Ch 10 HOTTTT CHAPTER-PRECAP UPDATED Pg 24!! ANSHI FF: {My D@rk Lover} - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start...looking forward to read more. Please do PM me when you update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow.. loved the first oart.. update soon... and do pm me the future parts:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you guys for your comments. Will pm the next part once I update.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 1(b): THE GIRL IN THE RAIN
I gasped...
My mouth was open...
My pupil reflected 'HER' tiny form and to say the least he couldn't take his eyes off her.
She wasn't beautiful in a classical way, She had a sculpted figure which was neither thin nor bulky but just perfect for a girl in her early twenties.She wore a white flowing salwar with her dupatta perfectly draped on one side of her body. Her clothes were moistened by the heavy downpour, opening up a perfect view of her curvilinear waist. Her glossy skin radiated like white pearls as the droplets of rain settled like dew on the exposed parts of her dazzling form.
I did not realize for how long I have been goggling her or how lost I was soaking into her beauty, her innocence or her charm. I just endlessly eyed her like a helpless baby.
I could see that she was struggling to balance her umbrella under her chin, between her shoulders, by tilting her head. I wondered why was she trying to do that and cursed that bottom spring (of umbrella) brushing against her soft skin.
Once she was satisfied with the grip, I noticed that she started kneeling down to reach the floor of the muddy road. I instantly jumped forward on his seat, not letting her image disappear from my blue orbs.

She stretched out her hands to shelter a poor puppy lying helpless under the raining skies. She carried that poor thing and brought it near her whole breasts, taking it into a warm hug.

Her enticing, hazel eyes gazed at the puppy over her puffy, heart shaped lips. Her crescent shaped eyelashes inclined slightly seeing it in pain. She got up with a jerk causing her loosely held umbrella fly away in the direction of rough wind.
I noticed her expression changing from sensitive to worry. I watched her drown in pellets falling from above. I wanted to help her but I was too dumb at that point to even move. I had lost my sanity.
I was amazed to see the irritating pitter patter fall softly on her slender figure. She was beautiful. Her flowing, straight black hair was shrinking as teeny streams of water washed her flawless back.
Something radiated from within that rendered her irresistible to him. In her ordinariness she was stunning...absolutely stunning!

In the mean while, she ran towards her car parked on the other side of road, placed the puppy of the seat carefully and moved to occupy the driver's seat. It was only then that I realized that she was going away.
"Shit!", I exclaimed in horror. I got down from her car to stop her but it was too late. She drove off and I stood there blank watching the smoke disappear from the streets.
I was standing there right in the middle of a street, drenched in rain (something I despise) looking for a GIRL who had turned up from nowhere and conquered my senses.
I ran my fingers throw my wet hair in frustration.
"What the f**k!!!! How could I lose myself to a girl. No! this can never happen. I am Shivay Singh Oberoi! I am evil. I am the king. No one can ever ever ever conquer me.I am here only to take revenge from those bas***ds who mercilessly took away my family from me and destroyed my existence and nobody on this land can stop ME from doing that!"
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His eyes turned red in anger and his body radiated heat. He jumped in to his car and headed straight towards his destination "BAKSHI MANSION".
He looked at the royal villa with vengeance and his lips curved in an evil fashion.

"THE COUNTDOWN BEGINS", he smirked.


Hey guys hope I did not disappoint you all. Please hit like and leave behind your comments. I had to pen down the above part from Shivay's point of view and later continue it as a third person.Well, I have never written anything so elaborate as this before so please excuse my mistakes and please give me your suggestions.

And, please leave me a buddy request in case you want me to pm the updated parts

PART 2: WE MEET AGAIN Pg 6


Edited by AsyaManeetAnshi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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had a great read before going to bed...loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome.Loved it
is she belong to that family which he wants to take revenge
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome.Loved it

is she belong to that family which he wants to take revenge

You will get to know soon as the story goes ahead. Thankyou for your comment😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-pri

had a great read before going to bed...loved it...

Thankyou for your comment.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Nice update
countinue soon 😊 good night 😊
Edited by zyrah17 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have a feeling that Anika belongs to the family from which Shivay wants to take revenge...
It's getting interesting...
Loved it❤️
Continue soon 😊

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