'Rohit v/s Shivvay ' edited part three (pg 12) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: asya34


Thank you dear Shanry... I have just emerged from a writers block and was worried that the hastily penned OS would be sloppy... I was just having too much fun writing it and imagining Shivvay in the last bit ...lol
I am such a sadist i tell you 😆


Well, my dear extremely talented fun loving sadist, just keep bringing it on 👍🏼🤗
Edited by shanry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
This was mind blowing... 👏
Shivay played his cards very well but was outwitted by our very own Panika with a smirk..
These two are such a Tadibaaz
Loved it❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

ITS SURE...in future saahil will flip to shivaays side...and i dnt knw why i feel this...sometimes when i saw saahil.. i saw a junior sso in him..same attittude...there is always a style of speaking...
Isn't it!! I thought only I felt that they were so similar. It is no wonder Annika love both of them. They are both almost alike ...lol
Just like Shivvay is drawn to Annika because she is so much like Rudy and a little like Om.

he is takkar to shivaay.. most importantly both love anika so much to the point of infinity...
That they do 😃
Rohit..o god i really want this guy in the show..the 4min imaginary phone conv was more superb than the whole creep daksh track...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shonasyl

Oh i'm so happy rohit ji

Good start keep it up ❤️

Asya you're the best... maybe you don't know but i'm Rohit ji biggest fan 😳...
lol .. bechara Shivvay he first lost Annika to him and now he is losing you as well... kya burey din aa gaye hai SSO ke ... 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

This was AAAWWEEESSSOMMEE!!

How I would love to see Annika doing the check mate once again at Shivaay.. with the smirk and the Tadi!😈
He played the cards well... but it was outsmarted by Anika.
I loved how u just bought it out! A treat for sure.👏😃
Poor Shivaay... Ab jhelo Mr.Rohit ko... 😆 🤣 🤣
Fantastic wrk Asya!🤗
U nailed it nd I Loved it!😉

Love Sharmi.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
This is awesome!!

Shivaay is hilarious with the money growing on trees
Anika outsmarts him which I love

Amazing job! Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Seems everyone wants to see the 'Jealous Singh Oberoi" so here is part 2 by popular demand..lol

Enjoy guys!!


"Annika!!! Annika!!", I called out walking into the kitchen, still in my PJ's to the horror of my staff, wondering where the Devil the woman had gotten to at 7am in the morning. I really had no time to play this "hunt and chase" game this early in the day and that too before I had my first cup of steaming hot Expresso of the morning.

It was very annoying, to say the least, to wake up this morning and not find Mrs. Annika Singh Oberoi sleeping blissfully curled up next to me. It was, to be completely honest, a bit disconcerting to not see her face the first thing I woke up. I was so used to watching her sleeping while i lay next to her, memorizing her features to last me through the day, that it had become kind of like a meditative morning routine for me now.

But today she had gone and broken this perfectly set routine, that I had gotten used to for the past few weeks, and had pulled a 'complete Houdini' on me for some reason. I had tried calling her but her phone kept coming busy and she had insisted that she use her old one that would not be able to accept more than one call. It was practically pre historic and only fit to break walnuts with as she had claimed.

"Aaannniiikkkaaa!!!", I thundered as I almost ran into a very frightened Prinku.

"Bhabhi has left already Bhaiya..", she answered softly almost afraid that I would yell at her for my wife leaving without informing me.

"Left!!??... what do you mean left!! Where has she gone???!!", I continued to thunder and was answered offhandedly by my very composed mum brushing past me in the hallway and making her way to the kitchen.

"With Rohit to her new office!! Where else do you think??", and she proceeded to instruct the staff about breakfast.

"Rohit!!! When did he come here??!!", I yelled almost bursting a vein as I felt a migraine coming on.

"Shivvay he came here at 6.45am as he wanted to get an early start with Annika and fill her in on all the new assignments that he had received emails for last week. What a hardworking young boy and so dedicated to his partnership deal to take the trouble to pick her up and drive her there. He and Annika will make a good team", mum said as she walked back and forth supervising the staff preparing and laying the breakfast table.

"Could you please stand still for a minute mum while you talk to me, so that I don't get dizzy watching you walk back and forth. I am bringing to feel a little sick doing that", I complained as I felt myself turn green with envy and sickness at the thought of that rascal driving off at 6.45am with my very lovely and naive wife beside him. I gripped the closest chair and lowered myself into it, mentally cursing myself for the other evening.

I felt my mum waddle over and fuss over me like a mother hen, cluck - clucking as she checked my temperature and scanned my face in worry but my brain had zoned out already with the image of Rohit swimming before my face. I sipped the water that Prinku poured for me and did not miss her slight teasing smile as she took the glass back from my hands.

"Did you try calling her Bhaiya?", she asked softly looking genuinely worried for me.

I shot her an annoyed look that would have answered the question.

"Call who??!!", inquired my clueless mom. "Who is it that you need to call Shivvay? And what is with this sudden sickness? I think you need to stay home and rest today. Cancel all you appointments and spend the day at home", she said stroking my hair.

"No!!", I yelled so suddenly that she gave a startled 'O My Mata' as she held her hand to her heart at that response.

"No", I repeated a much calmer voice as I stood up and strode away, trying her number again as I walked towards our bedroom. Now it said it was out of range!! Where in God's name was this office that it was out of range??!! I knew asking mum would be futile because she would not have bothered to ask Annika where it was she was working. She was not the typical MIL to my bad luck and afforded Annika the freedom of a modern DIL.

As I walked into our room and strode to the cupboard in anger, I saw it stuck there - a bright pink post it note.

"PLEASE DO NOT GO HUNTING ALL OVER THE HOUSE FOR ME. I HAVE LEFT FOR MY FIRST DAY OF WORK AND WILL BE HOME BY LUNCH, UNLESS WE DECIDE TO EAT LUNCH OUT. ENJOY YOUR PEACEFUL DAY WITHOUT MY EVER PRESENT ANNOYING PRESENCE - ASSO"



Part 3 - Page 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4811754/rohit-v-s-shivvay-edited-part-three-pg-12

Edited by asya34 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Well done again! I was all smiles reading this... keep it going!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
OMG.. Bagdabilla On fire.. gosh Anika U are so dead.. Do U seriously think.. he will leave U.. it's gonna be bad day for SSO... as ASSO is getting upper hand on him.. I love it so much.. yeah I am being sadistic.. but shiavy's puppy n hairan pareshan face makes me grin like an idiot.. 😆 Gosh.. last note.. in this update that thing made me ROFL.. really.. ASSO's sticky note for SSO... 🤣 sheesh man.. shivay is surely gonna stay in house.. planning how to murder anika when she will return home.. 😛 😆 Next update ka title 'Bagadbille Ki Bagawat' 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hahaha. .you are on a roll darling.
Love that you don't go the clichd jealousy ways.
This was so much fun
SSO taken in by his naive wife.

So my GM has a question. .. is this pre honeymoon or post it phase.
They are sleeping together. .but are they..ahem ☺️

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