Shivika FF : Fighting A Losing Battle :Chapter30 Part1 Pg144

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travelholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#631

When is the next update sweety

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#632

hehhe only shivaay

last par was awesome

please do continue

bye sumi

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Cutie.gb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#633

Very good ff read it in one go...pls do update soon

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
Awesome !! U are an amazing writer Carpe ..i love both Shivay and Annika in ur story ...they are always in character whether they are angry, happy or fighting..that's the best thing !! It is going to be a beautiful journey fighting this battle together and I hope it ends on a happy note !

Waiting for the next chapter 😉

Thank you so much😊

I love my Shivaay and Anika too😳

Originally posted by: sky-if
Annika's flashback about losing her parents and getting to know she had very little time was heart wrenching.. And this..
"I'm afraid, she admits in a small voice.
"I'm afraid too, he says.
we as the audience are too.. but rooting big time for a miracle cure😃

Haha! Don't be afraid..all's well that ends well😛

Originally posted by: RushaSen
Hello dear!!
Please suggest me some proper adjectives to appreciate your writing skill!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ It's really wowww!!! ⭐️ The special thing is that here Annika is independent,educated.. She is emotionally vulnerable..She doesn't trust her luck.. Shivaay is tensed,frustrated because the love of his life is suffering from life threatening disease!! 😭 Shivaay is gonna fight a losing battle according to Annika..
Rudy is as usual cutiepie!! 😆 Dadi is so supportive!! 😳
I can't describe the beauty of your ff by words!! Just loved it.. Update soon!! 😃 If possible,please pm me.. 😳

With love,
Rusha

Aww..thanks a lot😃

You summed it up really well!!

Originally posted by: Mystery1234
Amazing
I read the two chapters in one go
Shivay's anger is justified and so was Anika's stubborness
Anika is leaning on Shivay now...It is her turn to get lucky
I just love this story of yours
Awesome
Continue soon😊

Yeah finally she's seeing the positives of letting people in.

Thank you so much😊

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: KashiTessa
Yaar you describes everything so clearly, not a word more not a word less.
Brilliant update.
Waiting for next update.
Continue soon

Thank you that's a great compliment😊

Originally posted by: panjami
Amazing update... Each word said by them is precise and sharp... I want this as a book so as to read it in a go...

Thank you for the compliment..really appreciate it!

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Beautiful update
Pinky and Shakti are just 😡
Anika and Shivay's last scene was superb
Update soon

Thank you!!!😊

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: pri12
Amazing...Shivay will fight for her with her destiny...
This is love when you hope against the hope..The Great wall of Shivay singh Oberoi will protect her..plz continue soon

Ah! Great Wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi! That's awesome😊

Originally posted by: shifa124
one of the cutest, heartbreakingly painful, yet most beautiful stories on Shivika ❤️

That's so sweet..thank you😊

Originally posted by: ithihaas
Anu,
I am running short of words to describe your amazing story:-)
Every time I think this is the best part of the story, the next update proves me wrong. The story keeps getting better and better with every update. I wish that this story never ends 😉
I simply love, love and love this Shivaay & Annika.
I loved the conversation between both of them. Life becomes little easy when you know there is that someone in your life to take care of you, some one who will be there with you no matter what the end result is. No one has seen the future but the thought of having some one by your side in your journey makes it enjoyable.

Thank you for the update.

Aww..you always say the best things!!

Yeah i wish i can keep going but this will most probably end in the next 5 chapters..

Thank you for being there through the journey😊

Originally posted by: alinaza
Thank you so much for posting. I love, love, love this story.
Its amazing that even though this an entirely different story, the brilliance of your writing is that every character is true to form. Shivaay is devastated but thinking logically and making plans; Anika is independent but so emotionally vulnerable and doesnt trust her fate; Rudra is as usual so funny and blase.

This chapter was so incredible Anika let Shivaay in and decided to trust that just maybe things may be ok; Pinky got a slight understanding that this Anika might care about Shivaay just as much as her.

Your plot and writing is absolutely compelling. I truly hope that this is a long FF because I would be so sad for it to end.

Cannot wait for the next chapter!

Thank you!! I loved your comment!

Keep reading!!😊

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: bworm
Amazing. Loved it.
These two are perfect for each other.
Shakti is an ass...please drown him.
Pinky is a tad better.
Omru and dadi rock.

Eagerly waitING for next one.

Yeah they are perfect for each other😳

Haha! Shakti is definitely an ass..

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: rohnit_ruhi
Awww... That was too too sweet n incredibly written... U r writing magician :)
Will be waiting for more

Oh a magician! That's a new one..thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: jeenal20
Hmmm.. Good to ser shivaay om and. Tudy anfdadi there for anika.. And now ani also agreed for shivaays help in her treatment...
Wohoo this is going gr8

Plzzz cont soon

Yeah..finally things are falling into place😊

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome 👏
Loved it totally 😛
you beautifully portrayed the emotions of both Annika and shivaay...He is too afraid of loosing her but he picked up himself and trying to give her confidence...He will surely save her

Yay! Shivaay singh oberoi to the rescue!!😃

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: NYCForever
Brilliant is the word

as u know, i love the way u right - have hounded u but never spent too much time appreciating your writing, so here is my very feeble attempt!
initial reaction just wow 👏👏👏

i love everything about this ff - especially a smart, educated, independent anika

i love how even in misery they are in character! this shivaay actually uses his brains and gets the facts right

i love how they still keep fighting and have not left their stubbornness behind 😆

also the best part about the last update was that u clarified that its shivaay's battle - as anika said to him that u are fighting a loosing battle whereas all along i thought it was anika's battle!

i loved it so much! i love how shivay is the beacon of hope, and how we cant even blame anika - she is planning her death as shivaay pointed out based on her life experiences - ufff too good

i cant wait for the epilogue - these two will be fighting even while making love to each other 🤣

What can i say? This is my feeble thank you to you.

Thank you for loving this story as much as me.

And that's a fab point. Yes, this is Shivaay's battle😊

And you will get the epilogue😆

Originally posted by: cestlavie
This. Is. What. You. Call. Beautiful

Incredible!!

Thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: rarefan
I so wish she had said okay 😆

Haha! Then he would have kissed her..but their first kiss should be special,right?😉

Originally posted by: CrzyPulviophile
Best Update Ever

Thank you😊

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Amazing

Thank you!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Brilliant Update..

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: Safnaz
It's really amazing...

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: Rishiak47
Superb update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: angeldream14
living life with fear od death is d worst punishment when u hv a lot to live for
Anika is scared but Shivaay is more devastated

Yeah..that is so true!