Shivika FF : Fighting A Losing Battle :Chapter30 Part1 Pg144

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travelholic

@travelholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#611

Brilliant is the word

as u know, i love the way u right - have hounded u but never spent too much time appreciating your writing, so here is my very feeble attempt!

initial reaction just wow 👏👏👏

i love everything about this ff - especially a smart, educated, independent anika

i love how even in misery they are in character! this shivaay actually uses his brains and gets the facts right

i love how they still keep fighting and have not left their stubbornness behind 😆

also the best part about the last update was that u clarified that its shivaay's battle - as anika said to him that u are fighting a loosing battle whereas all along i thought it was anika's battle!

i loved it so much! i love how shivay is the beacon of hope, and how we cant even blame anika - she is planning her death as shivaay pointed out based on her life experiences - ufff too good

i cant wait for the epilogue - these two will be fighting even while making love to each other 🤣

Edited by NYCForever - 8 years ago

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cestlavie

@cestlavie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#612

This. Is. What. You. Call. Beautiful

Incredible!!

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#613

Awesome 👏

Loved it totally 😛

you beautifully portrayed the emotions of both Annika and shivaay...He is too afraid of loosing her but he picked up himself and trying to give her confidence...He will surely save her

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#614

Anu,

I am running short of words to describe your amazing story:-)

Every time I think this is the best part of the story, the next update proves me wrong. The story keeps getting better and better with every update. I wish that this story never ends 😉

I simply love, love and love this Shivaay & Annika.

I loved the conversation between both of them. Life becomes little easy when you know there is that someone in your life to take care of you, some one who will be there with you no matter what the end result is. No one has seen the future but the thought of having some one by your side in your journey makes it enjoyable.

Thank you for the update.

Edited by ithihaas - 8 years ago

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rarefan

@rarefan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#615

I so wish she had said okay 😆

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jeenal

@jeenal20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#616

Hmmm.. Good to ser shivaay om and. Tudy anfdadi there for anika.. And now ani also agreed for shivaays help in her treatment...

Wohoo this is going gr8

Plzzz cont soon

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 8 years ago

#617

Thank you so much for posting. I love, love, love this story.

Its amazing that even though this an entirely different story, the brilliance of your writing is that every character is true to form. Shivaay is devastated but thinking logically and making plans; Anika is independent but so emotionally vulnerable and doesnt trust her fate; Rudra is as usual so funny and blase.

This chapter was so incredible Anika let Shivaay in and decided to trust that just maybe things may be ok; Pinky got a slight understanding that this Anika might care about Shivaay just as much as her.

Your plot and writing is absolutely compelling. I truly hope that this is a long FF because I would be so sad for it to end.

Cannot wait for the next chapter!