'Rohit v/s Shivvay ' edited part three (pg 12)

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Mystery1234

@Mystery1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Bechare Shivay ki toh Oh My Mata hogayi...😆

Shivay's possessiveness is awsm.. 😉

Brilliant update👏

Loved it... ❤️

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sharmi

@lucky_princess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Aww...Asya!

U r adorable...😳

Well i never ever expected such a beautiful turn...u totally r from a different world of writers. U r unique in your own way...👏

Well i loved this update... Nd that line which robot said to Shivaay..was nice.

Poor Sanjana he scared the hell out that girl.

The end scene was the best... a kiss that sealed that she wss his...only his.😳

Awesome.. ... come back soon with something new of yours...😊

Love Sharmi.

Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago

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poemssyndrome

@poemssyndrome

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Oh Asya!
I needed this today! This was such a fun & soothing piece to read after an awefully tiring day!
I loved it!
And the ending! 😳 Beautiful!

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sky-if

@sky-if

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Haaye ! lovely !

I loved Rohith - setting up a business so his middle class biwi can remain independant - perhaps something SSO can learn 😉. Heartwarming to see that Annika will have another friend in Sanjana too.

Thank you for this lovely piece!

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shanry

@shanry

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

So sweet!!!

Especially the part about him caring and having, in his mind's eye, a world exclusive to Shivika.

❤️

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Pritha Roy

@pritzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Hahaha I loved it so much... Rohit equal to shivaay even in loving his wife 😆

I loved the last convo of shivIka...I loved the ShivHul convo, I loved the jealous shivaay searching his wife 😆

Wonderful Story babe 👏

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Shanaya (shona)

@Shonasyl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

I love you 🤗

You trully nailed it ❤️

It look so dreamy

Shivika rock che ❤️

Rohit ji is just amazing i love him so much but SSO is my jaan ❤️

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Ishqbaaaz101

@Ishqbaaaz101

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

A cute couple deserves a cute happy ending wala story and that's exactly what you did!

I love jealous Shivaay... he is the best!! I will never forget his reaction to Rohit and there is no way he was acting in that scene so that the Nafraatbaaaz wouldn't catch them. We all know that was genuine.

You did a great job showing his jealous side especially when he punched Rohit 🤣!!!

Definitely would like to see more of this Shivaay in the show!!