Shivika FF : Fighting A Losing Battle :Chapter30 Part1 Pg144 - Page 77

Originally posted by: bworm

Beautifully written.

Loved each and every part of the story.

Darn it...you made me cry.

Would love to see. ..the wedding and fights.

Originally posted by: pri12

Superb...

I loved their talk in the hospital bed ..

Shivay is being strong for both of them

I know their love will conquer everything..

I want them to win this battle ..

Originally posted by: alinaza

Thank you for posting. I love this story and I LOVE the Oberois and extended family. They are the coolest, cutest, funniest, most loving and supportive family of all the serials that have been on TV and you do them full justice in your characterisations of them in this story.

One of the things I loved in the serial and continue to love in this story (apart from the fantastic Rudy) is the jeeja-saala duo of Shivaaye and Sahil. They are so cute and fun together and have a fantastic rapport and both take such adorable advantage of Anika. Also, the scene between Anika and Sahil made me so emotional, Sahil's world is Anika and everything she's done has been for him.

I think the most beautiful scene in this chapter is Shivaaye finding his faith in Anika and Anika making Shivaaye her faith. This was tremendous considering SSO's distrust of romantic relationships and the constancy of anyone apart from his brothers; and Anika chosing to let go of her distrust of fate for Shivaaye.

Nooo Shivaaye, no court marriage quickie! Let the Oberoi clan, Sahil and Anika celebrate her new lease on life with full masti and mazedaar full on all out punjabi wedding rituals (and us readers too lol). Lmao, I have to hand it to Cheapde Singh Oberoi, even in the middle of tension he keeps his eye on the prize ("depends on what you're willing to do to get your job back" lol).

The end of this chapter is in a way, the end of this arc of the story. The closing of the operation theatre door changes everything. When it opens in the coming chapter, everyone and everything will change.

I have so many thoughts and questions though: will we get a chapter dealing with the 7 hour surgery wait featuring the O'bros stressing together, will Shivika have the big fat indian wedding, what has Shakti been plotting while Shivaaye has been out of the office, will Pinky accept Anika, will we get love stories for Omkara and Rudra...

I cant count the ways I love this story (I am no Shakespeare) but it is incredible in how the reader becomes part of the story and so emotionally involved. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Originally posted by: moon99

That was AMAZING!

I don't know if I can explain what I felt while reading this chapter
Every line gave me a ray of hope to think and believe that it's going to be fine and you know what, that's what I'm going to believe

You were phenomenal in this chapter... I mean they way you illustrated Anika convincing Shivaay, they way they discussed their future, and they way the family supports them, it's all just so heart touching

I seriously love this FF even though it at times really scares me 😆 , it seriously is one of my favourites ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART 😃 😃 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

Originally posted by: NYCForever

bhagwan ke naam pe update de de 😆😆😆