband who would never look back. But the women of desert knew only waiting, dream and hope. The husbands would go for earning and return years later or perhaps, never at all. Her father had died long back and yet it was the love for him which fulfilled her mother.

Bawri hai re thari chori'

(Your daughter is crazy)

Bawri na hai bas isaq krti hai'

(She is not crazy, she is just in love)

Badi ayi thi na tu, usse bareily bhagane wali, ki kaam kre aur sachool ki parai karle- ke boli thi, apne pairo pe khadi h jaye chori, vyapar ka kuch na hone wala . Ab dekh ke hogya, na chori byahata rahi na kawari. Rajsi jamana koni raha ab ki thari chori koi rajkumari ki tarah dekhego'

(You sent her to Bareily so that she does some schooling while earning, what did you say, let her be independent as the business is going nowhere. But, see what has happened- neither is she married nor single. It's no more the time of kings that your daughter is going to be treated as a princess)

Jo bhi kiyo uss aadmi ne kiyo. Apni maasi jisne usse itne pyar se rakha ki kapde ke kaam ke sath dasvi paas kar jaaye, usne mar jaane deti. Arre kuch thik karna hai toh ane choro ne choriyo ki ijjat karna sikhao.

(Whatever happened was done by Kali Thakur. She couldn't have left her aunt who kept her so nicely that she at least completed her studies till class 10. If you want to improve something, teach your sons to respect girls)

She heard through the corridor; what was being talked about between her grandmother and mother. She remembered how she'd run away from her house with her mother's help- who weren't afraid to do that even for their so called respect- people still revered them as royal families- yet, her mother didn't want it to come in between her dreams. She had faked her name. She looked at her bygone school years- hadn't it been for Kali Thakur she'd probably be getting on with her career and college studies. She had come back as a married woman or perhaps as someone who was deeply in love with one she considered her husband; learning what her dadisa had prohibited her to leave from the palace.

Then she remembered him; his straightened hair and his hippie-ish appearance; Jatadhari hippie was his name from her. He had full rights to disown the marriage as her but she chose otherwise and rest she had left on her Shankar ji.

Anyway, she had to get ready for tomorrow. She had promised her love not to come in between her dreams. She had planned to start a hotel business, something she actively used to think and discuss about; with whoever she deemed fit, back in Bareily. Tomorrow, they would come; The Oberois, with whom she was going to sign the deal.

(The Jodhpur airport)

Two huge charter flights had arrived. The Oberois had set their foot on the historical land. Tej had been constantly cribbing about the heat till they reached the car to take them to the palace in Jaisalmer.

(The Haveli)

Tej didn't know whether to be proud or angry: hadn't he always wanted Omkaara to enter into business. Today, immediately after the Kali Thakur's land; here he was, to crack another deal, in fact, one of the biggest deals for the Oberois. A part of him, unaffected by his ego, wished that he instead of his so-called brother was standing with him in the deal but his ego that had been majorly hurt by Omkaara in past few weeks made him feel angry. He knew all this was simply to show him down.

All the Oberois except Shakti, Pinky and Priyanka had come on the current queen's invitation. She'd personally invited them.

Padharo sa. Rajasthan ki maati thara swagat krti hai. Omkaara ji, yeh hotel ki paryojna bahut kamyab hone wali hai.'

(Padharo is a welcoming phrase like saying come, Rajasthan welcomes you.Omkaara ji, this hotel project is going to be very successful.)

Woh bhi dekha jaega Rana ji. Aapne mujhe family ke sath invite kia, uske liye thanks.'

(We'll see that. You invited me with family, thanks.)

main toh maharani sa ka sevak hun Oberoi sahib. Maharani sa ka sochna tha ke abi holi aur gangaur hai ek hafte mein toh thaare parivar ko acha lagega'

(I am a servant of rani ji. Rani ji thought your family would like to see the gangaur festival that is in a week after holi)

In a matter of moments, few ladies came with a thalli to welcome them. Two ladies decked up in colourful ghagra-cholis accompanied by royal mannersims arrived.

Aap hai badi maharani sahib, Dhankor Baisa, maharajadhiraj ki maa aur ye hai maharani sahib, mandira devi, Maharajadhiraj ki patni.'

(Introducing the two ladies, first being the mother of the current king and the other his wife.)

Wow, I never knew that log aaj bhi kings and queens hote hai.'

The elder queen smiled at the chuckling Rudra Oberoi noticing his excitement on the royal backround.

Ab toh ye sab naam ka reh gya hai, Rudra sa, yahi naam hai na apka. Bas log thodi izzat de dete hai hamare purvajo ko.'

"No no I am Rudra Oberoi, not Rudra Sa"

The queens and the help chuckled.

"Jee Marwari mei ji ki jagah sa ka prayog kiya jata hai. Isliye Maharni sa apko Rudra ji ki jagah Rudra sa keh rahi hai"

The Oberoi's were amazed at her knowing even Rudra's name. However, Rudy was a little confused, hence, he shifted to Om's side.

Ye purvaj kya hota hai O??'

Ancestors'

Om mentally smacked himself for getting Rudra here. He had come for serious business and his little brother would be asking multiple questions every now and then on the hindi/Marwari being spoken.

Aap log fares hokar aa jaiye, thodi hi der mei bache holi khelna chalu kar denge'

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As the Oberois came down, they observed the extravagant holi that everyone had started to play. However, it didn't feel much different. Rudra went on to take colours and started putting them on his family members and some friendly locals.

And here, he sat in his room. His life had become colourless. He had promised to marry a girl so as to buy time to prove her wrong. He was married to a girl who was no different from the person he had disliked the second most in his entire life. The ring on the phone brought him out of the nothingness he had been in for the past fifteen minutes.

You know I don't like all this Rudra, don't force me.'

Uff! Okay! I'll come! But keep your promise.'

Rudra, with his antics, had somehow managed to convince Omkaara to come down and see the celebrations.

Perhaps, her belief on her Shankarji was true. And perhaps, he needed to know love- in its purest form.

Cheers,

Appy

awesome love it yaar
so om gauri is married like in the show but background story of gauri is different
waiting for next update

This is marvelous...the feels, the excitement...the absolute brilliance. Just wow! I'm still dazed!

ok i m really like really excited after reading the track ...i hope u have started writing the next part as i m really impatient to see oms reaction seeing her as princess

Awesome Appy...

Originally posted by: smrithy14

awesome love it yaar
so om gauri is married like in the show but background story of gauri is different
waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Sakura24

This is marvelous...the feels, the excitement...the absolute brilliance. Just wow! I'm still dazed!

I'm totally in for this ride please continue soon!

Love,

Sakura