Shivika FF : Fighting A Losing Battle :Chapter30 Part1 Pg144

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: crazy-pri
Ufff!!!!!!;; thus is d best chapter so far...fear is gripping my heart...God sooo excited & scared at d same time for d next chappy...plz update soon...

Thanks a lot!! It's my favorite too!!

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: panjami
Oh sweety u r such a fab writter... loved each word u wrote. I dont want this ff to end ever. They r just made for each other... Hw it would be their life after weddng.. I want ro read that tooo

Thank you!!

I'll definitely write a chapter or epilogue about their after marriage life😳

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
I am still crying after reading it twice ..no words are enough to praise this chapter or how amzing a writer you are !! How I wish this story never ends ...this is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read !!

Thank you!! Thank you so much!!

It is definitely an emotional one so i can understand...if it's worth reading twice then nothing can make me more happy😳

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: radhika007
awesome please update soon

I'll try to update soon!

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: aichaab
oh what a beautiful surprise to see an update when you least expect it.

It was an amzing piece but emotional. Keeping my fingers cross and hoping for the best like the Oberois.

Yeah i had written this one along with the previous chapter so i had it ready😊

Exactly! Let's cross our fingers and hope for the best!!

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: rainqrazy
I cried with this chapter. It was just so poignant. The love, the affection, closeness, bonding everything!

All the reactions that i'm reading are so overwhelming😊

Thank you!!!!

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Divya333

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Posted: 8 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Oh Carp...like Shivvay... I was so excited and so hopeful that the doctor in Zurich would be able to help Annika... but towards the end my hope is shattered along with Shivvay's strength and belief that Annika or rather they could win this battle! I am a firm believer in miracles...please don't separate Shivika!!!😭

sorry wrong post techinacal problem

Edited by Divya333 - 8 years ago

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 8 years ago

#748

Thank you for posting. I love this story and I LOVE the Oberois and extended family. They are the coolest, cutest, funniest, most loving and supportive family of all the serials that have been on TV and you do them full justice in your characterisations of them in this story.

One of the things I loved in the serial and continue to love in this story (apart from the fantastic Rudy) is the jeeja-saala duo of Shivaaye and Sahil. They are so cute and fun together and have a fantastic rapport and both take such adorable advantage of Anika. Also, the scene between Anika and Sahil made me so emotional, Sahil's world is Anika and everything she's done has been for him.

I think the most beautiful scene in this chapter is Shivaaye finding his faith in Anika and Anika making Shivaaye her faith. This was tremendous considering SSO's distrust of romantic relationships and the constancy of anyone apart from his brothers; and Anika chosing to let go of her distrust of fate for Shivaaye.

Nooo Shivaaye, no court marriage quickie! Let the Oberoi clan, Sahil and Anika celebrate her new lease on life with full masti and mazedaar full on all out punjabi wedding rituals (and us readers too lol). Lmao, I have to hand it to Cheapde Singh Oberoi, even in the middle of tension he keeps his eye on the prize ("depends on what you're willing to do to get your job back" lol).

The end of this chapter is in a way, the end of this arc of the story. The closing of the operation theatre door changes everything. When it opens in the coming chapter, everyone and everything will change.

I have so many thoughts and questions though: will we get a chapter dealing with the 7 hour surgery wait featuring the O'bros stressing together, will Shivika have the big fat indian wedding, what has Shakti been plotting while Shivaaye has been out of the office, will Pinky accept Anika, will we get love stories for Omkara and Rudra...

I cant count the ways I love this story (I am no Shakespeare) but it is incredible in how the reader becomes part of the story and so emotionally involved. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

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moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#749

That was AMAZING!

I don't know if I can explain what I felt while reading this chapter
Every line gave me a ray of hope to think and believe that it's going to be fine and you know what, that's what I'm going to believe

You were phenomenal in this chapter... I mean they way you illustrated Anika convincing Shivaay, they way they discussed their future, and they way the family supports them, it's all just so heart touching

I seriously love this FF even though it at times really scares me 😆 , it seriously is one of my favourites ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART 😃 😃 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: Guesswhat
It was a wonderful updat ... yeah no problem with not getting them married... it was beautiful your way ... give the next update very soon ... please update faster till Anika wakes up .. after that it is ok iTunes slow down

Oh but they will get married soon😉

I'll try to update the next one quickly and then slow down 😛