The Perfect Reunion :Mr & Mrs.SSO Shivika DS (19/04/17) updtd!

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

wow such peaceful and sweet update

please do continue

bye sumi

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FoundLife

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Which background scene or intermediate would you like to read before Shivaay's kidnap?

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travelholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: MariaRebecca
Which background scene or intermediate would you like to read before Shivaay's kidnap?

why not weave ur own story and forget about the kidnap😆

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FoundLife

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: NYCForever

why not weave ur own story and forget about the kidnap😆

I may in another one, but this thread coincides with the track, just some background scenes and in between scenes they could have shown.

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FoundLife

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Nargis--
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Simply beautiful! I lovethatthey will have thispeaceful night tothemselvesto make splendid memories. There is nothing morepeaceful andfulfilling than just having some quality time withthe one you love, even if there is no discussion in words. 😳</font>

Exactly, how I hope that the show would have addressed these moments. How I hope they would have shown billu's tadap of missing Annika

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Why not weave a jhakaas scene around him gifting her the kadaas...you could loop in Malika's kadaas as the impetus for Shivvay to gift her these...this way he is in a way declaring his love and recognizing hers too. Didn't Mallika tell Annika to wear the kadaas as a sign that she has found love...not just that she loves, but that she is actually a priority in someone's life?? Would love to get into his head...and in essence you are refreshing 2 scenes for us!!!😛😉

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: MariaRebecca

Exactly, how I hope that the show would have addressed these moments. How I hope they would have shown billu's tadap of missing Annika

The glutton for punishment that I am...I am still holding out for such scenes...its still not too late!! I want him to pine for her!!

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Anushka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Why not weave a jhakaas scene around him gifting her the kadaas...you could loop in Malika's kadaas as the impetus for Shivvay to gift her these...this way he is in a way declaring his love and recognizing hers too. Didn't Mallika tell Annika to wear the kadaas as a sign that she has found love...not just that she loves, but that she is actually a priority in someone's life?? Would love to get into his head...and in essence you are refreshing 2 scenes for us!!!😛😉

This would be so amazing!❤️

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Ankita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Ok how about aww and aww moments 😆

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FoundLife

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Posted: 8 years ago

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The Moments of Bliss
Mr.SSO
Mr.ASSO

I didn't know what to feel, then how would I know what to say. I loved it when stood behind talking to herself and stealing glances at me. I knew that she wanted to tell something, something that I would have longed to hear. The blush that rose to her cheeks made naughty ideas float through my head. Teasing her and holding her close were some of the things that I had recently developed a liking for. But I never expected her to say such things to me, keeping her ego aside.

"You are the most important person in my life! Your happiness means mine, You are the reason for me to live". She trusted me with her life. What more could I ask for, I didn't deserve this, the insensitive beast I was. I stared at her in disbelief as her eyes shone brightly, she had meant every word of hers.

In the surprise and excitement an 'aww' escaped my mouth.

My tadibaaz billi was back, she had taken my 'aww' for what 'hi-fi girls' say after seeing cute puppies. Which had ended up in she throwing water on me in full tadi. My brother would continue pulling my leg forever telling that I was afraid of my billi.

I was completely pissed off when he had neither acknowledged nor reciprocated my confession. I had thrown water on him, I knew he must be angry. We had brought Saumya back. A new showdown was going on in the Mansion. I don't know what that woman meant, Shivaay was in danger again? The next ten days would be difficult for him? I tried to keep my mind off any superstitions or anxieties.

I knew that he was bad with words and hence whenever he managed to say something they would mean a lot. I wanted him to tell me what his 'aww' actually meant. How I loved his lessons!

I woke up to find him having his coffee, he always brewed a less bitter version with extra sugar for me. Little did he know, that I had developed a liking to the exact same version he has.

My baggad billa looked adorable as he stepped back in horror while I sipped his 'kaali coffee' fearing that I'll spit it all over him. The surprise and fondness that played on his face while I drank from his cup, made all my efforts to develop a liking to the bitter drink worthwhile. He held me close and explained to me that he had loved to hear all that I had told him. He told me that he couldn't find words to express his emotions so they were replaced with an 'aww'. Oh, I just love my billu eventhough he is too complicated for me!

I knew that my 'Paannika' hadn't figured the exact meaning of my 'aww', she was making wierd sounds for every other incident that took place after that. I had purposely took Mom's bangle and made her wear that so that I wouldn't end up fueling her insecurities. I knew Annika was hurt but I also knew that she would understand better.

I managed to confess my feelings in the best possible way I knew. I didn't want her to be afraid of anything not even of me, I promised her to be her Sun. I couldn't control my emotions when she finally managed to use my 'aww' at the right place. She stood clueless as I hugged her tight. I just love teasing my billi and making her blush. Oh I love this, she is hugging me now, thank you God!

'Aww' My baggad billa is becoming Romantic Singh Oberoi. I felt a little bit low when he failed to notice my chaand bracelet. She loves his watch so much, little does she know that he has big koon & kandaan. Then Khanaji called Shivaay outside, O Isn't this what that woman said, I'm afraid. But he tells that's just a coincidence, ok. I irritate him with a wrong usage of his 'aah' sorry 'aww'.

There comes SSO version 2, he is so cute! How he tells such sweet things to me, still in full taadi. Be happy chandu he knows you, there is hope, I tell her."I'll be your sun, no need to be afraid Annika, and you are my moonlight". Finally I manage to use his 'aww' at the right time. Oh he is hugging you Annika, no you are dreaming! Uff stupid girl, he is! Stop blushing and go hug him! Oh, this so heavenly!

I was lost in thoughts yet again, of her and every other thing that kept happening. She was roaming around in that peach coloured kurti which she had worn when we got caught in the jungle. Mallika had called me up a few minutes ago, she had squealed excitedly on how she knew that I'll fall for her. Her call reminded me of a letter and a gift that she had given Annika once, for patching up her and SVR.

An idea flashed in my mind I sneaked out without further explanations.

I stood dumbfounded as he slid those bangles over my wrist. Big diamonds were set in the polished golden kangans. What did they cost? I stared at him in disbelief. "Whatever they cost, they become priceless only when you wear them". What is this, a dream or a mirage, what is that I see in his eyes?

"My husband has given me a lot" What have I given her pain, torture and insult? I promise you to keep you happy Annika as long as I live!

Thank you so much for supporting me!

Special thanks to Nargis and Anushka, hoping that I didn't let you down!

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Shot 9: The Art of Missing with Mr. & Mrs. SSO

Edited by MariaRebecca - 8 years ago

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